' Two Wheels Made Us One' Part XVIII (story ends)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ssh57
Good going Bhoomi. I like the practical way the story moves. Thanks for the pm, Love, shardha

Hi Shardha,
Glad that u liked reading the story so far and foudn the simple

narration practical as u put it nice.. thanks dear for reading and

commenting.. tc luvu
Bhoomi

Originally posted by: sam-18
wow, i have read ur stories on Mayur, and i loved them, but was'nt able to comment earlier.....
This is just beautiful...
I would love to read whatever you write
So please add me to pm list

Hi Sam,

Oh nice to know u have read my previous MayUr ff and have liked

readign them.. thanks ... Oh feels nice that u enjoy this non

serial based and woudl enjoy reading this too.. surely will Pm and

keep u in the PM list..tc
Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Kanuk
Hey Bhoomi,

Again awesome part. I can see Mani would admire her presence of mind and her calmness as he witnesses how she takes care of situations in need.

Great going

Kanu

Hi Kanu,

Good to know u r enjoying reading and have liked the part.. and u

surely have got it right bang on must say... yup thats whats gone

happen and how Mani udnerstnads her strogn nature and presence of

mind is to be seen..hope u enjoy the next part too..luvu tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Bhoomi is here.... Bhoomi is here.... Bhoomi is here.... Bhoomi is here.... Bhoomi is here.... and that too with a terrific FF.. non-serial based... Absolutely beautifully and brilliantly written.. I am writing this for all the 3-parts... while reading the arangetram part, though, I was reminded of mine... my first vocal concert.... I was so damn nervous... abhi bhi passene chootte hain... Anyway, I totally loved the entire concept... Next time lamba comment karoongi.. me not keeping well...

Romba nalla irundadu.. 😛😛😛👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Hi Divya,

Bhoomi BHooMi is here and see DIvya Divya Divya is right here with

her comments on this one that too on a SUnday.. i was wonderign u

will beat me key yeh weekend pey ohho..but glad u read and u

commented.. btu what am i hearing u rnt well.. kya hua hai..chalo

chaloo take care of urself..have medicine and take soem rest..

jyada stress mat loo dear..and smile more it heals on its own u

see.. my jhappi also sendign it across u.. Ek warm jhappi hope it

does help u.. luvu and get well soon dear...

and u liked the concpet and the arengetam..oh u remembered urs. hmm

u were nervous but sureiouly mast gaya hoga..i wish i coudl attend

that..ahhh.. :d..

hey Romba santosham Irkirya with ur coments.. luvu tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Hey Bhoomi....firstly sorry for being late....but my laptop is not working so I am a bit messed up....however its a lovely story u hav started!! Two wheels to make them One....very interesting concept....and a lovely title....hehe. I'm really liking the way it is progressing....hope u continue soon.

I'll try to reply to the other writings as well...but it may take sum tym....though I knw u understand it all!!

Hi Sumaiya dear,
happy that u liked reading the story, the title as well.. ur

comments are always somethign i look forwrd to..dear..

