nafrat#3 - Page 70

Originally posted by: amira_saeed

Me first to comment!! awesome part!! yeh aaj kal ke ladke bhi na ladkiyon ko dekh kar drive karte hai, 😊

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Raj is looking at Naina instead of concentrating on his driving!!!!!!

Naina noticed this and decided she would have to do something as this might cause an accident!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina asked Raj to stop the car and Raj is surprised at this!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj told Naina that he can't help himself as she is looking so beautiful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina can't resist him and hugs him saying that it is just impossible to stay angry at him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Raj and Naina start romancing in the car!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj bhi naa!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Car mein hi shuru ho gaya!!!!!

Unke charo taraf sab horn baja rahe hai aur bheed jam gayi hai!!!!!

It was sooo embarrassing!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is getting bored while Naina is shopping!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Par aaj woh Naina ko kuch nahi keh sakta kyunki woh khud hi Naina ko shopping leke aaya hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kripa has come to meet Naina and its great to see the love between them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kripa wants to sleep with Naina and Raj had to agree and went to sleep in the guest room!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj cannot sleep without Naina and Naina knows it!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

But she couldn't do anything as Kripa has come after so many days!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

If she doesn't spend time with her then Kripa will feel bad!!!!!

I hope Naina comes to Raj after Kripa falls asleep!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

hi 😃............how are u 😃😃😃...njoyed reading the part 😃😃😃
👏👏👏👏👏...........it was a cute update........... 😃😃😃..........loved the whole car scene ... 😉😉😉..........it was sweet 😛😛......
aawww Raj getting bored while shopping........ 😃😃😃😃.......... typical men.... 😆😆😆😆.....
so kripa came to meet naina....😃😃😃.......
yeh kya kiya Raj ko guest room bhej diya 😆😆😆😆..........bechare ko nind nahi aayegi....... 😆😆😆😆......... hope naina comes back to him after some time....... 😉😉😉😉..........

will wait 4 next part continue soon...........😃😃😃😃..........
hope i'm not late in commenting this time.......... 😛😛😛😛😛........

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Nice part..Raj n Naina both r really cute..😛

Pls continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

nice part.

Naina toh badi selfish nikli...he he he...😆!!! use raj k bina neend bhi kaise aayi...!!! us se toh better Adi hai...jo kamm se kamm raj ko yaad kar k ro toh raha hai...!!! aur udhar bhi raj ko neend nahi aa rahi thi...!!! naina ko kya kripa aur raj me koi farq nahi pata chal raha tha...jo itne maze se so rahi thi...

raj ne achha kiya jo naina ko rokk liya...kabhi kabhi ungli tedhi kar k apna kaam nikalwana chahiye...!!! tabhi raj k gusse se darr kar naina rukk gayi...!!! varna voh toh phir se kripa k paas chali jati...!!!

cont soon.

Originally posted by: starasdf

Heyy
Great Part
Cont.Soon

Star ⭐️

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Kripa and Naina are talking about the olden days and go to sleep!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi was missing Raj and so he starts crying in the middle of the night!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj bhi nahi soh paa raha tha for the same reason!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Adi aur Raj dono bilkul ek jaise hai, dono ko hi ek dusre ke aur Naina ke bina neend nahi aati!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj tried to pretend to be asleep but Naina knew he was awake!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He was shocked to see Naina with Adi in front of him!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj stopped Naina from going aur apne paas rok liya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ke gusse se darr ke Naina ruk gayi!!!!!!

All three of them slept together peacefully after it!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aaj baby ka naamkaran hai and Naina is busy with the guests!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj talked to Karan who asked Nandini to send Naina to Raj's room!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

lovely........... sweet part 👏👏👏👏.............. very happy happy part 😊😊😊😊...........
loved Adi.......... missing his DAD........... 😊😊😊😊.............. now thats obvious....... 😆 😆............
it was nice of Raj too stopping naina from going............ atleast now raj could sleep peacefully 😃😃😃..warna use toh neend hi nahi aa rahi thi.......... 😆 😆😆😆.....

so finally day of namkaran arrived 👏👏👏.............
so what exactly Raj is hiding 😕😕😕😕............... hope nothing serious.......... 😊😊😊😊.......
so continue ASAP......... 😊😊😊...........will wait for next part 😃😃😃

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Originally posted by: neha10.for.u

hi ria...
aaj khush to bahut hogi tum hai 😆😆😆
😆😆 just finished reading the fic till the part where Raj and naina are leaving for Darjeeling...
What a gripping story....kya twist and turns laati ho tum...brilliant..... 👏👏👏

maine tumhe "hai hai rama" read karne ke baad theek hi suggest kiya tha...u have full ability to become a daily soap script writer...try karo yaar...
chalo lets discuss ur story from the beginning...

