Lamhein..With Rajeev(Shot fics)ud pg14 & siggy 1pg - Page 9

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi Priii !!! Hiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeee😃

Superrrb start dear !! sach me tujhe aisa laga...ya tum log jaise injection dene se pahle meethi meethi batain karte ho...yeh bhi vohi baat hai...??? sach sach bol...varna...varna...😲...main soch k batati hun...😆

main toh Rajeev ki uss ladki ko nazar uthane keliye uksane ki koshish was damn funny...especially the last one which made Shipra look up! ab tujhe toh pata hi hai na...ki Rajeev kuch chahta hai toh pane ki puri koshish karta hai...😃😆

Ek baat batau??? bura to nahi manegi na??? kya karu mujhse raha nahi ja raha... tujhe pata hai main kya soch rahi hun...???nahi na...chal jane de...😆

Actually this name is spelt as KSHIPRA...

Isse jyaada kuch farak nahi padta, but sanskrit name hai na...thoda change aaya toh ARTH ka ANARTH hojayega....😆 😆 main na sanskrit se baht durrrrrrrrrrr hi rahti hun...!!! school me hamari jo teacher hua karti thi...main un se chupa karti thi...!!! sanskrit mere liye baht hi tough subject tha...main biology k chap se kuch hi pal me yaad kar leti thi...par sanskrit k naam se mere paseene chut jate the...!!! phir bhi aap ka baht baht dhanayavaad...jo aap ne hamare marg-darshan karwaye...😆 😆

I like this name very much...😊Aur yeh meri ek friend ka naam hai. ohhh...toh tujhe isliye pasand hai...!!! maine toh kuch aur hi socha tha...

Rajeev aur dadi ka bonding and then kshipra ka uspar haldi ka paani daalna... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆...ab tu yeh soch rahi hogi ki main hass kyoun rahi hun...!!! toh meri pyari DOC MANA...mujhe na bilkul bhi amnesia nahi hua hai...!!! tune pahle yahan par kuch aur hi likha tha...aur baad me tune PURE SUDDH SAKAHARI TARIKE SE SAAF kar diya hai...sahi hai na...???😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆...puch sakti hun kyoun...??? maine pahle bhi kaha tha ki criticizm allowed hai...!!! tum kuch bologe tabhi toh main kuch alag likhne ka sochungi na...

And i was anticipating ki jis ladki ko Rajeev dekhne gaya hai wo wahi hogi !! aur nahi toh kya...short fic hai yaar...varna raj ko 2-4 aur ladkiyan dikha deti...😆

Waahh!!! Kya daadi hai !!! 😛 Har kisiko aisi daadi mile toh vaare nyaare hojaye !😛 tabhi toh kisi ko aisi dadi nahi milti...aisi dadi baht hi rare hoti hain...!!! tabhi toh voh ya toh kisi serial me dikhai dete hain ya phir kisi fic me...😆

Then shaadi and uske baad ka raat ka scene was very nice !! thanqqqqq😃

PAr ab yeh Aneesh kaun hai??? 😕 mujhe kya pata...yeh toh Kshipra ko pata hoga na...😃

Update soon !😃

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hey Priya, hiiiiiieeeeeeeee Yogi...kaisi hai...😃

Wonderful part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏...thanqqqqqqqqqqqq 😃all thanks to gauri...jiske wajah se hum sab ko ye lovely oneshots padhne ko mila... le...sari mehnat meri...aur thanx use...

the scene where raj said to shipra about do biwiyan ...is too funny..waise shipra name is so beautiful ...thanxxxxx yaar...😃

Raj ka samahsya aur samosa ki baat is hillarious ....actually na mera ek chota czn bhai hai...baht chota...5-6 saal ka...!!! voh samosha ko SAMASHYA kahta hai...😆

I loved this dadi so much yaar.. ....she is so funny ..accha tarika dhundha unhone raj ko jagane ka..ghar pe dadi ne thanda pani dhala us pe aur mandir main shipra ne haldi pani daldiya...bechara raj kitna kuch sehena padha ek hi din main 😆 😆 😆 par sagun toh achha hi nikla na...!!! dekh haldi ka pani SUBH hota hai...😆 😆 😆

Raj to shipra ki aankhon ka deewana hogaya....dadi is so sweet ..kitne acchi idea di wo raj ko shipra se milne ka ab unhe bhi pata hai ki un ka pota kisi bhi kaam ka nahi hai...

raj aur shipra sab se chupke bahar baarish main jaana n the way they r enjoying the rain ..its a lovely scene.. tujhe achha laga...??? thanqqqqqq😃

lekin ye aneesh hain kaun ..shipra usko yaad kyun kar rahi thi dimag kharab hai ladki ka...samne us k RAJEEV khada hai aur voh kisi aur ko yaad karr rahi hai...

loved the whole part yaar aur maine tere comments ko😃

please continue soon

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

awesome..............👏 👏 👏...................... thanqqqqqqq & Rajeev................the sweetest.............😳 😳 😳............u made me fall in love with him all over again..................😳 😳 😳................. Rajeev is 2much 12 bache hai...............😆 😆 😆 😆.........................🤣......................
samose........wali samasya........................😆 😆 😆 😆...................2good.............he he he...thanqqqqq Puri...
shipra......is very shy, sweet............as compared to rajeev..............😃......... loved him how he took her out in night........................lets see what happens out there........i wonder whether shipra gonna tell rajeev about anish........😊 😊........ hmmm...last part toh ready hai hi...padh lena...!!! tumhe tumhare sare sawalon k jawab mil hi jayenge...😉
eagerly waiting 4 next part....................to see how exactly their relationship progresses.............😃 aur next part padh kar...vaada karo ki meri dhulai nahi karogi...😆

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

pri is short ff ka next part post karo.. uske baad i'll comment on both ek saath...😃 waise the new short ff was masttt.....😊 thanxxxxx Suri...😃 next part jaldi hi post karungi...par mujhe nahi pata ki tujhe achha lagega ya nahi...😆

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

bohot he sweet up likha haai tumne 😊 thanxxxxx Ria...😃

raj 's convo with her daddi is very sweet and nice they are really friends 😊 ab raj ka dimag toh kaam karta hai nahi...isiliye use ek aise dost ki jarurat toh thi hi na...😉

raj shipra ko pasand karta haai par yeh shipra yeh toh bhai baat he nahin karte 😕par sukar haai in dono ke shaadi ho gaye 😊 haan... baat toh nahi karti...!!! par pata nahi aage kya ho...😃

ab dekhte haai kya hota haai inke life mein aagge jo bhi hoga achha hi hoga kyoun ki main jo writer hun...😉

thanks

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Beautiful story..you write wonderful short fics. thanqqqqq nisha...😳

Raj jin ladkiyon se mila sab ne use samose hi khilaye?bechare ki buri halat ho gayi thi. Raj ki batein sun kar uski dadi samaj jati hai ki raj ke liye unhe kaisi ladki dhoondh ni hai. Raj apni dream girl se mandir mein milta hai aur use dekhta hi reh jata hai. tabhi toh kahte hain hain ki bhagwan k ghar par der hai...par andher nahi hai...😛

Dadi Raj ki aur shipra ki shaadi arrange kar deti hai. The dialogues between raj and his dadi are very sweet?kya idea diya tha unhone raj ko shipra se milne ka?wha..wha.. varna raj achha ladka kaise banta...😆 aur shipra se milne kaise jata...😉

Finally Raj aur Shipra ki shaadi ho jati hai. Raj is taken back to see how beautiful his wife is and wants to capture her image in his mind for ever. Par Shipra bahut kam baat karti hai, Raj wants her to open up and speak her heart. And so he takes her out to get wet in the rains..which she likes doing every year. arre vaah...yaar...tum ne toh puri tarah se jaan liya ki main actuaaly likhna kya chahti thi...thanqqqqq

Par yeh Aneesh kaun hai? And who is the man that shipra saw? Where has Raj taken her? sari batain next part me clr ho hi jayengi...😃

Waiting to know all this and more so please continue soon

Originally posted by: pinky901

nice one

Thanxxxxxxxx Pinky...😃

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hey Priya hiiii Naina...😃
short fics were beautiful n fabulous👏 thanqqqqqqqq😃
in second fic
raj was so sweet 😍 voh toh hamesha se hai...😉
raj shipra ko pasand karta hai 😳par shipra yeh kiski yaadon mein khoyi hui hai😕 fiqar not...main jaldi hi use amnesia ka patient bana dungi...taki voh sirf aur sirf rajeev k bare me soch sake...😛

raj was too much 12 bache🤣🤣 he he he...😆 😆

Do continue soon
plz pm me next tym ab yeh bhi koi kahnewali baat hai...😃

Loves
Naina

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

sweet OS. 👏 👏 👏 thanxxxx Vertika...😃
Raj as usual tere saare fics me nautanki character hi hota hai is me bhi yahi haal hai janab ka. Liked the "Samossa" and "Samasya" combo. Sahi me yaar sab ki betiyaan samossa hi kaise bana sakti hain na? Koi bhi dukhi ho jaayega aise logon se. he he he...main bhi na apne uncle k sath jitne bhi ladkiyon k ghar gayi hun...voh sab na baki dishes k sath samoshe bhi le kar aate the...😆
Dadi ne accha kiya ki paani fek k uthaya us ko. Ek din me kitne baar nahaleyga bechara. Ek baar Dadi maa ne paani fek k uthaya aur doosri baar Shipra ne. Dadi me ek dum mast hain samajh gayi thi vo ki Raj pasand karne laga hai us ko.
Shaadi bhi fix kara di aur jaanti thi acche se ki ladki se milne k baad us k liye na to keh hi nahi paayega vo. Aur hua bhi yah. ab dadi hi toh pote k dil ki baat samjhegi na...😉

Kitna kam bolti hai na SHipra, dadi ne kya solid idea diya tha Raj ko us k opinion k baare me pata lagane ka. he he he...varna raj ko kaise aise ideas aate...
Shaadi bhi ho gayi, Nice scenes b/w Raj n SHipra, abhi se itna khayal hai us ka ki first barish me le jaa raha hai ghumaane. 😉 😉 😉 ab kya karega bichara...pata raha hai...use...😉 😉 😉
waiting for second part.

Originally posted by: danish1

its beautiful.

jaldi continue karna