MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#461

awwww.....amazing update
mind blowing
beautifully written
luv the confession
cont soon n tnx fr pm

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#462

WOW....!!!!!
Wait for a sec..... *I am still in Mayur dreamland*........

Yaaa..... back to Earth now....
Firstly, very short update (Sorry for criticising at the very start... 😆...)
But, then when someone(Refer : Me) has completely gone in to Mayur dreamland imagining each and every scene to the utmost that is being read by her on the computer screen and ENJOYING them, writing "Thats it for today" and forcibly bringing her out of that dreamland is a BIG CRIME..... Right na????? *wink*

Ok, now coming back to the update,
it was MINDBLOWING, FANTASTIC, FANTABULOUS, FABULOUS, AWESOME, AMAZING......
I LOVED IT.... *Loved is raised to infinity*

How do you write so well yaar???? Perfect....!!!!!
Loved the flashback......

Now, pls pls pls pls pls update SOON......
Waiting eagerly.....

Till then, *drifting off to Mayur dreamland*....

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#463

Akki you write exceedingly well!!
Wow, I was left reading and reading some parts ..so wonderfully written
that I was so lost in the beauty of the writing as much as in the story
of our own Mayank and Nupur.. forever the sadu and the nautanki..
sigh :)
Absolutely loved the love they held for each other, inspite of the hatred
and their ever so unusual past..always the nhok jhok, always the love..
always mayank and nupur :)
love ya!!

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#464

wow
just loved it
terrific update
thanks for the pm
it was really beautifully written as always
😊

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#465

wow that was an awesome glimpse into Mayank n Nupur's past....
an unusually usual story in which two poles apart individuals like them brought together by fate...
be it Mayank's 'sadu'ness or Nupur's dramatics,
u brought out everything well!
but Nupur's doubts abt their future r understandable...
beautifully written Akansha!

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naina

@naina0123

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#466

Aki...damn you!!how do you do it?? u write so well ya..

ugh..i dont feel like stoppin..want to read n read n read some more...

mayank is drunk..does that mean he wont remeber anything??will it awkward the following mroning??

the flashbacks was amazing..the trip was damn cute..

my fav.line here is

he was ice.she was fire.

edit!

and also..

Nupur Bhushan and Mayank Sharma didn't know they were going to be sharing surnames in a very short span of time.

that bought a huge smile on my face..

and..by the end of the trip..they were potetial lovers..u know line like these..hits the damn target!!!the words..n expressions..u can easily imagine them..makes readin sucha a pleasurable experience..

breaking and entering into nupurs college??whoa..so unlike mayank..but perfect mayank in love!pardon my nonsense..

another fav..LOVE defined mayank n nupur..

seriously..it so true..

oh..and the end..nupur,lets get married!no bendin on kneew..no violins..no roses..

jus him lying on with his head on nupurs lap..n she ruffling his hair..

since..am a lil crazy..i closed my eyes..n played this scene over n over again...n it got better n better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

resrve

Edited by naina0123 - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#467

Hey Akshi

wah wah what an update sweety
Amazing update.
finally their feelings came out and they confessed their love.
After a long fight we got our real mayur.
Yah some misunderstanding ruined their relationship
but the most interesting thing is that both know that they love each other a lot.

and the flashback part was also very fantastic
loved the whole update.

i loved ur writing yaar
it was truly awesome

keep it up
update soon

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#468

Ok, Statutory Warning: Cover your ears! 🤪

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *screams like a crazy maniac*

Akki, I wanna spin and twirl you around right now. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

It was just beyond awesome. I mean I am in total love with it. So beautifully written. Akki you never fail to amaze me. I am literally spell bound by this update. 😍😍😍

So for now, they are back to the passionate lovers again. Which brings me to the fact that this update is so romantic, so passionate.😳 I just am amazed.

And the most pleasant surprise is that you gave us a look into the flashback of their lovestory. And of course it was just beyond beautiful. The typical MayUr story but you made it seem fresh and just new to me. 😃

It was just beyond words Akki (Yet, I said so much 🤔)

Akki, you are a total rockstar. I am in love with this update<3 <3<3

Love ya loads <3<3<3