MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#471

awesoooooooome.....
superb....
wonderful....
loved the update...
thanx for the pm........

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Radha

@rads14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#472

u finally updated..🤗
its really amazing..!!!
superb..!!
the flashback was fantastic..😍
its beautifully written..!!!
cont soon

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#473

akansha..no doubt u r an outstanding writer...i hope this ff never ends yaar...i wont ever let u stop mayur ff...NEVER..love u🤗

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Nithya

@tellycrazy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#474

Hey Akansha,

I was absolutely thrilled to see an update of my favourite FF😃😃 and I do not have to mention that I love you for updating!

Coming to the update, it was fabulous😊😊. Finally both of them gave in to their love and is now either with you or without you. Mayank was sloshed yet his emotions were crystal clear and well portrayed. I guess it is the sincerity of the person that matters and for some alcohol is a catalyst to open the lock to their heartfelt emotions. I assume this is what you meant when you wrote that Mayank was aware of what he is doing yet through Nupur's eyes I saw a pretty drunk Mayank.

Nupur did the right thing by giving in😊. In this case, the problem is about giving in right? Both of them are evenly matched in everything as is evident from the flashbacks. All they had to do was admit their unrequited love for each other inspite of their flaws. I should say that you have indeed picked a very tricky combination of traits in a couple to write on and you are doing it beautifully. Sometimes when you let go of your ego and let love cloud your mind, wonders can happen. Mayur too are going through such a phase I hope. Divorce should not be an answer for everything. Hopefully this will not be the last time that nupur sleeps in the arms of her husband😊.

The flashbacks gave us quite an insight about the couple. The sadu Mayank and the bubbly, confident Nupur fell for each other after a trip just like in the show. Lovely story⭐️. I have not watched the VM yet but will edit and tell you as soon as I do. I hope whatever I have written above makes some sense as I write this at 1 am in the morning. 😆 Do continue soon!

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@-SMay31-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#475

OMG ak wat a mindblasting upd...was waiting for dis one...me luv 2 da core..man tht was awesum..rite frm beginning till end..all was beautifully written :D

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#476

brilliant update....
loved ittttt.....
eagerly waiting for da next update....
continue it soooon.....

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#477

Wow awesome.
Try to update next part soon

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#478

amazing!!

my whole body is paining very badly...so I'm not being able to type much. sorry!!

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: -sam-
I loveeeeeeeeee you..... 🤗🤗🤗 3 jhappiya in dipsy's style 😆

you mean D's style? tu bhi D ki tarah jhappiyan dene lag gayi? how many times do i tell you people, i am reserved by Mayank!

It will be terrifffic....

you made my day... Aww thanks for saying that hun! You make me blush!

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Is this story really written by my crazy friend, Aku!
Cant believe it gal! Yeah yeah! Its written by me. Its no plagiarism, don't worry!

Your both ff are so different , OMM!!
I love them, I love whatever you write.
You are an amazing writer. Thank you so much Sami! Thank you! it means a lot! but i know i still have a lot to learn! Now coming to the update.

I loved the pace, the way in which you are expressing them both,its marvellous!
mayank - nupur, they fight but they love each other. Both finally confessed. But now what? I hope they will be back together. they will be of course. Dun worry!
Both know that the other love him/her.
But still in a dilemma.
Hats off to you ..

It was really terriffic. Needless to say I loved it.! Me glad! *hugs*

P.S.- Now waiting for AYNIL. I am writing that one!

@Jess di- I finally watched the VM, I loved it
will edit my comment soon.