ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11]

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Hi Dear...

First of all CONGRATULATIONS on completing one year of the fic... and secondly...awesome update...though a very short one...yaar ye to bas ek scene tha...update kahan tha..???

Raj to Naina ko tang karne ka koi mauka hi nahi chodta... Aur Naina bas blush karti rehti hai... Ma ka to kuch nahi ho sakta...filmy as always... Ab ek proper update ke saath jaldi continue karo...

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

awesome update.loved it.
loved the scene between raj and naina.
continue soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Bahut short update tha yaar. 😡 😡 😡
Good one 👏 👏 👏
Loved that part.😃 😃 😃
Raj ka mood abhi bhi naughty ho raha hai n i like him in this mood.😉 😉 😉 I think all of us like him in this mood na.😳 😳 😳 Naina to bahut sharmaa rahi hai, kya baat hai.😛 😛 😛 Close door me bhi us ko lagta hai koi dekh lega ya phir koi aa jaayega.😆 😆 😆
Raj ko kitne jaldi hai na apni maa ko khushkhabri dene ki.😉 😉 😉 Ya youn kaho tease karne ka ek chance aur mil gaya us ko Naina ko.😆 😆 😆
Sahi kaha na Naina ne ki kitne saare changes aayenge us me jab vo mom ban ne waali hogi n shayad abhi Raj bhi us baat ko nahi samajh raha hai. 😕 😕 😕
Accha kiya Naina ne keh diya ki vo abhi is k liye ready nahi hai aur sahi bhi hai. 😊 😊 😊 Itna asaan nahi hai jo hua hai us k baad apne aap ko samhaalne aur ek k baad doosre relation me padna.
Ab sab kuch us ko apna lag raha hai. Raj n his dramatic mom, never leaves chance 😆 😆 😆. Un ko ab dukh ho raha hai ki Raj meeting me kyoun jaa raha hai?
Par kab tak kaam chod k romance karega vo?
continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Hiiii

First of all congratulation 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏for completing one year...your story is really a lovely n awesome one with cute n sweet characters

Now coming to the update its fabulous as usaul 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ..lekin part is so shorttttt yaar

Loved the scene between Raj n naina..Raj kitna rease kar raha tha naina ko about khush khabri

Whenever Raj ki maa ka entry hoti hain in the scene mere chehra pe automatically smile aajatha hain....loved all her dialouges

totally its an awesome part

please continue soon ..is baar long update post karna

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

first of all congratulations for completing 1 year of the fic
and secondly sorry for late reply
the update was good but that was quite short
plz continue soon

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Firstly congratulations for completeing 1 year........ 👏👏

we as reader thank you for starting such a beautiful fic....😊😊

updt was amazing.......raj always gets surprised with the behaviour of naina....😃

and naina too sometimes is childish....but u expressed der emotions beautifullly.....👏👏

also njoyed and maa and beta convo 😆

and again naina surprised raj by taking the news maturedly.....😊

in all a gr8 updt....👏👏

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Shona91

@Shona91

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

yaar i loved this part
very sweet naughty and romantic update
congrats for completing one year
continue soon
bye

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

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Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago

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strawberrychip

@strawberrychip

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#99

nice update.. sorry for the late reply.. busy with exams...

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

ab main sach me kahun ki ud kaisa tha...??? arre bataya toh tha na tujhe...!!! chal thik hai phir se bata deti hun...mujhe yeh ud itna bura laga ki puch i mat...!!! ab tu yeh soch rahi hogi ki maine toh tujhe fone par kuch aur hi kaha tha...toh baat yeh hai yaar...maine fone par jo kaha tha voh sach tha...par mujhe bura isiliye laga kyoun ki yeh ud mujhe kuch jyada hi chota laga na isiliye...😕 😕 😕hmmm pata hai bhuuuuut chota tha ud...par tujhe to mere mood ka pata hi hai na.....bina acche mood ke main kaise bada ud kardun...fir time bhi kam tha😭😭😭

chal ab ud par aate hain...😃 😃 😃

morning scene tohhhhhhhhhhhhh baht hi khubshurat tha...naina ki soch...aur raj ka reaction just awesome yaar...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏haan....is ud mein aur tha hi kya??????morning scene ke baad ek aur scene fir tata bye bye...😆😆😆😆to o to accha lagega hi na😆😆

phir naina ne mirror tod diya...!!! raj bhi us k sath rah rah kar jaan chuka hai ki naina todne me xpert hai...😆 😆 😆pachta raha hai raj...ussi ne to ye sab stunts sikhaaye the😆😆😆ab bhukto😆😆

ab maa jee ki phir se entry ho gayi...!!! unhe 'khush-khabri' chahiye...ab naina hai ki is ka matlab nahi samajh rahi...!!! jyada tar toh is sawal par ladkiyaan sharma k bhaag jati hain...par yahan par toh raj hi sharma kar bhaag gaya...par naina puchti rahi ki 'khush-khabari' kya hai...😆 😆 😆arre iss fic mein role reversal hua hai😆😆😆sharmaane ka saara kaam raj ke sarr par daala hai maine..kya hai na sharmaate hue raj bhuuuuuuuuuuut cute lagta hai😳😳😳😳

phir raj ko bacha liya naina ne aryyan k gusse se...!!! ab us scene par raj ka naina ko kiss karne ka idea sahi tha...ab itni badi mushibat se jo bachaya tha us ne...😉 😉 😉ab to raj ko har situation pe yahi mann hoga.....pyar mein nikamma ho gaya hai😆😆😆

chal abhi ek lamba sa ud post kar...😃 😃 😃 lamba sa?????pehle ud to hone de..lamba sa ya chota sa par ho to sahi....thanks for commenting.....keep reading nhin kahungi......vo to tujhe karna hi hai😆😆😆

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