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Thank u Sweetu.....😳
I Love You....🤗🤗🤗
Bol Diya... Ab comments ke liye intezaar karo....😉.....*smug*
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PASSIONATE AND INTENSE....!!!
These are the only words I can think of for this update... I mean... I'm speechless.... *sigh*...
How can you write such things Akki? Are you for real??? How many times have I told you that you should write a book....seriously... you are very talented Sweetu!!! ⭐️
When I read about such intense MN moments in your FF, I get so much involved that it doesn't feel like a story anymore.. it feels real.... as much as Mayank and Nupur must be feeling that moment for real...! You describe their passion, their intensity, their pain with so much passion in your writing, that you words become picture and update becomes a movie clip.... 👏👏👏
Mayank Nupur in each other's arms... 😍....Nupur confessed finally... OMG... this was a freaking beautiful update... I got goosebumps while reading... Mayank whispering on her neck bone.. shhh...tell me...😍.... goosebumps !! goosebumps !!!
And what a great suprise of their past... it was fabulous.... totally MN way of falling into love... akdu sadu Mayank and bubbly, chirpy Nupur with attitude... 😆....loved how they fell in love... 😍 and loved how Mayank proposed to get married out of the blue... Nupur was surprised......*I know you like surprises...😉*
Mayank Nupur gave in to their love.... their souls together... hearts became one... Love is a bliss.... Nupur is happy and content... but then the fights and misunerstandings and confusion clouding her thoughts again... she is worried if it will happen again.... and her fears are natural.. it's hard to come back into marriage and into love after reaching almost to the divorce...
Very intriguing part Akki... update soon... and more longer part please...
Love ya....!!!
Yours Miffy
p.s. you have some grammatical mistakes in the update... starting with the first sentence... 😆
*smug* 😎.... tumhi se sikha hai....😆
Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
Indian Mythology
