' Two Wheels Made Us One' Part XVIII (story ends)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Hi
Fabulous Part 4
Mani understood her wrong previously but now he was understanding her in right way
They started understanding each other so early hmm that's Good

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Okay so Mani now realizes he was wrong....well I wud not say it was completely wrong to get those impression abt her....however he cud be sensible to meet her once....anyways....I'm glad der se sahi par akkal to ayi!! And yes....I quite liked the kinda girl Mani wants for him....its interesting u knw....but sumhow quite realistic....for todays world!! Pls continue soon dear!!

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Mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

hey di!

woh sorry for not being able to comment.....actually light problem tha isiliye online nahi aa paa rahi thi!

i love sitting in a car while opening the window and enjoying the cool air on my face.....i always have a smile on my face and peace in my mind.,

mani is understanding....i like that....he is so sweet and kind to take the entire blame on himself....

i wish that akshaya ke papa theek ho jaayein.....but di the last poetic lines gave me the spirit.........u always solve my problems without knowing them at all! how?

glad that mani is noticing how brave and a fighter she is!

wow! mani ka dimaag toh abhi se kaam karne laga hai.....thank God he thought that he was wrong! ek ladki ko sirf uski photo dekhkar reject karna galat hai.....use jaano toh pehle!

but glad ki mani liked this type of girl.....its so realistic and not that sugary stuff!

and i loved how they both reached the hospital on time and akshaya behaved.....

loved the update.....awesome and full of maturity.....

love,
Mahak

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Kanu K

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

now i am seeing the maturity in two people. How strange it is na , sometimes what we think of others they are not like that at all.

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

hey bhoomi !!!

now am mad on myself !!! 😛

Why am I soooooooooo late to read and comment !!!

but...like they say...BETTER LATE THAN NEVER ! 😛😛

Wonderful story and you know am dyingggggg to read further...

Jaldi se post karo yaar !!! 😊

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: sun_423
bhoomi once again main tumhare ff ke hii chakkar kaat rahii thi.. i was checking if you had updated.. & with in five minutes i refreshed the page & i saw that the part 4 is posted.. tho even before your pm arrived i started reading the ff.. this clearly shows how eager i'am to read the ff...hehehe... the part was good.. i liked the way akshaya was handling the situation... calmly with a quiet mind.. she is not letting the panic take over her.. but she is behaving like a sensible woman who has head on her shoulders.. that is nice to see.. see though akshaya is brought up in a traditional outlook but still she is modern in her way & styles of living.. i'am glad that mani is seeing his faults... well i cannot say that mani is totally at fault.. but it is just the general mind set of the people in the society to judge them without knowing them... like how the neighbor told mani that akshaya is scared of lifts & all.. but that person does not know that akshaya though has some fears but at the time of crisis & need she has the guts to overcome those fears... this is the general tendency of people to generalize.. even though they don't know much about a person, but still they have opinions about them... i'am glad that mani is finally seeing the true side of akshaya... he thought she was a introvert, a weakling, but now he has seen the real side of what akshaya is the calm, the composed, the extrovert & the strong girl... i liked the way akshaya had risen to the situation & told mani to drive fast.. though she fears bike rides still she wants mani to drive fast so that she can be with her mom.. this shows that akshaya is a combination of a traditional plus a modern girl... she loves her parents, but at the same time can handle great responsibilities, she is not a weak person... yeh hui na baat... i liked mani's concern for akshaya.. & so finally akshaya holds mani's shoulder... nicee.. unke dono ke beech kii doorie i mean on the bike seat has reduced now this is a indication that un dono ke dilon kii doorie bhii mittne lagenge aur unki dil ek dusare se hamesha ke liye judh jaayenge... akshaya is calming her mom, i'am sure mani is observing everything from the corner of his eyes.. & i somewhere feel that may be mani has started falling for akshaya, the girl whose proposal he had rejected because of his prejudice... ab aayega mazaa... mani is so mature & understanding he gives akshaya & his family the space they need.. he does not want to intrude into their privacy as he is a outsider for them... so he decides to wait outside in the lobby & tells them to tell him if they need anything.. awww.. howw nice of him.. this itself shows that mani is concerned about akshaya... & he does not want to leave her or her family alone in the time of need... well good... akshaya has put up a brave front in front of her mother.. but may be even she is scared.. uske darr ko nikal ne ka bas ek hii tareeka hai & that is she should talk about her fears to someone & let it go... & i think the best person she can talk to is mani who is waiting in the lobby of the hospital...anyway bhoomi dear good going... it was a nice part... mani & akshaya have started seeing each other in other light.. in a different angle... they are trying to understand each other with the small small things they do... especially mani... & this is the best thing.... great work...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 dear please continue soon..waiting for the next part eagerly..😊

Hi Surya,

feels such a pleasure to know that u enjoy and wait eagerly for the

next part... it makes me to spped up my want to post the next part

as well too soon.. and also get eager to know how u feel abotu it.

