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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Hey Priya,

Wonderful part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏...all thanks to gauri...jiske wajah se hum sab ko ye lovely oneshots padhne ko mila

the scene where raj said to shipra about do biwiyan ...is too funny..waise shipra name is so beautiful

Raj ka samahsya aur samosa ki baat is hillarious ....I loved this dadi so much yaar.. ....she is so funny ..accha tarika dhundha unhone raj ko jagane ka..ghar pe dadi ne thanda pani dhala uspe aur mandir main shipra ne haldi pani daldiya...bechara raj kitna kuch sehena padha ek hi din main 😆 😆 😆

Raj to shipra ki aankhon ka deewana hogaya....dadi is so sweet ..kitne acchi idea di wo raj ko shipra se milne ka

raj aur shipra sab se chupke bahar baarish main jaana n the way they r enjoying the rain ..its a lovely scene..lekin ye aneesh hain kaun ..shipra usko yaad kyun kar rahi thi

loved the whole part yaar

please continue soon

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

awesome update..... too good. loved it.continue soon dear.

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Prerna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

that was beautiful
love the way lala acted in the beginning
i hope lala is not the villain and he dont use this info against RN
plz continue soon

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Prerna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

that was beautiful
plz continue soon

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Purnima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

awesome..............👏 👏 👏......................& Rajeev................the sweetest.............😳 😳 😳............u made me fall in love with him all over again..................😳 😳 😳.................
Rajeev is 2much 12 bache hai...............😆 😆 😆 😆.........................🤣......................
samose........wali samasya........................😆 😆 😆 😆...................2good.............
shipra......is very shy, sweet............as compared to rajeev..............😃......... loved him how he took her out in night........................lets see what happens out there........i wonder whether shipra gonna tell rajeev about anish........😊 😊........
eagerly waiting 4 next part....................to see how exactly their relationship progresses.............😃

Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

pri is short ff ka next part post karo.. uske baad i'll comment on both ek saath...😃 waise the new short ff was masttt.....😊

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

bohot he sweet up likha haai tumne 😊

raj 's convo with her daddi is very sweet and nice they are really friends 😊

raj shipra ko pasand karta haai par yeh shipra yeh toh bhai baat he nahin karte 😕par sukar haai in dono ke shaadi ho gaye 😊

ab dekhte haai kya hota haai inke life mein aagge

thanks

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Beautiful story..you write wonderful short fics.

Raj jin ladkiyon se mila sab ne use samose hi khilaye…bechare ki buri halat ho gayi thi. Raj ki batein sun kar uski dadi samaj jati hai ki raj ke liye unhe kaisi ladki dhoondh ni hai. Raj apni dream girl se mandir mein milta hai aur use dekhta hi reh jata hai.

Dadi Raj ki aur shipra ki shaadi arrange kar deti hai. The dialogues between raj and his dadi are very sweet…kya idea diya tha unhone raj ko shipra se milne ka…wha..wha..

Finally Raj aur Shipra ki shaadi ho jati hai. Raj is taken back to see how beautiful his wife is and wants to capture her image in his mind for ever. Par Shipra bahut kam baat karti hai, Raj wants her to open up and speak her heart. And so he takes her out to get wet in the rains..which she likes doing every year.

Par yeh Aneesh kaun hai? And who is the man that shipra saw? Where has Raj taken her?

Waiting to know all this and more so please continue soon

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Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Hey Priya
short fics were beautiful n fabulous👏
in second fic
raj was so sweet 😍
raj shipra ko pasand karta hai 😳par shipra yeh kiski yaadon mein khoyi hui hai😕

raj was too much 12 bache🤣🤣

Do continue soon
plz pm me next tym

Loves
Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

sweet OS. 👏 👏 👏
Raj as usual tere saare fics me nautanki character hi hota hai is me bhi yahi haal hai janab ka. Liked the "Samossa" and "Samasya" combo. Sahi me yaar sab ki betiyaan samossa hi kaise bana sakti hain na? Koi bhi dukhi ho jaayega aise logon se.
Dadi ne accha kiya ki paani fek k uthaya us ko. Ek din me kitne baar nahaleyga bechara. Ek baar Dadi maa ne paani fek k uthaya aur doosri baar Shipra ne. Dadi me ek dum mast hain samajh gayi thi vo ki Raj pasand karne laga hai us ko.
Shaadi bhi fix kara di aur jaanti thi acche se ki ladki se milne k baad us k liye na to keh hi nahi paayega vo. Aur hua bhi yah. Kitna kam bolti hai na SHipra, dadi ne kya solid idea diya tha Raj ko us k opinion k baare me pata lagane ka.
Shaadi bhi ho gayi, Nice scenes b/w Raj n SHipra, abhi se itna khayal hai us ka ki first barish me le jaa raha hai ghumaane. 😉 😉 😉
waiting for second part.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago