~~~Feeling~~~ (SK+LRL ff) prt73 pg128 last prt

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~~~Feeling ~~~


Well, I don't know you people would like this fic or not. Actually, its an amalgam of kth & lrl. The names & characterisation would be similar but remember it's a fic so I will mould the characters according to my story.


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It's the first day of enrollment of the new batch in KMA. All students & their parents are lining up & are allocated hostels.


Puta din aise hi nikal jaata hai.


Raat ho gai hai, its around 9.30 PM . KMA ke lights out ho gaye hain.


Amardeep Huda who had just arrived with his backage in KMA gates is wondering seeing the academy.


'oye abhi to main aaya, mana thoda late hoon paar aise light-shight band kar denge ye lo. Koi nii light chali gai hogi. Bada thak gaya main. Apna hostel kahan hai kisse puchun yahan to harr jagah sannata hai'


He looks here there to see someone.


Saamne ek kisi academy ki building ke corridor mein ek ladki in her tees & Capri with high pony phone pe baat kar rahi hai


Huda-aaye hyee ! kudiye ! wo bhi inni soni ! huda aa raha hai tere lie !


He quickly goes to her.


Huda-oye kudiye ! kaisi hai?


She looks at hi & frowns.


'excuse me? Tum?'


Huda-oye myself Amardeep Huda. Naye batch mein aaya hoon, kudiye tub hi ussi mein hai naa, saath sab karenge hum dono. Tere saath Huda hai naa abb.


'tumhe abhi apne hostel mein hona chahie. Sidha jaake right mein hai boys hostel'


Huda-naa naa kudiye, kya bhaao khaa rahi hai. Huda tujhe inne pyaar se date ke lie puch raha hai aur tu hostel bata rahi hai. Aaja Huda se setting ka le .


He removes his shirt showing off his well toned physique.


She looks away.


'jao warna waden ko bata dungi tumhare'


Huda-arre tu to naraaz ho gai, koi nii kal class mein pata lunga.


He goes jumping a wall.


Kashish rolls her eyes after getting rid of him.


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NilzStorywriter thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i am gonna refresh my pm list, ppl who wanna rcv pm abt updation of this fic can contact me
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awesome dear
thank u so very much dear
i eagerly wanted to read sumthg like this on s-k
i really love u for this to start this fic with this concept
mujhe such mein kashish aur sujal dono ko lrl ke format type fic min dekhna tha
pls cont so soon dear
u have made my day dear
u make my wish cum true
thank u so much
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res

add me to ur pm list....................will comment after my late dinner...................
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wow kashish in kma
awesome dear
do pm me plzzzz
update soonnnnnnnnnnn
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Originally posted by: pinky901

awesome dear

thank u so very much dear
i eagerly wanted to read sumthg like this on s-k
i really love u for this to start this fic with this concept
mujhe such mein kashish aur sujal dono ko lrl ke format type fic min dekhna tha
pls cont so soon dear
u have made my day dear
u make my wish cum true
thank u so much



thanks a lot for liking it. its one of my fav fics. its memorable. take my words. you will enjoy it thoroghly. love u. keep reading & njoyin
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Originally posted by: spvd

res

add me to ur pm list....................will comment after my late dinner...................



yaar tu to apni hai, mujhe tujpe pura bharosa hai ki tu zarur cmmnt karegi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely part yaar cont soon and do add me to ur pm list
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Originally posted by: ammuakhi

wow kashish in kma

awesome dear
do pm me plzzzz
update soonnnnnnnnnnn


thanxs 4 liking it. i will surely pm u. love u
Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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thanxs 4 likin it

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

lovely part yaar cont soon and do add me to ur pm list

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