~~~Feeling~~~ (SK+LRL ff) prt73 pg128 last prt

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Priya

@pinky901

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

awesome entry of our hero sweetie

pls cont soon

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Great update

Huda is left speechless in front of Kashish...but is soon saved by the bell.

Abhimanyu is praising Sujal. He is already impressed by his reputation. Loved the image that you have build for him.

Sujal is suprised to see Kashish at the academy...and forgets is mannars in front of her. She is going to think that he is showing attitude.

Waiting to see what happens next. please continue soon

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bd670816

@bd670816

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

awesome part neelu.loved it
cont soon

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Rani

@rajeev_myfriend

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

abbe yaar yeh sujal haai i was thinking rajveer but anyways nice up k aur s makes nice couple but yaar yeh naina kaha haai us ka toh kuch aata pata he nahin bas ek chotte se intro plz jaldi se usse bhi samne laao i am dying to see her character

love u rani

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

hmmm neelu....looong part....and damn good....Sujal's entry was dhamakedar.....loved the image u built for him...but ye kya...he seems seriously strict ha....he didtn even kashish properly...he was more concerned of the fact tht she is frm a non military background....n thr was no need for her in the academy....hmmm....bad strt for them...aur goli lagi hai...doctor ne rest karne ko bola hai...but ye mahashay yaha agye report banane....bt is thr something more...in the background....lets see...waise abhimanyu's char seemed to hv changed here....his talking style atleast....n does ritu have a positive char too??

hehe...waise good to see principal giving so much of respect to sujal..urf Rajeev....warna lrl me to uske peeche hi pada rehta tha...n kashish seems very sweet n friendly....this seems real interesting....do cont soon...

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: rajeev_myfriend
abbe yaar yeh sujal haai i was thinking rajveer but anyways nice up k aur s makes nice couple but yaar yeh naina kaha haai us ka toh kuch aata pata he nahin bas ek chotte se intro plz jaldi se usse bhi samne laao i am dying to see her character
love u rani

Rani dear...ye neelu hai....ye naina ko bhao nahi degi.....ise to bas kashish aur sujal me interest hai......🤣 🤣

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

fantastic................sujal ka entry hogayi................but the name Captain Sujal Garewal looks different...............always heard him as Mr. Sujal Garewal or Mr. Garewal but this captain to his name is a complete different feeling................nice.................and wow aate hi he wants to send her away................very bad sujal................u will chande ur opinion very soon dear.................cant wait to read more...................neelu sweety post the next part very soon.................missing ur time to time updates.........................cont soon..............

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: storywriter
Thx for the comments ppl ! aaj to sana aur deepa ne dil khush kar dia ! waise rajeev_my freind ye gic naa RA fic hai naa hi RN its a SK fic yaane ke sujal-kashish fan fic. tum naam pe mat jao tum bass inka pyaar dekho.

waise, thanks jyoti for wishing me, i need ur wishes. waise deepa mujse gakti hui wo 'him' nahi 'her' tha sorry spelling mistake

oh ok..................this made my imagination go complete wrong......................no prob...............this 3rd part made it more interesting than my imagination...................

and update ur link on ur ffs.....................

Edited by spvd - 15 years ago