U are the first to comment on the 4th part and so happpy to know u

were absolutely quick enough to see it as it was posted even before

the Pm.. many times i forget to Pm and as i log out i recollect and

sit doign that.. hehe

yes Akshaya is calm composed and brave.. she isnt the shy girl who

woudl cry at drop of a hat and make situation seem even worse.. she

is responisbily level headed and strong and slowly Mani is gettign

to knwo that.. As u rightly put across Surya she is traditional but

yet modern and strong .. Yes Mani is realising his fault and how he

shoudl be so judgmental only by the look of few standard things..

he has been impressed by Akshaya now..

"akshaya though has some fears but at the time of crisis & need

she has the guts to overcome those fears"

U have aptly said this dear.. and its so common to see people

assuming so many things when it comes to marraige issues.

hehhehe Ya Now she holds on to him, and is going to trust him and

move ahead for the sake of his parents and she does know he is nice

with his way of handling alogn withher. So rightly both r impressed

by each other. now when will they say it out na.. lets see when

that happpens..
pass to hain.. dil saaath ab tak nahi.. lekin they dont dislike

like each other.. but love nahi hai.. its too early for them even

to think that way.. but when will they na.,. hmm

Mani is a gentleman and he has proved at situations how to behave

and how wellbehaved matured and sweet he is.. Akshaya surely liked

all these things in him ..and may be thats what all impresses her..

not talks but behaviours nad handlign of situations.. she knows her

nature now na little little sweet composed extrovert.. while she is

delicate strogn and introvert.. lets see if they start likign more

or this is goign to be the end of the meeting..

Surya dear.. thanks a lot for ur comments..and the applaud my way..

it made me to smile and know u love me so much.. u have poured so

much warmth love ..i am overwehlemed.thansk a bunch der.. luvu

.tc.. will post next part soon..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: pinky901
nice part

Hi Pinky,

glad ot know u liked this part as well.. tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey bhoomi..
Its a great part this time..The situation akshaya is going through is a very difficult one..every second is very valuable for her as its her father's life which is at stake...but she handled her self ..controlled n took right decision at right time to call ambulance n get to hospital in time instead of going to home n then hospital as it will only increase time..
Manidhar realised that though akshaya is a traditional girl she is independant n can take decisons at right time..which made him think about her again..and his decision to reject her is correct or not?
On the other hand akshaya too noticed manidhar has given her space n helped her a lot..though she didnt get effected by his rejection..she too has diverted his thoughts over him n his nature..
Hope her father's operation goes well..and mani -akshaya realise about their opinions..which earlier were wrong ...
Great. as usual..
Good wishes..
sri:-)

Hi Sri,

glad dear u liked this part more. there was more of the

udnerstnading i guess of each other. Yes its very precious time

proves so fatal at times.. so she knows understnad and has gain

strength and wisdom to do things right and not panic and keep

crying.. thats what Mani is impressed with.

U have rightly said Sri, she is traditional but has a modern

outlook independent in nature.. she is the protective child of the

parent who woudl think many times before stepping outside alone..

as Mani was assuming.. Ya he isnt sure abotu hsi decision now..and

feels he misunderstood her.

Yes Akshaya understood and impressed by his nature and behaviour a

kind hearted.. sweet guy with maturity to handle situation with

ease. Hope they both undersstnad more.. btu how things will

proceed.. is thsi gogin to be the end of themeeting..?? wait and

read further..

thanks for ur lovely comments Sri, love to have them and read

them.. ur wishes help me to write better ..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: spvd
both are getting to understand and knowing each other very well..................cont soon..................

Hi,

yes both are getting to understnad each other more and more..and

gettign impressed and enjoygin time spent along.. thanks for ur

comments.. tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
bhoomi awesome fic i loved the way u showed how people have misconceptions abt others

Hi Jyothi,

Glad dear u r enjoyign hte parts as they follow.. yup people have

so many misconceptions that many times only lookign at a backgroudn

people assume and expect certian things.. its improtant to personal

talka dn meet.. good to get ur comments dear.tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
Hii Bhoomi,
Awesome Part 4... Loved it...!!
You have clearly shown Akshaya's Practical nature and Mani's maturity in this part...
Very Entertaining to read..!!

You know... When I had read the initial parts, I was not sure about the reason why Mani rejected Akshaya even without seeing her.... I felt it was wrong on his part...
( Now, you must be thinking why am I thinking so much but as I have already told you, your writing seems so realistic that I actually start imagining....!!! )
But, in Part 4, the reason was explained very clearly....

Looking forward to read the rest of the story....
Pls update soon...
And Thanx for the pm...

