ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11] - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I don't know what to say for starters cause its awesome...Just loved how events turned in Rajveer's flavour and now Naina is his wife. Aryan is so cute and lovable. Aur Raj ki Maa...no words. She's the best of the best. I am loving Raj's maa...I wish every mother-in-law were like her and Aryan so cute in annoying his Chachu. I am loving the way Aryan behave older than his age in annoying Raj. Ek army officer ko horror flims se darr...par its too good.
Awe...Raj had a bitter past...regarding his father's death par I love how Aryan brings out Raj true innocent face.
Loving Raj's mom and the way she plans every thing for Raj and Naina like the honeymoon par I have to say I loved it when Raj's mom compared him with Dr. Shashank instead of Armaan...that was too good.

Awe...I love how Raj always prove his love for Naina...

Continue soon

PS: Do pm me when you continue

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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
very beautiful part i just loved it
dress scene is very funny
naina bhi naa raj ki koi baat nahin maanti jab vo keh raha hai ki chup raho to nahin poochna hi hai kaunsi khushkhabri maa aur bechaare raj ko embarass kar diya
continue soon
soon means really soon
bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Update was toooooooooo good
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
hi....
i am a new member and just started reading ur ff yesterday.....and believe me could not stop myself before reading all the pages till now....congrats...wish u were writing lrl ....gr8 story...pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

[hey guys...today is 28th of june...THAT MEANS TODAY IS FIRST ANNIVERSARY OF MY FIC😃...i really can't believe that i had started this fic one year back...i thank you all for being soo sweet to me and generous enough to comment even when i don't reply to them regularly...i really can't thankyou enough for that...

now coming to today's update...i didn't get enough time to write...but i realy wanted to give u all an update on this day...soo i am posting whatever i could manage in 1 hr...i know this is too small...i am really sorry in advance...but i guess something is better than nothing...soo enjoy this single scene...yes only one scene...now i am going to hide somewhere..i don't want eggs and tomatoes for sure😆...]

part 31

after leaving raj with aryan naina retired to her room...she entered the room and started looking at the room as if she was seeing it for the first time...the couch, the almirah, the mirror, the small but beautiful garden and last but not the least the bed...everything was suddenly giving her a homely feeling...this was her home...her room...everything was hers...

she was lost in her own world when raj suddenly hugged her from behind...

naina[scared for a second]-uff darra diya mujhe...

raj-oops naina sigh is scared????ye kab se hone laga?????

naina-abhi se...

raj kissed her cheek softly and naina couldn't help but blush at his gesture of love...

naina-kya kar rahe ho aap?????koi aa jaayega...

raj[busy exploring her neck]-kaun koi?????? mujhe to yahan koi bhi koi nahin dikhaayi de raha hai...

naina-aap dharti par aakar dekhoge to pata chalega ki yahan maa bhi aa sakti hain aur aryan bhi...

raj-oh uski mujhe koi chinta nahin hai...

naina-kyun???????

raj-kyunki agar aryan aaya to main bol doonga ki uski chachi ke saath ek special game khel raha hoon aur agar maa aayi to vo khud hi yahan se chali jaayengi...afterall main unhi ka to kaam kar raha hun...

naina[confused]-unka kaam kaise?????

raj[rubbing her hands on her belly]-bhool gai?????maa ko bhut jaldi hai KHUSHKHABRI sunneki...

he deliberately stressed on "khushkhabri" to tease her...

naina turned deep red in no time...she tried to run away but his hands around her didn't allow her to...

raj[enjoying her red form]-kya hua????tumhein to bhut jaldi thi khushkhabri ke baare mein jaane ki...ab jab main practically samjhana chahta hun to u are not listening...pay attention cadet singh...u need to be attentive...

naina[shyly]-pehli baat to ye i am not your cadet anymore soo stop giving me orders and secondly mujhe itni jaldi khushkhabri nahindeni kisi ko bhi...

raj[looking at her flushed face from behind]-kyun?????

naina-bas aise hi...

raj was surprised by her reasoning which had no reason in it...

raj-par...

naina[cutting him]-don't even try...maine kaha na abhi ke liye no khushkhabri...

raj[shocked by her outburst]-par maine kab...

naina[cutely]-ab aap mujhe force karoge?????

raj-how could you even think like that??????

naina[with glittering eyes]-that means aap force nahin karoge??

raj[resigning tone]-meri itni majaal????vaise ek baat bataao??tum abhi aisi hui ho ya shuru se hi tumehin simple si baat ko complicate karne ki aadat hai?????? i mean baat kahan se shuru hui thi aur tumne kahan pohanchaa di????force???aur main?????vo bhi iss baat ke liye????u are certainly mad...

naina removed his hands and faced him...

naina[angrily]-mad????aur main???haan haan ab to main aapko mad hi lagungi...aapki baat jo nahin maan rahi main...aapka kya jaayega..jo bhi hoga mujhe hi hoga na...sab kuch mujhe adjust karna hoga...aur aap to side pe khade hokar dekhoge...obviously i'll be mad at this...

raj[a bit loudly]-kya?????sirf tumhein hi kyun farak padega?????

naina-obviously mujhe hi farak padega...saara dard mujhe hoga...saara time main bimaar rahungi...saare kapde mujhe tight honge...saari medicines mujhe khaani padengi...saare injections mujhe lagenge aur fir last but not the least delivery ke time...

after this she couldn't utter a single word for raj had shut her mouth with his hand..he was looking at her without blinking...he didn't think of these things before...it was definately a tuff job to carry a child...and he really had to prepare himself mentally to see naina in that condition...

raj[looking upset]-bas...i am sorry...i didn't think this much...

naina looked into his eyes and regretted immediately for what she had said...it was not that she didn't want a kid but it was just too early for her...she wanted to live these beautiful moments with raj...she wanted to know him better...his family...his likes, dislikes...in short she wanted to know him inside out...and with a kid she won't be able to do that...

raj on the other hand thought that she didn't want a child at all...he immediately decided not to bring up this topic again...if she didn't want it, he wouldn't force her...

naina[placing her head on his chest]-i am sorry...i didn't mean to say all that...trust me i didn't mean it...bas itni jaldi main ek aur badlaav ke liye taiyaar nahin hun...pehle hi sab itni jaldi hua hai aur ab agar ye bhi...main shayad sambhaal nahin paaungi...

raj[still thinking]-that means you just want to wait for the right time...you are not against it...right??????

naina[smiled]-exactly...i want to wait...otherwise i'll be very happy to...

she stopped suddenly...she was too shy to continue after that...

raj[smiled]-to??????

naina-u know what i mean...

raj-no i don't...explain in detail...

before naina could say anything they heard maa entering calling raj's name...they immediately separated and looked at maa...

raj-maa kya hua????

maa-hona kya hai...vahi jo hamesha hota hai...vahi purani kahani...sach mein tere headquarters waalon ke to dailogue bhi puraane ho gaye hain ekta ke serials ki tarah...

raj[confused]-maa kya bol rahe ho???headquarters???serials????kya matlab>?

maa-arre mere buddhu raam...tere headquarters se abhi phone aaya tha...urgent meeting ke liye bulaaya hai...pata nahin inhein kaise pata chal jaata hai ki tu aa gaya hai aur bas tabhi phone kar dete hain...

raj-maa maine hi unhein inform kiya tha ki main aaj aa raha hun...aur for god's sake main buddhu nahin hun...

naina giggled at this...

maa-dekh vo bhi hass rahi hai..isse bhi pata hai tu kya hai...agar itna hi samjhdaar hota to ghar aa ke do teen din aaraam karta...par tune to aane se pehle hi unhein baata diya...kabhi kabhi to shaq hota hai ki tum mera beta hai bhi ya nahin..itna boring mera beta nahin ho sakta...

raj[exclaimed loudly]-maa?????????

maa-chal maa maa karna band kar aur jaa apni duty pe nahin to tujhe dhoondte hue saari army mere ghar tak aa jaayegi...phone karke aise baat karte hain jaise kahin aag lagi hai jisse sirf tu hi bujjha sakta hai...

raj smiled at this whereas naina couldn't stop herself from laughing...

maa-ab muskuraana band kar aur neeche aa jaa...khaana khaaye bagair jaane nahin doongi...