Oh ur laptop isnt workign properly.. it use to happen with me a lot

and have many stories pending with this problem.. kitni baar post

nahi karti has laptop isnt workgin and if it is its very slow

internet connectivity.. chalo no problem i wil wait for it to get

better.. btu u know what ..inn sab problem ke hotey huee bhi u read

and replied somehow makes me know how much u love me and want to

appreciate my work.. thanks a ton dear..and it means fo much...tc

luvu
Bhoomi

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

bhoomi once again main tumhare ff ke hii chakkar kaat rahii thi.. i was checking if you had updated.. & with in five minutes i refreshed the page & i saw that the part 4 is posted.. tho even before your pm arrived i started reading the ff.. this clearly shows how eager i'am to read the ff...hehehe... the part was good.. i liked the way akshaya was handling the situation... calmly with a quiet mind.. she is not letting the panic take over her.. but she is behaving like a sensible woman who has head on her shoulders.. that is nice to see.. see though akshaya is brought up in a traditional outlook but still she is modern in her way & styles of living.. i'am glad that mani is seeing his faults... well i cannot say that mani is totally at fault.. but it is just the general mind set of the people in the society to judge them without knowing them... like how the neighbor told mani that akshaya is scared of lifts & all.. but that person does not know that akshaya though has some fears but at the time of crisis & need she has the guts to overcome those fears... this is the general tendency of people to generalize.. even though they don't know much about a person, but still they have opinions about them... i'am glad that mani is finally seeing the true side of akshaya... he thought she was a introvert, a weakling, but now he has seen the real side of what akshaya is the calm, the composed, the extrovert & the strong girl... i liked the way akshaya had risen to the situation & told mani to drive fast.. though she fears bike rides still she wants mani to drive fast so that she can be with her mom.. this shows that akshaya is a combination of a traditional plus a modern girl... she loves her parents, but at the same time can handle great responsibilities, she is not a weak person... yeh hui na baat... i liked mani's concern for akshaya.. & so finally akshaya holds mani's shoulder... nicee.. unke dono ke beech kii doorie i mean on the bike seat has reduced now this is a indication that un dono ke dilon kii doorie bhii mittne lagenge aur unki dil ek dusare se hamesha ke liye judh jaayenge... akshaya is calming her mom, i'am sure mani is observing everything from the corner of his eyes.. & i somewhere feel that may be mani has started falling for akshaya, the girl whose proposal he had rejected because of his prejudice... ab aayega mazaa... mani is so mature & understanding he gives akshaya & his family the space they need.. he does not want to intrude into their privacy as he is a outsider for them... so he decides to wait outside in the lobby & tells them to tell him if they need anything.. awww.. howw nice of him.. this itself shows that mani is concerned about akshaya... & he does not want to leave her or her family alone in the time of need... well good... akshaya has put up a brave front in front of her mother.. but may be even she is scared.. uske darr ko nikal ne ka bas ek hii tareeka hai & that is she should talk about her fears to someone & let it go... & i think the best person she can talk to is mani who is waiting in the lobby of the hospital...anyway bhoomi dear good going... it was a nice part... mani & akshaya have started seeing each other in other light.. in a different angle... they are trying to understand each other with the small small things they do... especially mani... & this is the best thing.... great work...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 dear please continue soon..waiting for the next part eagerly..😊

Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Hey bhoomi..
Its a great part this time..The situation akshaya is going through is a very difficult one..every second is very valuable for her as its her father's life which is at stake...but she handled her self ..controlled n took right decision at right time to call ambulance n get to hospital in time instead of going to home n then hospital as it will only increase time..
Manidhar realised that though akshaya is a traditional girl she is independant n can take decisons at right time..which made him think about her again..and his decision to reject her is correct or not?
On the other hand akshaya too noticed manidhar has given her space n helped her a lot..though she didnt get effected by his rejection..she too has diverted his thoughts over him n his nature..
Hope her father's operation goes well..and mani -akshaya realise about their opinions..which earlier were wrong ...
Great. as usual..
Good wishes..
sri:-)

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

both are getting to understand and knowing each other very well..................cont soon..................

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

bhoomi awesome fic i loved the way u showed how people have misconceptions abt others

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Hii Bhoomi,
Awesome Part 4... Loved it...!!
You have clearly shown Akshaya's Practical nature and Mani's maturity in this part...
Very Entertaining to read..!!

You know... When I had read the initial parts, I was not sure about the reason why Mani rejected Akshaya even without seeing her.... I felt it was wrong on his part...
( Now, you must be thinking why am I thinking so much but as I have already told you, your writing seems so realistic that I actually start imagining....!!! )
But, in Part 4, the reason was explained very clearly....

Looking forward to read the rest of the story....
Pls update soon...
And Thanx for the pm...

- Pooja

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Himani

@mad_lovee

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

hey i hv read all the 4 parts in one go:-)
So anothr love story in the makin:p
So far i liked it:-)

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Hey Bhoomi... kya update tha.. often girls are shown so sensitive and matured, but in this case, apart from Akshaya, Mani also looks like a very sensible, matured and responsible guy.. And often, we get deceived by the looks of the person.. If only we could delve deeper inside the person, external appearances will not do much of a harm... I am glad Mani is realizing all this...

Beautiful update!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#70

Heyyyyy bhoomi
Fab update yaar
Really liked how effeciently akshaya handled the situation
N mani is really matured n understanding person
I always fall in love with ur story's characters
Do continue soon