Bas...Yun Hi...(AR) UPDATED pg 24

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
hope to get long part
& update soon
next time😡

love
Riddss

Thank You! 😊

And I will take care to post a longer part and sooner too! Lol!

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: crazyforkaran
that was good...
god, i feel bad.. for armaan.
please add me to pm list.
thanks..

Thank You!😊

Will add you to the PM list, just make sure you are on my buddy list.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: ishuKSGKAJEN
nidi.. its awesome due continue...

Thank You! 😊

But who is Nidi? :p

Originally posted by: LOVEDMG-AR
Hi Dear
Finally u updated hehe
Very nice part
Love the friendship between Armaan and Nikki
I hope Armaan ko apna pyaar jaldi wapis mil jaaye.
Thanks for PM
Update soon.

LoveSurat

Thank You! 😊

No problem about the PM.

Originally posted by: anjie22
Hey Do continue........

And PM me when u update next

Thank you for commenting! 😊

Will update soon!

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: jiyaa
sorry ui cant forgive u coz

1. such a late

2. such a short part???????????

plz i want a big update soon

@rae plzzzzzzzzzzzz

Awwww! Sorry, yaar!

But Thank You for commenting! 😊

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Suvarna....
Wow .. .this update was so touchy. KSG had portayed all these feelings a bit too well that can still feel them.

Cool one. Waiting for next update.

Thank You! 😊

I am happy that you could imagine KSG portraying all of that!

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: bsk1
very well written plz continue

Thank You! 😊

Originally posted by: amruta04
hey Raesorry for late reply
nice update
loved it
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm.

Thank You soooo much! 😊

No problem about the PM.

Originally posted by: AR_LOVER
hey awesome ff
cont soon n do pm me

Thank You! 😊

Will update soon!

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repercussion

@repercussion

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

I don't think you, of all, the people on earth need to ask whether or not to continue the story...hell yeah!

Yes, we took a hiatus, yes we went inactive...but now that we are back...back with a smashing part...we are gonna rock, eh?

So the first part leaves you intriguing and the second throws you off... and what with he cliff hanger at the end...Rise! Rise! Satan Rise! little devil with a big brain.

For a minute there, I thought the firend comforting Armaan was Shilpa but Nikki's plead to forget Riddhima threw me off a little bit. Later, it was evident she was only trying to help. Yes, he needs to move on. Who says...they're gonna end up together yay!

I'm eager to read whatever happened at the party later or atleast what Riddhima thinks of her little blabber-mouth when she gets back into senses. It's a waiting game, but what can we really do...o pls update soon...DO NOT DISAPPEAR YET AGAIN!

Until then,

Ciao

PS....continue soon

PPS.....oh you better!😉

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: repercussion
I don't think you, of all, the people on earth need to ask whether or not to continue the story...hell yeah!
Yes, we took a hiatus, yes we went inactive...but now that we are back...back with a smashing part...we are gonna rock, eh?
So the first part leaves you intriguing and the second throws you off... and what with he cliff hanger at the end...Rise! Rise! Satan Rise! little devil with a big brain.

For a minute there, I thought the firend comforting Armaan was Shilpa but Nikki's plead to forget Riddhima threw me off a little bit. Later, it was evident she was only trying to help. Yes, he needs to move on. Who says...they're gonna end up together yay!

I'm eager to read whatever happened at the party later or atleast what Riddhima thinks of her little blabber-mouth when she gets back into senses. It's a waiting game, but what can we really do...o pls update soon...DO NOT DISAPPEAR YET AGAIN!

Until then,
Ciao

PS....continue soon

PPS.....oh you better!😉

Feels good to read your feedback again! 😊

Thank You soooo much for the words of praises and I hope I can write something which deserves all your kind words... 😊

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frndshp_luv_dmg

@frndshp_luv_dmg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Hey Rae...🤗 how are you?where have you been these days? you updated after such a long time...honestly speaking i couldn't have expected that you would update this one...and in the meantime,i had almost forgotten about the story...lol but its good that you decided to update it finally!
coming to the part,you have described Armaan's feelings and Nikki's bonding with him really well!

but this part is very short...i wanted to read more from you after this long gap!!🤔

Continue soon with Riddhima's side of story...will be waiting for your next update.

P.S.-plz update Zindagi spin offs too!

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annihilation

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Posted: 14 years ago

#210

Rae - 🤗

This was beautiful! Seriously very beautiful!

I couldnt describe this as anything else but beautiful.

Because it had the perfect blend of emotions.

You see I have seen quite a few writers here who understand Armaan's character like no one else.Like, what he would do and say in certain situations.Its like, they become Armaan himself when writing.And you are surely one among them.

I loved the transition from scene to scene and part to part here.

Its seems so natural and flowing.

And yes, When you told me about this FF and I knew I hadnt come across this but still did want to come here and check it once because I'm quite forgetful! And see, I havent commented here before this and that means I didnt know about this earlier.Havent recieved any PM too regarding this.So, do add me to your PM list :)

About whether to continue or not, I dont think I need to stress that much because you know you HAVE to! And because I know your potential, I know you'll end the FF just the way you started - BEAUTIFULLY! And yeah, the more parts, the better!

One more thing, dont mind but I might be a little irregular when it comes to reading the parts or commenting because I'm a little busy these days.You know, there are still lot of FF's that have my comments pending.The reason is I love commenting in detail otherwise I dont feel content and because I write so much, there's hardly anytime left for other FFs!

Hope mere mein kuch sudhaar aajaye!

Looking foward to the next part.

Loads of love :)

EDITED:

I forgot to say -

1) I really wished DMG had explored Armaan & Nikki's friendship.After Nikki comes to know about AR, Abhimanyu was soon bought up.I would have liked to see Armaan-Nikki bond more as friends.And this part fullfilled my wish.But this part was berry berry ishhmaal! Nevertheless, I loved it.

2) Please update your Zindagi Spins Offs and when you do please PM me. :)

Edited by herms_angel - 14 years ago