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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
prii continue karo please..jaldi se...isse pehle kii mere pm's kii bouchaar shuru hojaye, continue karde...😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
hi ur short ff are very nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya Hiiii Suhana...😃

How r u??? thik hun...kyoun ki bahar baht barish ho rahi hai...aur mujhe barshat baht achhi lagti hai...ha ha ha...!!! tum batayo...ki hal chal hai...😃
How can u manage to write such wonderful short fics..U r indeed a brilliant writer👏👏👏👏👏 arre nahi...main koi brilliant writer nahi hun...😳!!! main jab inter me thi na...tabhi yeh bimari mujhe lagi...likhne ki...aur tabhi se chup chup kar kuch na kuch likhti rahti thi...!!! ab aise hi short stories maine kuch likhe hain...apne dairy me...!!! unhe padh kar Gauri ka dimag ghum gaya tha...aur us ne yeh karnama kar k dikhya diya...😆
This short fiction was really cute..thanqqqqqq😃
I really loved it n all thanks to Gauri...if she wont have forced u den u haven't thought of posting these fictions here.. haan...aur us k liye use maine baht sari galiya bhi di thi...😆!!! ab yeh toh koi baat nahi banta hai ki 'main bore ho rahi hun...toh sab ko bore karun'...😆
I too love samosa but I am missing them in Canada..😭😭 but i dont know how to make it.. mujhe bhi kahan aata hai Samosha banana...!!! main toh bass khana janti hun...😛
Those girls whom Raj met must have been real gud cooks..But these samosas created lot of trouble for Raj..😆😆 samoshe ne us ki SAMASHYA jo badha di thi...😆 😆
Mandir mein Raj ko apne sapnon ki ladki mil hi gayi.. kahte hain na...'bhagwan k ghar par der hai par andher nahi hai'...😆
I really loved all this talk between dadi n Raj..she seems to b quite intelligent.. dadiyon k fav dail...'hum ne dhup me baal safed nahi kiye hain'...isiliye dadiyaan baht intelligent hoti hain...😆
She knew her grandson has fallen in love with Shipra.. un ki ankhen bhi baht tez hoti hain...😆
Finally Raj jis ladki ko dekhne gaya woh uski mann ki this..Raj was so happy to see her..But yeh Shipra kuchh zyaada hi kam nahin bolti??? haan...kyoun ki mere sare fiction me heroine baht jyada bolti hai...!!! isiliye maine socha ki kahin toh aisi jagah ho...jahan heroine thoda kamm bole...😃
anyways finally they got married.. short fic hai yaar...isiliye karwana pada shaadi jaldi se...varna toh main aaram se 1 saal k baad karwati...😆
I too love rain..I think every1 loves it..Its raining here.. mujhe bhi baht pasand hai...!!! kyoun ki main har saal bimar padti hun...aur voh bakwas soup n veg...godd... yeh sab kha k na mujhe itna bura lagta hai ki main sochti hun ki...phir bariush me kabhi nahi bheegungi... par...😆
Raj n Shipra r enjoying their first romantic rain..😃 haan...aur bhi ajeeb tarike se...😛
Pls continue soon
Bye

Thanxxxxxxxxxxx Suhana...!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Very nice and funny shot....!!! tum ne sach me padha ise...??? khayo...meri kasamm...wait wait...meri nahi...kisi aur ki khayo...😛

Aur Gauri stupid nahi, bahot achi hai...agar woh tumhe force naa karti toh hum yeh sab padh hi nahi paate...!!! haan...haan...ab toh vohi ek achhi ladki bachi hai is duniya me...main toh kuch hun hi nahi...😭 😆

Thanxxxxxxxxxxx Dhara...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Priya... Hiiii Guglu...Happy B'day sweety...😃

Bhala ho Gauri ka jiski wajah se tune iss fic ko edit karne ka irada chod diya... haan...varna voh phir se bata deti...!!! baht pareshan karti hai yaar...😛

Superb update...mazaa aa gaya padhke... thanqqqqqqqqq😃

SHIPRA aur Rajeev... it was so beautiful...a bit hillarious though... ab tujhe toh pata hi hai meri bimari k bare me...isiliye virus aa hi jate hain...😆
par iss Aneesh ka kya chakkar Hai...abb iss story me ye teesra insaan kahan se aa gaya...ye to tu hi bata sakti hai... Aneesh naam ka prani voh hai...jinhe kabab me haddi kahte hain...!!! par fiqar not...main hun na...us aneesh ko machhar ki tarah nahi nikala toh mera naam...ahh...bhul gayi yaar...vaise mera naam kya tha...???😆
isliye next part jaldi post kar...aur mere short comments ka bura mat manna yaar...m really hard pressed for time... pata hai yaar...aur main bura nahi maan rahi hun...!!! tu itni BG hai...us par phir bhi mere fics par aayi...aur is bakwas ko hajam kiya...yehi mere liye badi baat hai...😃

Update soon...

Love
Guglu

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxx Guglu...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

very nice start.................... thanqqqq deepa...😃

raj is high.y captivated by her eyes and the convo was very funny....................shaadi bhi ho gayi....................very cute part... short fic hai na...isiliye mujhe jaldi me dono ki shaadi karwani padi...varna main bhi serials ki tarah...kam se kam 1 saal tak tum sab ko pakane k baad hi dono ki shaadi karwati...😆
................cont soon and thanks for the pm......................

Thanxxxxxx Deepa...!!!😃...you know wat... main jab 10th me thi na...tb meri ek baht hi achhi frnd thi us ka naam bhi Deepa tha...!!! voh hostel me rahti thi...n final xams k baad mujhe achanak Gujrat jana pada...aur jab main wapas aayi toh voh apne ghar ja chuki thi...!!! meri us se phir kabhi bhi mulakat nahi ho payi...aur na hi mere paas us ka koi no tha aur na hi address...😭... tumhare naam se us ki yaad aati hai...😃
Edited by Lion_Priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome

too good
superb
loved it
plz continue soon

Thanxxxxxxxx Madhu...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome update..... too good. loved it.continue soon dear.

Thanxxxxxxx Rakhi...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: prerna1

that was beautiful
plz continue soon

Thanxxxxx Prerna...😃

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