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Posted: 14 years ago
dekhte dekhte shayam ho jaate haai sab log aapne aapne kamre mein taiyar ho rahe haai sivaye naina ke woh becchare puja ke sab taiyari kar hote haai jab nandini uske pass aate haai aur usse pucchte haai ke"naina yeh kya tu abhie tak taiyar hone kun nahin gaye tujhe pata haai naa ke kuch he der mein puja suru ho jaayege ?" nandini ke baat sun ke naina ko mann he mann aacha bhi laagta haai aur saath saath bura bhi aacha is baat ke laagte haai ke nandini ko uske kitne fikar rahete haai aur bura is baat ka laagta haai ke agar woh abhie taiyar hone chali jaayege toh madhuri jee sayed bura laagega aur woh kisi bhi tarike se madhuri jee aur naraz nahin kar sakte naina aapne inhe khayalo mein dubbu hue hote haai when nandini tabs on her shoulder and asks her"kya hua kya soch rahe haai tu ?' nandini ke baat sun ke naina aapne khayalo se bhar aate haai aur aapne chahere par ek halke se smile laate hue nandini se kahete haai"kuch nahin bhabhi " par nandini ko naina ke smile se zada uske aakhon mein chuppe hue dard dekh jaata haai woh naina ke ballo mein haath phirate hue kahete haai"dekh naina bhalle he tere saath mera khoon ka rishta nahin haai lekin dil ka rishta zarur haai aur tujhe yaad haai ke tune he mujhse ek bar kaha tha ke khoon ke rishte se bhi zada strong dil ka rishta ka rishta hota haai kunki woh humare dil se jo jure hote haai aur el dil ko agar kisi baat ke takleff ho toh dusre dil ko zarur uske khabar ho jaate haai isliye mere sammne aapne chahere par yeh jhoothe hasse laake mujhse aapna dard chupane ke koshish badh kar aur mujhe saff saff baata ke kya baat haai jiske ke tera dil tera haase ka saath nahin de rahe haai "nandini ke baat sunke naina aur khud ko rokh nahin paate haai woh phut phut ke rone laagte haai aur nandini ko baate haai ke kal madhuri jee aur soniya ne usse kya kaha naina ke sab baate sunke nandini naina ke aasu ko pocchte hue usse kahete haai dekh naina main jaante hue ke tere dil pe kya beeth rahe haai kunki jab pahele sab log mujhe bhi annat kahete the mujhe ultte sidhe baate sunnate the tab mujhe bhi bohot dukh hota tha lekin dheere dheere mainne aapne aapko samjhaya ke bhaagwan ne jaisa mere kismet mein likha tha wohi hua agar bhaagwan ne mujhse mere paida hone bad mere maa baap ka saya mujhse cheen liya haai toh wohi bhaagwan ne mere zindage ko khushio se bharne ke liye karan ko mere zindage mein bej diya haai jo mujhse bohot pyaar karta haai aur yehi mere liye sab haai isliye ab mujhe koi kuch bhi kahe mujhe koi farak nahin paarta haai isliye aaj main bhi tujhse yehi kahe kahu ke tere zindage mein raj haai jo tujhse kitna pyaar karta haai yeh tujhe bhi pata haai aur tere do baccho jis mein tere zindage baste haai agar tu inke baare mein sochege naa toh dekhna tere dil se saare dukh dard kaise ek pal mein dur ho jaate haai " "hmm par bhabhi mama?" "uff oh naina main hu naa tu abhie jaa jaake taiyar ho jaa main sab taiyari kar lunge " nandini ke baat maante hue naina taiyar hone jaate haai aur yahaan nandini puja ke baaki taiyari karne laagte haai


