Lamhein..With Rajeev(Shot fics)ud pg14 & siggy 1pg

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

finally u updated dear.....................very lovely ending..................rajeev is very sweet and his understanding and being there for her was very nice and his explanation about her so called first love was also nice...............lovely ending dear................

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Hi Priya

Nice to see u updating this one too..Lovely ending👏👏

Raj n Kshipra(Even I didn't knew that Kshipra spells like dis... Thanx Mana for this information.😊) scenes were really cute..😛

Raj is so nice ..he seems to like everything..Where r such guys now???

Kshipra wanted to b completely honest with him..She told him abt Aneesh..many people wud not have understood this but Raj being a perfect man knew wat Kshipra is going through..Aneesh was a jerk..He was selfish n he didn't think of any1 except himself..😡😡

Kshipra is really lucky to have him in her life..😊 Marriage is based on trust,love n friendship n with Raj she cud have all this..

I loved this scene

"kshipra ne distracted sa jawab diya...phir kaha:- "aap ne mujh se shaadi kyoun ki...???"

Rajeev:- "kyoun ki main ek aisi ladki se shaadi karna chahta tha...jise SAMOSHE banana na aata ho...!!!"🤣😆

Raj is really too much..But he was right when he told Kshipra that she never loved Aneesh..It was just an infactuation..Love is something very deep n binding..

When Kshipra met Aneesh she cud only feel releived that she never married Aneesh else how cud she ever had Raj in her life. 😛 He deserved that rich spoiled girl who insults him in public places.🤢

He is becoming a vital part of her life..

I loved the scene where Kshipra realized her love for Raj..She was so lost without him..😭😭

The ending was gud n that poem was just brilliant👏👏👏

"U came in my lyf as a gift
Who has been gifted by God
U came in my heart wid a swift
N 4 whom I alwayz thank Lord
U r d one who made me smile
N fixed my broken heart
I can't stay without u even a while
Cz u gave my lyf a new start
U filled my lyf wid happiness once again
U hav given me d spirit to revive
U brought everythin back to d same
U hav brighten up my lyf
Brighten up my lyf lighten up my lyf
Wid d glory ov ur face
Which has got all d grace
Wid d shine ov ur eyes
Who dun eva tell lies
U r my sun u r my moon
In my lyf u r a boon
I hope dis bond btwn us stays 4ever
Coz I dun want to lose u however.."

Bye

Pls do continue writing such cute OS😊

Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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Bharathi

@bharathi29

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

finally u have updated yaar

lovely ending

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

that was so good and beautiful

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Nice siggie Priya😊 Gud work Yogita👏👏

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Hi Priya

nyc siggy
gr8 work Priya n yogi

Naina

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Lovely siggie Priya....and Yogi dear....I must say u r an awesum teacher....hehe. Mind you.....u hav a student here as well (thats me...hehe)....I'll be joing ur tutions soon....lolz!! Jokes apart....mujhe ye siggie dekhne me ek ghanta laga....seriously!!! (due to wat else but my net) But for Rajeev.....everything was worth of it....hehe. Gr8 work!!!

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

priya the siggy is just beautifullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll awesum i loved it

plzzzz aase he siggy bana ke humare gift dete rahena

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

😍 😍

lovely ..................... 👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏................. so many hearts 😳😳😳😳😳............. 😃hum sab ka ek ek hai 😛😛😛😛😛.................
awesome work done............. 👏 👏👏👏👏👏