'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF)

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Anindita

@MyArchangel

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#121

Wow.awesum sana................
really looking forward to read this one.............

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Tannu

@-Tannu-

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#122

nice concept:)
part 1 was superb..
cont soon

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#123

Hey.....first of all congratulations on your new FF dear.....

Now....

I just loved the concept dear.....its fabulous 👏 .....n very interesting too......

this is the first time I'm gonna read a FF filled with horror n suspense.....n I'm really very excited for it !!!

loved the CS dear.....especially of Nupur.....😉

loved your first update dear.....

its fabulous....awesum....superb.....brilliant.....marvellous......👏👏👏

awww.......my gunur is in hospital... ..so sad yaar....😭😭😭

but i loved Samrat's entry......n the way he behaved in hospital.......aww...he's so cute....😆

the way he brought flowers for Gunur......sending the nurse out.....trying to talk to Gunur.....cursing himself for what all happened...n that too in his absence.....then breaking down...... was very fabulously described yaar......it was very touching......even i was having my tears in my eyes yaar.....😭😭

this Sammy is really very cute....very adorable....very caring yaar.....i have just fallen in love with him....😍😍😍

But where is Mayank now.....what happened to him...?? woh kaha chala gaya aur kyun ?? really want to know yaar.....

Sammy thinking about past was nice......😊

Mayur are really adorable.....😍 ..........loved the romantic Mayank here.....😛

So Sajan have an arrange marriage......n the reason was a child.....ohh poor Gunji....

I felt very bad for Gunji........when Samrat behaved rudely with her on their first night.....but later when he cleared out the things.....I was really happy 😃

loved the breakfast scene.....it was lovely......loved SaNu......their chemistry is great....they really care for each other.....😊

loved their devar-bhabhi jodi......😆

but why is Sayank tensed on hearing about morena....??

aisa kya hua tha waha pe....??

and I'm really confused yaar.....if Samrat really doesnt know anything......then why did Mayank said...it could break Sajan's marriage...??

and Samrat said...'' I dont care''...... if he didnt know anything ....why did he said that...?? and is he not concerned about his marriage.....or his relationship with Gunjan...?? 😕

sorry ......i know I'm asking too many questions na.....😔

but i hope i'll get my answers in the future updates......😊

yaar....this is the first time I'm reading any FF of yours.....n I must say u r a fabulous writer......

you write very beautifully......you really rock !! ⭐️

thanx for providing us with such a long update......😊

cont. soon....

love ya...
varsha

Edited by KrazyRiya - 15 years ago

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XDevilsDesireX

@XDevilsDesireX

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

Your welcome Sanu dear😊😊

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sonu

@MagicLantern

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#125

fantastic update

the story is quite unusual

i am quite eager to know how this story unfolds

continue soon...............

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shaheen_memon

@shaheen_memon

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#126

hey sana this is just fantastic dear....
really loved it....
plz update soon......

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#127

Hi Sanuuuuuuuuuu

at first i want to congratulate u for this nice ff
it was too good dear.
Awesome
amazing
it was really very interesting and unique one.
loved it s much
awwwwwww gunur in Hospital-Oh no
and mayank uska koi pata nehi chal raha
Sana ye sab kaya ho raha hai?
Sammy was so tensed.

Loved ur flashback
it was truly awesome.
My mayur was so adorable and romantic.
haye- sana thanx a lot for romantic mayur scene
i just loved it.
loved sanur, gunur mayur ,sajan a lot.

Great update sana
update next part asap
take care