MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 46

wow ... speechless ... it's just an amazing part ... the way they confessed and the backdrop story, wow ... loved it .... you are just wonderful .... the part made my eyes moist and also brought a smile on my face ... truly wonderful ... do update soon!!!

oh akki....how do u do that each time? oh my my what a emotional roller coaster ride it was...............i can't tell u how much i love ur writing style! seriously it was so so well written the feelings, the emotion , they was Mayank & nupur's transition happen from their individuality to the way they become THEM..the was he felt it was the strongest moment of their life....it just touched heart!!!!!!!!!

& thanks u so much for the past part..even that was beautifully written.....the mention of sadu , the trip ....the way u describe the two complete different personality of this two & the clashes & yeah fire & ice it was indeed!!!!!!!!! I love everything abt this update..........very very well written akki.God bless u! u write so well u r so young!!!!!!!
this was the best update of WOWY so far for me!!!!!!!!!

btw,u know the next thing u hv to do right? yeah i m talking abt ur other FF that u promised me to update once u r done with this one!!!!!!!!!!
so ...back to work !!!!!!! fast!!!!!!!!!!
love u!!!!!!!!🤗

waooooooo....its beautiful...thank God u updated it......its amazing .... i like the fact tht ur story dnt move here n there.....its right on point .....beautfuly explaind........n pleasure 2 read

wow...tht's the only word i can say rite now....coz im speechless
the part was awesome...so many emotions !!
the confession n all......and even d flashback !!
It was touching !!

loved it truly 😊
and thnx fr d pm !!

tc
fatima

Wow...This was so ROMANTIC!! Yu cud say wild romance! 😆 With the blood and everythin..but it was seriously a HOT update! I loved their love-story..and sp. the part..of lets get married! 😍

Please update soon!

akansha wat shall i say ..........i am rendered totally speechless .......................it was sooooooo beautifully written ............ the love , the pain , the emotions you hhave expressed everything sooooooo very superbly ..............and the flashback ............when mayur actually met the entire trip ........... everything was just awesome .............. i am falling short of words ............... marvellous update .............do continue soon ..........cant wait to read the next part .......................

Hey Akansha, Jess knows everything, she is an antar yami😆.

On a serious note, I can't even tell you Jess how much I lovedddddd the VM. I loved it so much that I have already seen it three times and still feel so wonderful each time I watch it. The song is just beautiful, I would comment in your gallery jee.

Sorry Akansha, I just couldn't help myself after watching such a beautiful beautiful VM! Jess you got a new job man, I had no idea. We rarely get to talk these days. I miss you, hope to see us all together like before na. Congratulations.

Sorry again Akansha, now coming to the update. Man that was soooooooo well written. It had my adrenaline going up and down, Gosh I shouldn't be saying that na hehe. But it was very well written, the emotions of turmoil, anxiety, confusion, love all was poured out really really well.

Keep it up and do update soon honey!

that was so amazingly awesome.
from their first meeting to the last part were so beautifully written.
u write so well.
just loved it.
continue soon & plz clear all their misunderstandings soon.

Hey Akki

I don't have any words to express what I am feeling right now👏