Unexpected :: [Mayur] :: Chapter 3 :: Page 48 - Page 22

Beautiful Upd.

Mahak before i begin my comment as usual a small line
i thank god for making me
i thank god fo making my hands
i thank god for making my fingers
i thank my techer for teaching me ABCD
WITHOUT these you wouldnt get my coment😆😆😆

ok whatwver lol.....
mahak im glad that u unexpectedly remembered an unexpected ff callef unexpected . wow! thank you so much for updating thiss ff soo soon its only been 18 day .. only rite . so fast !!! and your update is soooo long . 918 words( i actually counted) . so long . mahak next time i want ouble parts . i will pm everyone . but i want two . the introduction of nupur...... well nupur is nupur.how cool is it to give absuses 2 ppl on the face when they cant comprehend what o you mean . and mayan....typicall buisness man. money minded type.

Precap well hnmmmmm ver intresting but as you said it going yo br totally unexpected i better dont xpect anything so i am waiting for my two updates. all i can say short updates are illegal😡. sorry.

kay, love ya
update soon
pebbzz a.k.a priyal
ps:(my comment is actually half your update)

oh mahak di!
its was so... mast!

A_M_Z_I_N_G!!! u know why? coz u astound me that u write sizzles and romance and tears and love all so greatly that now i have to go to dictionary to find more words and praise u.

i m sure ur friend who said u can't write intimatacy will now be satisfied that u always can!!!

cheers

thats was fab....

now only one thing,...............

please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice strt sweetie

Mahak as usual fabulous loved it jaana do cont soon

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*edit*

yippee! u finally remembered 2 update this! *does a jig*
awesome start!👍🏼
but it was short yaar....
i know abt ur busy schedule...but also know that u love 2 write!😃
back 2 the update, marvellous one Mahi!👏
lol! Nupur does know how 2 'utilise' the fact that Suzanne doesn't know Hindi!😆
so it seems like Mayank n Nupur's 1st encounter is gonna happen at the orphanage n Nupur's gonna step into Mayank's life soon, possibly as his 'P.A'!😉
[of course, this is an assumption of mine unless u plan something else!😆]
waiting eagerly 2 read the next update....

unexpected totally.. mayu is so monet minded...do cont soon..awesoem part!

awesome update dear

hey dear nice update but so short next time i want long hon and nice vm as well thanks a tone for pm do continue soon

Mahak🤗...u've updated atlast sweetie.... Kya hai na...this ff is a spl one for me....yeh super romantic jo rahega (tumne hi kaha hai😉)