MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 44

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Posted: 15 years ago
hv 2 read many missing parts..... do bear wid me plzz..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiiii Aky
How r u?

lovely VM, wonderful work Jess Di

Luvs
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ak12





Ha! *sighs*
sighs with you... phew.. I love your craziness...Embarrassed
Eight time! i am writing this after watching the VM eight time di!!! Seriously, every time i watch it, i forget what to comment and how to!!
I know, you were watching, I didn't get a reply from you for long time and I thought you got bored and fell asleep...😆


Firstly, Thank you so much! Love you! Really! i dunno how to convey my gratitude...Not for this dedication(Kyunki "Mujhe Haq Hai"😆)
Don't copy my favorite movie dialogue.. I love Shahid... Embarrassed
But for coming into my life! Miffy you are a sweetheart!
Aww Sweetu... I thank God for bringing this crazy girl into my life...

Fine Fine!! *controls self* *sighs* I dont think my words are enough to express the beauty of this VM but I am going to comment coz i promised!😳 Seriously miffy, Its just perfect!
LOL...don't feel compelled to comment... I know you loved it...Embarrassed

I love the way it started! The 'I love you' It bears so much pain! Just wow! That Fanaa scene...In which he removes her chunri from her face..It goes so well with the background music! And i love the change in the music there! Seriously i am not going to go on how i like the song, or else i'll never stop!
The music is out of the world.. my VM is an attempt to capture the beauty of the song and your FF.. I know it's not come out as I would have expected...

'See the stone set in your eyes!!' That very scene so apt and perfectly chosen!

The ego, the confusion, the scenes so well chosen!! Goes with the song perfectly di!

And then Mayank "waiting for you"....Ah! those candles behind! So symbolic...So perfect for his turmoil! the wait, the love, the pain, the ego...everything!

At 2.242..the "and you give yourself away' That scene i have loved it! For the passionate love and hate it shows! and it goes so well with the equally passionate song!!! And you give...And you give...And you give yourself away!!!!!!
Everything was inspired from your amazing FF shona... you write with so much passion... my VM is a mere attempt to bring that passion on screen...
I love all the scenes you chose for the ending music! that lingering music..its just a hymn there..not even music!!! And those passionate scenes go so well with the lyric-less song behind!!!!!!!!! Wow!!! You've correctly identified the passion this FF holds! i was skeptical whether that ever came out in my writings.....But it sure did through this VM! Whether it was the love, or the ego or the hate...everything came with passion..Just like the song!!!!!! Just a beautiful Vm di!!!!!
Your writings are ingenious... glad my VM came close to that level of passion... thank u....

Lovely!!!! BTW i'll try to give the ending to this story the way you have ended this VM!😳☺️
*ahem ahem*... I'm excited...Embarrassed

This Vm is going to stay forever with me. This time not coz of Mayank and Nupur, (who sure are the two people who brought us together) but because of the person who made this...I cant even start to thank you miffy! Nonetheless, Thank you for loving me the way you do...with passion!! (And you know it goes without saying that I am straight!😉)
And thank u for loving me the way you do... with your craziness...!! Muaaahhhh!!!
Love you Miffy!! Manifold!!!

Thank you for giving pictures to my prosaic words! Thank you!!!
Your words are like thousands of beautiful colors...100 megapixels resolution... the picture automatically becames beautiful...Day Dreaming
*sighs*!!!!!

*Miffy's sweetu*
's Di





Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
well akansha muhurt kabka hai
i mean update karne ka???
pandit se main bat kar leti hu par kripa drishti banaye rakho is ff par
aur please kuch to likho par thoda bada sa likho pleaseeeeeeee
luv,
Di
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Posted: 15 years ago
are u gonna update it soon or not???... i won't mind spamming your thread * threatening tone*!!!

@jess di, aruna di- are u with me ???
Edited by deepikavasudeva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

are u gonna update it soon or not???... i won't mind spamming your thread * threatening tone*!!!

@jess di, aruna di- are u with me ???

Ofcourse i am in Deeps
ye bhi koi puchane ki bat hai
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabehere


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Ofcourse i am in Deeps
ye bhi koi puchane ki bat hai


yippee... i got one vote
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Edited by deepikavasudeva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva


yippee... i got one vote
[:D/]

take Jess also in
wo bhi hamre sath hai so we are 3 now
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Posted: 15 years ago
Deeps, Aruna, I'll wait till her test is finished on Sunday... but after Sunday, she will be held at gunpoint.... LOL....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jess-

Deeps, Aruna, I'll wait till her test is finished on Sunday... but after Sunday, she will be held at gunpoint.... LOL....


oh... i didn't know abt test... sorry bud... prepare for test for now but after that u can't escape this trio!!😆
all the best for test!! chak de devils!

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