'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF) - Page 16

Originally posted by: lucario

really awesome part....continue soon.

Originally posted by: marisol45

awesome part.thanx
nice story line.thank u
so sayank r totally freaked out by morena...yup
bt i felt samrat's character is a bit strange...hmm whats the reason u will get know soon but to read this ff u need really good pateince u see😉
m i right in my thinking that samrat thoda mysterious hai out of the four?yup u guessed right
like his behaviour towards gunji,his convo with mayank where he suddenly seems lost
well interesting toh bohot haiwell i promise this is nothing in upcomming update u will more be confuse😆
cant wait for next partwill update till tomm night dear thanx for commenting

n keep eading n commenting

it really means alot to me

lots of love

sanu

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

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OMG! ur such a GR8 writer........I've read almost all ur FFs!!! thanx adz for liking my ffs
I like ur work a lot! ⭐️ thank uuuuuuuuuu
I loved d update! I'm really liking dis FF! thank dear for liking it I wonder wat had happened tht Gunur landed up in hospital! 😕 nd where did mayu vanish??? 😕 I really loved d flashback.....at 1st I was shocked tht mayur got sajan married only for d baby..... 😲 but I loved d Sajan scenes! can u add mre sajan scenes! (M so selfish) 😆

Luv Adya! 🤗 u can also call me Adz! 😉

Originally posted by: sushups

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Originally posted by: mehramanjeet88

nice concept

looking forward

n tnx for pm

Originally posted by: koolgurl

cont soon i want to know y sam is behaving like this in the end?? wht happen in morena???

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

hey san!!!!!!

u r just awesome yaar!!
akhir aisa kya hua tha morena me???????????
aw! then when will samrat start loving gunjan???

ur FF is sooo confusing yaar!!
m waiting eagerly to know what happened in morena!!
plzz do cont sooooonnnn
m waiting
muuah!

Originally posted by: kasufan4ever

wow sana awesomeee part..

Loved it to the core yaar..thanxxxxxxxxxxx mehek

loved the gunur part n SaJan part..😳thanx for liking it dear

m really excited to know more..yup u will get know soon

do cont.soon

n thnxxx for the pm..!!ur welcome

surely will try to continue it soon

sanu

-Mehek-

Originally posted by: PRACHIGOYAL90

LOVELY YAAR

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

awesomeeeeeee updt dear..
mindblowinggg..
loved it.
cont soon