- Pooja

Hi Pooja ,

Glad u enjoyed readign the part 4 so much.. Yup tried ot make it as

genuine as possible and when once the charcter graph is fixed i set

boundaries for myself as well and cant write anythign beyound the

want of the charcters.,.. so they behave what they could in a

situation..they cant feel more in such a tensed time but feel the

understnadign nature they observe..

yes Mani rejecting.. even Akshaya and her family were in doubts..

Mani here isnt wrong at all.. its just people wonder it to be that

way .. they guess it that way..but times have changed and surely

people have a vast knwodelge.. good ot know u enjoy reading and

imagine the perspective of the charcter..and wonder think how they

did why and what coudl be the follow up.. as a writer i enjoy such

thoguths to share and feel good to have such comments..thansk

indeed for readign and commetning on my story parts so regularly it

pleases me soo much.. thanks dear..

Yup hope u enjoy the next parts.. and see how things proceeds what

mroe they feel and understnad..share tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: mad_lovee
hey i hv read all the 4 parts in one go:-)
So anothr love story in the makin:p
So far i liked it:-)

Hi Himani dear,

U r here reading...oyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee wah hhhhhhhhhhji wahhhhh..

Thanks a ton for the lovely banner dear.. thank u sooooo very

much.. and comign to the story.. u read all the parts in one go..

kya baat hai tussi bore nahi huee.. yeh parts itney lonnnn g nahi

they shayad.. anyways glad u coudl read and enjoye ur time.. Yup

this story was pending from ages.. and thank fully i decided t

complete it soon and hoepfully full story posted hogi in time whcih

i have set.. thanks for reading dear and commenting... and also

thank for discussign the tile and we came up with this one after

few chats. see opur chats inspire me soo much.. luvu .. hugs ur

way..
tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Hey Bhoomi... kya update tha.. often girls are shown so sensitive and matured, but in this case, apart from Akshaya, Mani also looks like a very sensible, matured and responsible guy.. And often, we get deceived by the looks of the person.. If only we could delve deeper inside the person, external appearances will not do much of a harm... I am glad Mani is realizing all this...

Beautiful update!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

Hi Divya,

Glad that u liked this one dear. U think boys arent shown mature..

ahh u have missed reading a lot of my short stories especially the

non ff ones than.. there are so many in which guys are shown so

mature.. real mey matt poochu we rarely find such men..lol.. Yup he

is a very sensible person and so was wonderign why meet someone and

then say No when u think she wont match up.. but ya looks deceived

him and the standard thought process as well..now he is so very

much impressed by akshaya and loks liek she too likes him as a

person and feels nice in hsi company.. ab dekhey agey kya hota

hai.. lol..

Mani has realised a llot ..and dont know if this realisation will

be of any help to him or not.. hope u enjoy reading the next part..

dear.. luvu .. thanks for ur comments.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur
Heyyyyy bhoomi
Fab update yaar
Really liked how effeciently akshaya handled the situation
N mani is really matured n understanding person
I always fall in love with ur story's characters
Do continue soon

Hi Seema,
So u liked Akshaya and her way of handling things.. yup she is

strong and mature to take responsibilites na.. yes Mani to is

mature and sensible.. they look like a apt match na.. lets see

match makign kaise hoga.. ..awww so sweet of u to say that.. u fall

in love with the story charcters and i can create them only as i

have ur love with me which makes me to write them..and creat them..

tc
Bhoomi

Originally posted by: -Nabeeha-
Hi
Fabulous Part 4
Mani understood her wrong previously but now he was understanding her in right way
They started understanding each other so early hmm that's Good

Hi Nabeeha,

glad that u liked the next part as well.. Yes he understood her

wrongly and does know that was incorrect and now they have seen a

side mature of each other..sensible as well..and getting impressed

too.. haan understnading too lets see agey kya hota hai..hope u

enjoy the next part..tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Okay so Mani now realizes he was wrong....well I wud not say it was completely wrong to get those impression abt her....however he cud be sensible to meet her once....anyways....I'm glad der se sahi par akkal to ayi!! And yes....I quite liked the kinda girl Mani wants for him....its interesting u knw....but sumhow quite realistic....for todays world!! Pls continue soon dear!!

Hi Sumaiya,

Yes Mani realises he was wrong and understnad likes wsomewhere

Akshaya and her strogn self.. Akshaya too is getting impressed..yes

i guess he was somewhere wanting not to go ahead when he already

realised that the match may not be right.. go meet and then u have

the same thoguhts u wodner why u r lettign someone hope and let

them down..may be he thoguths that.. whatver it be destiny always

has other plans we rnt aware of na..

glad to know u enjoyign reading this dear..and replyign too thguh u

have coomp problems..luvu tc

Bhoomi