~~~Feeling~~~ (SK+LRL ff) prt73 pg128 last prt - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
hey nice concept
interesting
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
i love both s k and naina so plz include naina also in ur fic its nice to see a fic like this i just love both the serial plz jaldi ek character sketch likh do so that it will be easy for me
love u main tumhara naam toh nahin jaante as i have joined if team recently but i must say ur writting style is very nice
plz pm me me also when u will up the fic
love u (rani )
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: storywriter

<font size="5"><font color="#993366">hey gals to guess hamare hero heroine kaise uar kaun honege? yaane sujal kaisa hoga aur kashish kaisi hogi, guess karo naa plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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hero sujal a military officer and heroine swetha salve really yaar they r a hot pair may be huda with kash. kash as a cadet
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmm well maine lrl to kabhi dekha nahi bas kuch kuch suna hai isliye jyada nahi pata mujhe char ke baare mein well meri imagination kehti hai ki sujal/raj ek mature army officer hoga with some drastic past
aur agar kashish cadet hui to bhi wo sujal ki age ke barabar hogi aur ab army join isliye karna chahti ho b'coz sum drastic past too
so i guess esa hoga ya phir wo hoga jo main shayad abhi imagine bhi na kar sakoon b'coz u r writer dear
so pls stop all our imaginations aur jaldi se char.sketch post karo aur story bhi
can't wait dear to read this fic anymore!!!!
u know it na sweety
bye
tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Wow..a new SK and LRL Fanfic...yani double maza.
Waiting eagerly to read more....so please continue soon.
The first part is rocking....
Please add me on you PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so much all the readers for lovely response for this story, i wanted to reply indivisually to you but cldnt. sorry kal part bhi post nahi kar payi. kya karun kal se office mein internship join ki hai, its very hectic. islie, mujhe maaf karna that i cldnt respond to u, but i love u a lot. abb, zyada bak bak naa karke part likh deti hoon achcha sa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: storywriter

thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so much all the readers for lovely response for this story, i wanted to reply indivisually to you but cldnt. sorry kal part bhi post nahi kar payi. kya karun kal se office mein internship join ki hai, its very hectic. islie, mujhe maaf karna that i cldnt respond to u, but i love u a lot. abb, zyada bak bak naa karke part likh deti hoon achcha sa

ALL THE VERY BEST DEAR FOR YOUR INTERNSHIP
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

The classroom of the 1st year batch of KMA is filled with students.


According to the timetable the classes is of 'etiquettes & mannerisms'


Huda reads the timetable again & thinks.


'arre ye kya class hai, sipaahi bana rahe hain yaa kuch aur waise bhi etikete ke spelling kisko aati hai. Jo bhi teacher ayega dekha jayega, naam bhi to ajeeb likha hai teacher ka, KS. Koi khadus budhdha hoga. Mujhko kya, par kiss bala ke lie aaya tha class mein wo hi class nahi aayi, naajaane kal rata wali kahan reh gai. Koi ni Huda ko aur kudiya mil gaiyi nain such ke lie, hai naa hamari 'Naina''


Huda inn khayalon mein khoya hua tha ki ek female zwaaz class mein sunayi deti hai.


'Good Morning class ! I am your etiquette & mannerism's teacher Kashish Sinha !'


Huda's eyes pop out seeing the girl of the previous night standing in front of him in the faculty uniform of khakhi shirt & skirt with high heels ballets with a high pony.


Yeeeeeeeeeeee kudiiiiiiii faculty hai !!!!!!!!!!!


Huds's heart jumped.


Everyone in the class was looking at the gorgeous lady who was smiling in front of them.


Everybody was wondering was she a teacher, she looks so young.


But a gal sitting at a corner was not at all happy seeing her, she rolled her eyes seeing her & gave her a look that looked pretty nasty.


Kashish's eyes meet her eyes for a second & kashish decides to look away.


k-so class ! mera to introduction ho gaya abb main bhi aap logon ko jaan loon. Please introduce yourseves.


A girl with frizzy hairs gets up.


'Pooja Ghai ,madam !'


Kashish smiles.


k-ok, sit down. Next?


A well built carefree guy gets up.


'apun, alekh hai !'


k-aur kuch batana chahenge aap apne bare mein?


Alekh-apun jail se choota hai ! aur kuch?


K didn't like the sudden whispers in the class & looks of people to Alekh.


k-CLASS ! SILENCE ! Next !


next was an obediesnt & sincere looking guy.


'Hum Ali hain, hamare Abbu ka sapna tha hum fauj mein jaye islie yahan aaye hain.'


Kashish gives a motivating grin to him.


k-very good ! Next?


'Amardeep Huda madam ! from Punjab !'


k-great ! sit !


she looks away.


Huda ko samaj nahi aayi, kudi ne huda ko ignore maar diya.


It's the turn of the girl at the corner. She half gets up lazily.


'Naina'


She sits down without being asked to.


Kashish didn't like what she did, but she does not want to scold her.


She is worried for her & she doesn't even know if her scolding would be of any help.


So kashish decides its best to ignore her action, at least today.


Every student introduce each other one by one.


The last one being Yuishtir, a lanky guy.


Who seemed to have potential in kashish's eyes but was a bit self conscious.


k-ok ! now a bit introduction of the subject !


everyone is looking at her.


k-achcha army officer banne ke lie, achcha insaan banna zaruri hai. Insaan tabhi kehlaoge jab tehzeeb aur salika hoga hai naa. So we start with a very very basic lesson ! badi badi parties mein jaoge officer banke, so the lesson is about 'how to greet a lady'.


Sab ek dusre ko dekhle lagte hain.


k-iske lie I need a volunteer. Anybody? Ok aa jayiye Mr. Amardeep Huda. Yahan aa jaiye mere paas.


Huda khada hoke walks to her.


k-to aaj humein Mr. Huda batayenge, jab wo kisi ladki se milte hai to kaise milte hain?


She looks at Huda with a bit knowing side grin on her lips.


Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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NICE UPDATE
BUT VERY SHORT ONE WITH LOT OF UANSWERED QUESTION
PLS CONT SOON DEAR
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Great part
So Kashish is a faculty member. But naina is showing hostility towards her....waiting to know the reason behind it.
The cadets have been introduced so now the remaining faulty introduction is remaining.
Waiting to see how well Huda can stand up agains Kashish.
please continue soon

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