Raj and naina ek doosre se kine different hai....naina,a simple college girl,very sweet, family oriented person...whereas Raj...arrogant businessman.....par achcha hai na...dono different hai...afterall opposite attracts😆😆😆 waise unki 1st meeting kaafi interesting thi....ekdum filmy... pehli hi baar me jhagda ho gaya...chalo its a perfect beginning for love 😳😳😳
😳 and what a coincidence...naina job ke liye Raj ke hi office mein jaati hai waise ye to hona hi tha...heroine hero ke hi office me kaam karegi na 😆😆😆
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arre itni der me maine dono ki families and friends ki to baat ki hi nahi...naina ki family me uske parents aur 1 bhai aur 1 bahen hai(aise bata rahi hoon jaise tumhe pata hi na ho😆😆😆 )....uski best frnd kripa bahut hi sweet hai...
and Raj ki family me kehne ko to kewal uski Dadi hai....but actually kitni choti family hai...ye reality to baad me hi pata chalegi 😆😆😆

waise Raj ke best frnd karan and uski wife Nandini ke characters bhi bahut achche hain....
Nandini dislikes Raj...karegi hi...uska husband usse jyada time to Raj ke saath spend karta hai..😆😆😆
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Chalo ab thoda fast forward mode pe chalte hai...Raj naina se itna pyaar karta hai...phir bhi hamesha uspe chillata rehta hai...ego.... aur naina bhi to kam egoistic nahi hai😡😡😡 and as if dono ke jhagde kam the...Tushar ki entry....all the misunderstandings.....Naina ke papa ka emotional atyachar...and Naina and tushar ki shaadi😡😡😡 ab isse bura kya ho sakta tha????ye padh ke to baaki readers ki tarah mujhe bhi bahut gussa aa raha tha...i saw it was being compared to kth....but don't worry...sice i was not a viewer ot Kth....i never compared ur fic and the show...lekin phir bhi...naina aur tushar ki shaadi pe gussa to aaya hi tha...

But...u r a real twist queen...kya turn liya suddenly story ne...The goody goody boy tushar turns villian....it was completely unexpected....He did really bad with Anjali and Naina...and obviously with Raj too....but it was good that he got his punishment from Anjali....👏👏👏

and chalo ab RN bhi phir se close aa gaye...thank God things sorted out well....and naina joined the office again....and Karan played perfect cupid to bring RN even more closer...har waqt unhe saath bhejne ke mauke nikalta rehta hai😆😆😆

Waise khud Karan ki personal life bhi to happy happy chal rahi hai...so cute...

Dia and karthik ki love story bhi sahi track par chal rahi hai....Thoda aur fast forward chalte hai yaar....sorry i am little lazy in typing...

Finally dia and Karthik are engaged and Naina and Raj ki shaadi bhi fix ho gayi...

All rituals of RN marriage were written very well👏👏👏

Finally...tumhe story me Aalekh ki bhi yaad aa hi gayi...lekin Naina Raj ko starting me hi sach kyu nahi batati??chalo better late than never...

Now Raj has decided to help Naina and find Aalekh...and bunty ki bhi story me entry ho hi gayi...Now the real story is going to start...RN and KMA....but Raj ration supply karega???😆😆😆

Chalo finally RN and adi are leaving for Darjeeling...Maine yahi tak read kiya hai....so i will stop here till i read the remaining parts....waise i forgot to mention...raj and Adi ka relation bahut hi sweet hai....

ab baki readers ki tarah main ye to nahi keh sakti ki ud soon....but i will say that i will read the remaining parts really soon....😆😆😆

Tab tak...u continue ur gud work and keep smiling...and sorry if i have missed on somethings in my comment....ek baar me i cannot type more than this😆😆😆

bye,tc

keep smiling...and thanks for all ur pms...and patience...and sorry for my late reply...

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Nandini sent Naina to get ready for the puja!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ke blouse ki dor badhne ke bahane Raj began his romance and Naina too loved it!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

But they were interrupted by the ringing of Raj's mobile!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is late for the puja and Madhuri and Dadi scolds him for it as the puja cannot start without him!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj and Naina sit for the puja with their son and named him Rohan!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Cute name!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is worried about something related to Aalekh!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

He finally shares it with Karan!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina overheard them but was unable to understand anything!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