naina aapne kamre mein taiyar ho rahe the jab raj kamre mein aata haai aur naina ke shoulder par aapna chin rakhte hue kaheta haai"kya baat haai jaan aaj toh aap kamal ke khubsurat laag rahe haai jee kar raha haai ke aaj aapse phirse shaadi kar lunge kun kya kahete haai aap ?" raj winks at naina naina raj ke yeh baat sunke starts blushing woh raj ke forehead par slightly hit karte hue bolte haai"uff oh raj tum bhi naa hamesha tunhe bas romance sujta haai ab jaao yahaan mujhe taiyar hone do waise bhi itne der ho gaye haai aur main abhie tak taiyar bhi nahin hue ho " naina ke yeh baat sunke raj joke hamesha taiyar raheta aapne plans leekar naina se kahete haai"are tum bhi naa naina main hu naa mujhse kaho i will help u to get ready " par naina knew what raj's intentions are so she just pushed away raj from herself and says"nahin nahin mujhe aapke help ke koi zarurat nahin haai aap yahaan se jaao i will help myself " naina ke baat sunke raj thora sulken face se kaheta haai"thik haai i will go par jo dene aaya tha woh toh de du tumhe " now naina really irritated woh raj se thore gussa hoke pucchte haai"kya dena haai tumhe?" par raj is raj woh usse kaheta haai aase nahin pahele aapne aakhen badh karo uske bad naina knew ke raj se bahes karna bekaar haai so she just closed her eyes


ab raj naina ke bilkul kareeb aa jaata haai aur uske neck ko kiss karke usse ek beautiful diamond necklace
pahennate hue uske kaano mein dheere se kaheta haai "now open ur eyes " naina aapne aakhen kholte haai aur aapne gaale mein itne khubsurat ek diamond necklece dekh ke she just became speechless woh kya bole usse jaise kuch samajh mein nahin aate haai she just hugs raj to convey what was she feeling at the moment in her heart raj ko bhi naina ke dil ke baat samajh ne mein der nahin laagte he also holds her tightly in his embrace


they both were hugging each other when rohan stroms into the room and says"PAPA PAPA ADI BHAIYA GIR GAYE HAAI"
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i decided i wud say a nice & long part 😆😆😆......but end me u shocked me 😲😲......it started of lovely 👏 👏 👏....got romatic in b/w 👏.but in end u gave me a big shock 😲😲😲...hope the kiddo is fine ........😊😊...usse zyada bahi lagi 😃😃😃........aww Raj & naina will get heart attack 😛😛😛....... they were so happy & lovey dovey ...😳😳...u spoiled their happy moment 😆😆😆😆.........

make the kiddo fit & fine sooner

& continue soon 😃😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowowoowo awesome part thx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Nandini knows that something is wrong and asked Naina about it!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina told her about it and Nandini comforted her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Nandini gave the right advice to Naina and sent her to get ready!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj is romantically praising Naina and she is blushing!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina told Raj to go and let her get ready when he offered to help her get ready as she knew his intentions very well!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj sulked but asked her to close her eyes as he had a gift for her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kissed her neck and put a diamond necklace around her neck!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj's gift is very beautiful and the necklace is simple yet elegan and I just loved it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina is speechless and hugged Raj to convey her feelings and Raj understood and held her tightly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Their happy moment was interrupted by Rohan who said Adi has fallen down!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔


Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
the update was really nice. thnx 4 the pm. love the emotional part between nandini and naina. raj and naina romantic scene was sweet as well. the neckless is very nice, simple yet elegant. just loved it. but wht is it yaar, wht happens to the kid!!!!!!!!!!
continue soon...........
Edited by mamon.moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice...romantic too...bohat maza aaya padne mein..
And I hope Adi would be well..
And pleazzz cont. soon.....we r waiting!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

i hope adi is fine

nice part dear, you really shocked us at the end leaving it that way cont sooonnnnn

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part. loved it.
beautiful gift gave by raj to naina.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey what happens next???I am dying ot know.Again this update ... more beautiful than your previous.!! Plz update soon.!! Eager to know.!! Very nice update hun.!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
very romantic
hope adi is fine
please continue soon

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