nafrat#3 - Page 72

Originally posted by: neha10.for.u

hey riya...

i am back...1st of congratulations for the 3rd thread...waise story jab itni gripping ho...then its hardly surprising....and now congratulate me....aree finally maine bhi 2nd thread poora karke 3rd tak pahuch gayi hoon...and infact 3rd thread ke kuch ud read bhi kar liye hai....kahan tak...well ye to tumhe comment ke end tak pata chal hi jaayega 😆😆😆

so let me start from where i left last time...RN back to KMA...i was so happy to see them back in kma...and freshers ball aur reunion ka amazing concept sun ke to aur bhi khush thi...i thought kuch achche RN moments read karne ko milenge...and reunion ke bahane aalekh ke baare me bhi kuch jaan ne ko milega...lekin party me hua sab ulta...pehle Raj ko wo Sheetal le gayi 😡😡😡...and then BC...kitna bura bhala kaha unhone Aalekh ke baare me😡😡😡....really felt bad for naina....

Raj ko bhi bahut dukh hua naina ko aise dekh kar....lekin ye next day use achanak kya hua ???? instead of supporting and consoling naina...wo bina kuch kahe hi bahar chala gaya...wapas aaya to bhi usse rudely baat kar raha tha....and well next few ud were real torture( well not for me...but for poor naina...) Raj to bas jaise usse ladne ka bahana doondha karta tha...Pinky ki B'day party me promise kar ke bhi nahi aaya...and then Niar se Dosti karke...use ghar la ke...to usne limits hi cross kar di.....and if this all was not enough...naina ko ghar chod kar jaane ko bhi keh diya....

well i thought...Raj must have befriended Niar to get some information out of him....lekin naina ke saath aise behave kyu kar raha tha ??? pata hai mein 2nd thread complete karke aaj reading band karne wali thi....lekin ab itne bade suspense ko jaane bina reading kaise chod deti ????

so let me continue further 😆😆😆

Finally naina Raj ko chod ke wapas apni maa ke ghar aa gayi...lekin usne kisi ko bhi Raj ke behavior ke baare me nahi bataya....Ghod bharai se pehle wo Shekhawat house aa gayi...and Raj bhi time pe Mumbai pahuch hi gaya...

Raj ke behavior se to pata lag raha hai ki wo kitna sorry feel kar raha hai naina se misbehave karne ke liye...lekin reason abhi bhi samajh nahi aaya....

the scene where Raj is going to leave naina to her mother's house and he gets off the car to get toys for Adi...and the way Naina reacts....was very well written...it showed that even though naina is angry with him...she still loves him a lot 👏👏👏

Finally Raj naina ko uski maa ke ghar chod ke wapas KMa chala gaya...lekin phir se usne jaa ke koi phone nahi kiya....naina ke b'day ke din bhi nahi...ab naina ko usse baat karne ko kuch to karna tha...to usne socha wohi Dr Shalini ko phone kar le....

and usne diary nikali to diary me tha ek letter.....hmm ab maaloom laga...raj ke mis behave karne ka reason....ab is scene ke baare me kya kahu....fantastic, brilliant...👏
👏
and ab jab secret open ho gaya hai...to i am leaving at this part....tumse to keh nahi sakti ki continue soon...coz that u r already doing....but i will continue reading and commenting....sooner or later...can't say 😆😆😆

but now i am sure...mera lappy flood me nahi bahega....😆😆😆

keep smiling dear and continue the gud work.....

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Ria

awesome update👏👏👏👏👏👏
loved Raj n Naina scene so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
plsss cont soon

Luv
Naina

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Ria

Nice part..

Naina was so shocked to see the time n started crying but Raj consoled her..

Finally Raj n Naina ne pooja to kar hi li😊

Pls continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: starasdf

Heyy

Great Part

Cont.soon

Star⭐️

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

wow 👏 👏 👏......................... a happy & sweet part & a romantic too 😳😳😳😳..............
aaaww raj is too cute ..............can't stop teasing naina.....bechari ko humesha tang karta rehta hai 😆😆😆😆............

ab subah suah kaha gayab ho gaya 😕😕😕................ & wat is in the envelope.........😛 😛.........
with naina i also want to know so continue soon 😃😃😃😃..............
thanx 4 the PM 😊😊😊

😛

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Hellooo Ria....how r u swt heart??? Waise Naina thodi thodi tujhse inspired hai...haina..???...hehehe....kaphi emotional hai....hehehe....!!!!😆😆😆.... Accha is teej like Karva chauth...???...i dont know...teej is not followed in my home...hehehe.... b/w Raj is pretty strong huh....others will faint seeing naina like this but look at him....he is at his mischievious best!!!...hahaha😉.... B/w Thankfully Naina ki pooja 12 baje se pehle ho gayi warna dobara se aasoon ki nadiyon mein floods aa jate...... Waise wats in the envelope???...which made her sooooo surprissssseeeeddd.....hehehe Love, Rajita...

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

hi 😃😃😃..................yippie ..............i'm first after a long time 😛😛😛😛.............
😍...............lost in the kiss ...ahem ahem OK ...............comment bhi karna hai 😃😃😃...........
its an awesome part 👏👏👏👏............aaaawwwww Raj is so sweet........ what a gift to mrs. shekhawat 😃😃😃............waiting 4 them to meet alekh soon 😃😃😃😃
& karan 😡😡😡............i'm coming to kill u ........why disturbed Raj .....itna important kaam kar raha tha 😳😳😳😳😳

chalo now continue soon........... 😃😃😃😃

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Ria

How r u??

Update was really gud.😃

Naina was so happy after seeing the surprise...😊

She was going to meet her brother soon😃

This scene was too hilarious😆😆😆😆

"hey bhaagwan yeh 21st centuary mein tumne mere zindage mein bipasha ke jaaga yeh nirupa roy ko kun bej diya jab dekho rote he rahete haai rote rahete haai "

😆😆😆😊

Pls continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hey Ria

awesome part dear👏👏👏
Naina apne Alekh bhaiya se milne ja rahi hai😊😊😊
loved Raj n Naina scene❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
plsssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina

Originally posted by: neha10.for.u

hey Riya......

congratulate me first...poocho kyu ??? becoz finally i have read till ur last ud.....and now i don't have to do any catching up......oh ! what a relief 😆😆😆

so last time i left when Raj went to meet Naina in the Hospital......so finally every misunderstanding was cleared...and finally they are together.....chalo ab lagta hai sab theek hoga.......ab Raj wapas aa gaya hai to Aalekh ka bhi pata chal hi gaya hoga.....so i guess ab happy days aa gaye hai Raj and Naina ki life ke.....

and in happy days ki shuruwat hui Raj and Naina ke hug 🤗 se.......but ye nurse ko bhi abhi entry leni thi....bechare RN ko embarrass kar diya 😆😆😆

finally hafte bhar baad naina ghar aa gai.....and Raj ne baaki sabke saath mil ke use kya surprise diya....pehle to bechari ko udaas kar diya ye keh ke ki sab log bahar ghoomne gaye hai......and fir apne romantic style me sorry bol ke and surprise party de ke use khush kar diya........so sweet...

but mera ek question hai.......ye tumne raj ko itna bada sharaabi and naina ko itna rondu kyu banaya hai......raj khush hota hai to drink karta hai, dukhi hota hai to drink karta hai, gusse me hota hai to drink karta hai.....in short.....peene walo ko peene ka bahana chaiye 😆😆😆 arre bechare ka liver kharab ho jaayega 😡😡😡

and same with naina....khush ho to aansu, dukhi ho to aansu......tumhari sister hai kya.....hamesha flood laane ko ready rehti hai 😆😆😆

oh chalo story pe focus karte hai.....RN ki burai fir kabhi karenge...raat ko apne new born baby ko rota dekh bechara Raj kitna pareshaan ho jaata hai....ab use kaun samjhaye bechara chota bachcha hai.....royega hi na jab bhookh lagegi to.......but agar RAj itna duffer hai to naina bhi kam nahi hai.....subah subah baby ko jaga rahi thi.....itne chote bachche ko kaun jaldi jaagne ki aadat daalta hai......stupids 😆😆😆 lo mein fir burai pe aa gayi.....focus....story pe focus.....😆😆😆

are maine beech ka important scene to miss kar diya na RN ki leg pulling karne ke chakkar me.....ye Raj diary me kya likh raha tha jab Karan aaya.......wo jarur Aalekh ko le ke koi baat chupa raha hai........hmm....koi nahi aaj mein bhi saare secrets khol ke hi dum loongi......

ab jara baby boy ke naam karan pe pahuchte hain.....Rohan.....naam to bahut hi cute rakha hai baby ka.......gud choice......and beech me kripa waale scene bhi achche the.......and yes also the shopping scenes were hilarious......public me romance karenge to public to naaraaz hogi hi....😆😆😆

chalo coming to the secret........aakhir pata lag hi gaya ki Raj pareshaan kyu hai......and wo naina se kya chupa raha hai....and sirf hame hi nahi....naina ko bhi pata lag gaya......ki Aalekh is in mental asylum.......and what a filmy reaction from Naina 's side....baat sunte hi faint...😆😆😆

and hosh me aayi..to fir Raj pe gussa.....uff......ab raj pe kyu naraaz hai.....raj ne thodi hi aalekh ko paagal kiya hai....but kya kare...ye RN ka kuch nahi ho sakta...hamesha jhagadne ka bahana chaiye inhe.....😡😡😡

waise aalekh paagal hua kaise ye secret abhi khulna baaki hai.......

but Thank God, teej pe tumne in dono ki misunderstandings fir se door to kar di....kitne dino ke liye .....pata nahi...but achcha hai Naina ko samajh mein to aaya ki Raj ne usse sach sirf uski health ki wajah se chupaya tha.....aur koi reason nahi tha........

Now coming to ur last ud...yes , the surprise gift....waise to i have already told u that i liked the gift....lekin since u have particularly asked to comment on it........so the gift was really nice.....ab aalekh ki entry hogi.....and i hope ab usse judi saari mystries bhi dheere dheere khul jayengi.....hopefully story fir se KMA ki or jaayegi.....as Aalekh's secrets are related to KMA.......

and for the first time, since i have started reading this fic........i can say that.........

Riya....pls continue soon......

arre ab tak mein bahut peeche thi na...isliye ye keh nahi sakti thi.....varna tum aur aage nikalti jaati....but now since i have read till the last ud....to ab keh sakti hoon......

and i guess ab u will keep smiling

take care.