'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF)

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@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#131

Oh god! Awesome update! I loved it! Plz continue soon! Love u!

Sanjana

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#132

awesooooooooome.....
superb......
fantabulous....
excellent........
wonderful.......
lovely......
just too good..........
thanx for the pm..........

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#133

i loved it
Its so interesting
But u didnt pmme

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simrit

@-AngelSimi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#134

Sannnnnnnnnuuuuuuu !!!!!!! Ye tuunnnnnnneeeee kya kiya ?????????? Kab kiya ?????? Kaise kiya ?????? Kya soch ke kiya ????????? Tujhe sharam nahi aayi ye karte waqt ??????? Tujhe mi\ujhse pyaar nahi hai kya ??????? Kyun maarna chahti hai mujhe ????? Kya bigada haim maine teraa ???????

Anyways in sawallon ke hjawaab baad main dena abhi tu tyaar ho jaa apni taareefon ke lambe lambe bridges sun ne ke liye !!!!! In one word it was :-

" AWESOME "

Hatss off to you !!!!!!! Ek ek element hai ismaein es suspense , horror , romantic , tragic !!!!!!!!! Kya flashbacks the !!!!!!!!! Awwwwwwwwwwww !!!!!! Loved them !!!!!! Aur vo sammy aur mayur ki cute cute cutest chhedkhaani ki talks !!!!!!!! Just Wwwwooooooowwwwww Yaaar !!!!!!!!! Me completely fida over this !!!!!! Aur kamaal hi kardi !!!!!!! Pehle hi update main mayu gayab hehehehehehehehehehehehe aur sammy ko use dhhondna hai !!!!!!! The best line was :-

" Samajh main nahi aa rahi ke mayank bhai ke sath sath ghar kahan gayab ho gya ????? "

Fantastic !!!!!!! Maan na padega sanu teri ff ka bhoot ya bhootni bahut daring hai by god !!!!!! Mayank ko gayb kar diya vo bhi ghar ke sath !!!!!!!!! Just loved it !!!!! Nupur ko ek baar theek hone de us bhoot / bhootni ko vo nahi chhodegi , aakhir uske mayu pat hath kaise dala usne !!!!!!!!! Jaldi jaldi continue kar !!!!!!!

Love

Simi

Edited by simar456 - 15 years ago

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#135

god dammet sim u r olll

am i seeing correct someone pinch me

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

yup its true u r actuallu oll

dumbo dunger go n check creations gallery page 6 nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

n sanu tu kitni lucky hai yaaarrr

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rida

@angel.samee

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#136

hey sana!!
awesome update..
loved it..to scare
cont soon..
me waiting..

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#137

superb concept sana... i really liked it.... its different from others... waiting to read more...... do continue sooooon........

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Heyyyyy sana
Fabulous ff n amazing update
But m confused...Sam ko nahi pata kya hua
Aur gunur ko pata chala to sajan ki shadi tut jayegi
Confused
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm