Bas...Yun Hi...(AR) UPDATED pg 24 - Page 22

haanji! toh kab continue kar rahe ho? 😆

nice update.

Aah,Rae ! This Story Got me Hooked! I love how you always end the first chapter with the words we all want to hear,and Yet,We know they can't (They will in the end) be Together.I loved the way you described every one's emotions,Nikki's,Armaan's,Riddhima's ,Sid's. Beautifully written. This line made me Choke on my breath.

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

Aah,Rae ! This Story Got me Hooked! I love how you always end the first chapter with the words we all want to hear,and Yet,We know they can't (They will in the end) be Together.I loved the way you described every one's emotions,Nikki's,Armaan's,Riddhima's ,Sid's. Beautifully written. This line made me Choke on my breath.

"Da..dar..dard ho raha hai, Nikki...it hurts..."

Update soon and add me to the PM list pleassh :)

Love,

Maitree

Originally posted by: frndshp_luv_dmg

Hey Rae...🤗 how are you?where have you been these days? you updated after such a long time...honestly speaking i couldn't have expected that you would update this one...and in the meantime,i had almost forgotten about the story...lol but its good that you decided to update it finally!

coming to the part,you have described Armaan's feelings and Nikki's bonding with him really well!

but this part is very short...i wanted to read more from you after this long gap!!🤔

Continue soon with Riddhima's side of story...will be waiting for your next update.

P.S.-plz update Zindagi spin offs too!

Originally posted by: herms_angel

Rae - 🤗

This was beautiful! Seriously very beautiful!

I couldnt describe this as anything else but beautiful.

Because it had the perfect blend of emotions.

You see I have seen quite a few writers here who understand Armaan's character like no one else.Like, what he would do and say in certain situations.Its like, they become Armaan himself when writing.And you are surely one among them.

I loved the transition from scene to scene and part to part here.

Its seems so natural and flowing.

And yes, When you told me about this FF and I knew I hadnt come across this but still did want to come here and check it once because I'm quite forgetful! And see, I havent commented here before this and that means I didnt know about this earlier.Havent recieved any PM too regarding this.So, do add me to your PM list :)

About whether to continue or not, I dont think I need to stress that much because you know you HAVE to! And because I know your potential, I know you'll end the FF just the way you started - BEAUTIFULLY! And yeah, the more parts, the better!

One more thing, dont mind but I might be a little irregular when it comes to reading the parts or commenting because I'm a little busy these days.You know, there are still lot of FF's that have my comments pending.The reason is I love commenting in detail otherwise I dont feel content and because I write so much, there's hardly anytime left for other FFs!

Hope mere mein kuch sudhaar aajaye!

Looking foward to the next part.

Loads of love :)

EDITED:

I forgot to say -

1) I really wished DMG had explored Armaan & Nikki's friendship.After Nikki comes to know about AR, Abhimanyu was soon bought up.I would have liked to see Armaan-Nikki bond more as friends.And this part fullfilled my wish.But this part was berry berry ishhmaal! Nevertheless, I loved it.

2) Please update your Zindagi Spins Offs and when you do please PM me. :)

Originally posted by: ..KaJenDelena..

WOW! The story took unexpected turn! Nikki and Armaan's relationship is adorable and deep. The dialogues are simple but with great emotion and meaning. Loved the update but uts tooo short! hehe Love the way you wite and explain the emotional state Armaan is in. Hope Ridhimma finds him and tells him the truth! AND DUH you have to continue heheeh Prettty PLEASE updateee sooon! =)