saying this maa left to prepare her special pranthas for her "buddhu raam"

raj slowly walked towards naina who was looking a bit sad...it was obvious that she didn't want him to leave...but she also knew that for raj his duty was his first priority so she couldn't even try to stop him...she suddenly realised that she'll always have to share him with the country...and she was ready to do that...she loved him for his dedication and devotion towards their country...and will keep loving him for that..

raj[kissing her lightly on lips]-mujhe jaana hoga...

naina-nahin...aapko jaa kar vaapis aana hai...mere paas...

raj smiled widely at this and kissed her deep this time and left for his duty...

end of part 31


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Edited by rajeev fann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

ab main sach me kahun ki ud kaisa tha...??? arre bataya toh tha na tujhe...!!! chal thik hai phir se bata deti hun...mujhe yeh ud itna bura laga ki puch i mat...!!! ab tu yeh soch rahi hogi ki maine toh tujhe fone par kuch aur hi kaha tha...toh baat yeh hai yaar...maine fone par jo kaha tha voh sach tha...par mujhe bura isiliye laga kyoun ki yeh ud mujhe kuch jyada hi chota laga na isiliye...😕 😕 😕

chal ab ud par aate hain...😃 😃 😃
morning scene tohhhhhhhhhhhhh baht hi khubshurat tha...naina ki soch...aur raj ka reaction just awesome yaar...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
phir naina ne mirror tod diya...!!! raj bhi us k sath rah rah kar jaan chuka hai ki naina todne me xpert hai...😆 😆 😆
ab maa jee ki phir se entry ho gayi...!!! unhe 'khush-khabri' chahiye...ab naina hai ki is ka matlab nahi samajh rahi...!!! jyada tar toh is sawal par ladkiyaan sharma k bhaag jati hain...par yahan par toh raj hi sharma kar bhaag gaya...par naina puchti rahi ki 'khush-khabari' kya hai...😆 😆 😆
phir raj ko bacha liya naina ne aryyan k gusse se...!!! ab us scene par raj ka naina ko kiss karne ka idea sahi tha...ab itni badi mushibat se jo bachaya tha us ne...😉 😉 😉
chal abhi ek lamba sa ud post kar...😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
Hi Dear😊
How r u?

First of all, congratulations on completing one year of ur ff👏👏👏 and secondly, so sorry for editing my comment too late.

The update was awesome, mind-blowing, superb yaar.👏⭐️👏

Raj and Naina's scene was awesome. I liked their small confusion and happy that it cleared out soon.😛

Raj's mom is too gud yaar loved her dialogues. Very nice scene.😊

Please continue soon.😛
Luv Preet.
😊
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Hi Dear

How r u??
Congratulations on completing 1 year with this fiction...👏👏👏 U have really wriiten a beautiful story with such cute characters...😃
Now coming to the update it was short but cute..
Raj ki ek nayi hobby ho gayi hai..Naina ko tease karne ka mauka woh kabhi nahin chodta..😉😳😆..Bechari Naina hamesha blush karti rehti hai..😳Raj baatein bhi to sisi karta hai..
But Naina ka logic to sahi hai jo hoga sab usko hi to sehna hoga😆😆
Raj was so shocked at her outburst but he inderstand her completely..
Naina wants to know him first before being a mother to his child..
Raj ki mom bahut filmy hain..😆😆 unke dialogues kaafi kamal ke hote hai..but Raj itna bhi buddhu nahin hai..😃
Naina is not very happy but she know dat her husband is a true soldier n he wud never forget his duty😊
So Raj is leaving for some meeting..I hope he is back soon.😊
Pls continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii dear🤗

first a all CONGRATULATION for completing 1year
🥳🥳
the update was short but cute,awesome n romantic⭐️👏😳
Loved their cute fights n Raj does not miss single chance to tease n romance wid Naina😆
maa is hillarious lyk always😆
do cont soon
thnx for pm

Luvs
Naina
🤗


Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part!!!!

Congrats for one year aniversary on your fic!!!!!!! I hope it continues until next year and many more to come!!!!!!!! Coming to the update, It was short yet romantic....... Loved the way Raj was teasing Naina and romancing with her. Their cute fight was awesome as usual and Ma's hilarious dialogues..........
Keep updating such romantic and funny updates.........
Edited by nisha1984 - 15 years ago

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