MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 49

oh Akanksha u write so well man.....u r amazing

super super awesome update

do cont soon n thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: -Jess-

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Thank u Sweetu.....😳 You are welcome!😎

I Love You....🤗🤗🤗 I know!😎😎

Bol Diya... Ab comments ke liye intezaar karo....😉.....*smug* Don't be so smug all the time!

EDITED:

PASSIONATE AND INTENSE....!!!Thanks!😳

These are the only words I can think of for this update... I mean... I'm speechless.... *sigh*...How did you write all thats below then???? Bolo ji!!!

How can you write such things Akki? Are you for real???No! I am a vampire! i am a vampire..I am a vampire!!! (Have you heard the song? [YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pKcyYeZqlh4&feature=related[/YOUTUBE] 😆

How many times have I told you that you should write a book....seriously... you are very talented Sweetu!!! ⭐️ Oh! Now that was exaggerated! My book will not sell and the publishers will go bankrupt! Thanks, for the mighty encouragement though!

When I read about such intense MN moments in your FF, I get so much involved that it doesn't feel like a story anymore.. it feels real.... as much as Mayank and Nupur must be feeling that moment for real...! You describe their passion, their intensity, their pain with so much passion in your writing, that you words become picture and update becomes a movie clip.... 👏👏👏 Aweeeeeeee!!! *blushes*

Mayank Nupur in each other's arms... 😍....Nupur confessed finally... OMG... this was a freaking beautiful update... I got goosebumps while reading... Mayank whispering on her neck bone.. shhh...tell me...😍.... goosebumps !! goosebumps !!! Put Vaseline Body Lotion! LOL! Okay! i should stop being so sardonic all the time! My bad! and thank you! I really am humbled! really! really!

And what a great suprise of their past... it was fabulous.... totally MN way of falling into love... akdu sadu Mayank and bubbly, chirpy Nupur with attitude... 😆....loved how they fell in love... 😍 and loved how Mayank proposed to get married out of the blue... Nupur was surprised......*I know you like surprises...😉* Surprises yeah! I like snatching the ground beneath people's feet! i derive..you know what? Sadistic pleasure! LOL!

Mayank Nupur gave in to their love.... their souls together... hearts became one... Love is a bliss.... Nupur is happy and content... but then the fights and misunerstandings and confusion clouding her thoughts again... she is worried if it will happen again.... and her fears are natural.. it's hard to come back into marriage and into love after reaching almost to the divorce...Precisely! Things will go fine now! We are moving towards positivity with a bit of negativity!

Very intriguing part Akki... update soon... and more longer part please... Aur longer?😲 That was 5 pages in word!

Love ya....!!! ME too! (aur shak mat karna!)

Yours and more!

Miffy's sweetu!

p.s. you have some grammatical mistakes in the update... starting with the first sentence... 😆

*smug* 😎.... tumhi se sikha hai....😆 Goes to check! I told you ignore the mistakes! Havent reviewd it!🤗

Originally posted by: sonam961986

wow ... speechless ... it's just an amazing part ... the way they confessed and the backdrop story, wow ... loved it .... you are just wonderful .... the part made my eyes moist and also brought a smile on my face ... truly wonderful ... do update soon!!!

Originally posted by: Alini.

Awesome............

Loved it..........

Contine soon............

Originally posted by: Mou.

oh akki....how do u do that each time? oh my my what a emotional roller coaster ride it was...............i can't tell u how much i love ur writing style! seriously it was so so well written the feelings, the emotion , they was Mayank & nupur's transition happen from their individuality to the way they become THEM..the was he felt it was the strongest moment of their life....it just touched heart!!!!!!!!! I am glad it did! Really glad!

& thanks u so much for the past part..even that was beautifully written.....the mention of sadu , the trip ....the way u describe the two complete different personality of this two & the clashes & yeah fire & ice it was indeed!!!!!!!!! I love everything abt this update..........very very well written akki.God bless u! u write so well u r so young!!!!!!!
this was the best update of WOWY so far for me!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much di!! its an absolute pleasure to know you liked it! =) yeah, about the young part, you'd have to talk to my parents!!! 😆 Best update...Oh! Thank you again! I hope i can keep it up!

btw,u know the next thing u hv to do right? yeah i m talking abt ur other FF that u promised me to update once u r done with this one!!!!!!!!!! Done that the very next day! 😃
so ...back to work !!!!!!! fast!!!!!!!!!!
love u!!!!!!!!🤗 Love you more!!! 🤗🤗(See thats why two hugs! 😆)

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

waooooooo....its beautiful...thank God u updated it......its amazing .... i like the fact tht ur story dnt move here n there.....its right on point .....beautfuly explaind........n pleasure 2 read

Originally posted by: achoose

mindblowing update dear....

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

wow...tht's the only word i can say rite now....coz im speechless
the part was awesome...so many emotions !!
the confession n all......and even d flashback !!
It was touching !!

loved it truly 😊
and thnx fr d pm !!

tc
fatima

Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Wow...This was so ROMANTIC!! Yu cud say wild romance! 😆 With the blood and everythin..but it was seriously a HOT update! I loved their love-story..and sp. the part..of lets get married! 😍

Please update soon!

Originally posted by: stuti123

akansha wat shall i say ..........i am rendered totally speechless .......................it was sooooooo beautifully written ............ the love , the pain , the emotions you hhave expressed everything sooooooo very superbly ..............and the flashback ............when mayur actually met the entire trip ........... everything was just awesome .............. i am falling short of words ............... marvellous update .............do continue soon ..........cant wait to read the next part .......................

Originally posted by: armayurfan

that was so amazingly awesome.
from their first meeting to the last part were so beautifully written.
u write so well.
just loved it.
continue soon & plz clear all their misunderstandings soon.

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Hey Akki

Nice update

Atlast Nups said it

Hop Mayu dosent forget thgs in the morning though u said he wnt but cant trust alchol

Their 1st meet was fab

Liked their nok jhoks n all

So it was Mayu's idea to get married hmmmmmmmmm

Lets c wat happens aage

Update soon plzzzzzzzzzz