Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
hey..please update soon..it has been more than a month that you have updated the part....please continue soon..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
plz update waiting really eagerly for the next part
after reading the precap
plz plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
hey everyone,
I will pakka update this week...... I had a terrible writer's block for a couple of weeks and could not even start writing the next update, although I had a rough idea of what I wanted to write.... now isnt that the weirdest case of writer's block? 😆

anyway, I finally got done with 70% of the update and found that all 8 pages are only Raj-Naina.... 😉
now how will the story proceed further if I dont include the others? 😆
so I started with the sections in the precap **ahem ahem** 😳 and slowly getting there.... I will surely update part 25 this week and reply to your comments to part 24 too.... believe me... **innocent muh** 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hiiii Yeti🤗

update was awesome,mind-blowing,superb yaar👏⭐️
Hi Naina.... if I had not welcomes you previously to Dhoka, let me welcome you now.... and if I had done already, consider yourself special coz I am welcoming you twice.. 😆
thanks for the comments... I am glad you liked the update.. 😃

Raj n Naina discussing about Nair n Raj trying to control his emotions as well but also want to stay close to Naina u describe it beautifully👏👏
thank you..

Naina tease Raj about his nick name given by students😆😆😆 n they remember Naveen without any painful memory👏
Raj and Naina are on the road to recovery from their painful past.. 😛

Naina entry n her resemblence to her father was amazing yaar👏
Raj was so shocked😲 but he gain his senses when he heard bad words about Naveen from Nair n he punched him 👏👏👏
Nair asked for it.... 😉 how dare he bad-mouth Navin in front of Raj...

In last scene I am so relieved that there is no misunderstanding between Raj n Naina😃
show had enough misunderstandings between them.... I am no villain here... 😆

Raj just wanted to know whether Naina ever used him to get info about triggers or not, he was satisfied by her answer👏👏😃
he trusts her word and he did not think he had to hear anything more...

now precap one moron ki exit toh second moron ki entry ho rahi hai I mean Nair gaya n Bhargav aaya😡
well.. there is a big network of evil na... if someone doesnt come in, how will Raj and Naina uncover the truth? 😛 you think this fake Nair would confess so soon? 😛

Abhimanyu ki bhi entry with his wife Nandini🤢🤢🤢 but ye Shalini kyu shocked hai😲😲😲
will be seen in next part... 😉

last part seems interesting Raj n Naina's romance😳
kab tak Raj will wait... 😉 😳

plzzzzzzzz is baar jaldi update karna
trying to... 😆
thnx for pm

Luvs
Naina🤗


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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

thanks for the comments... glad you liked the update.. 😃

Raj is going over the information related to Nair and wants coffee and Naina like a good wife knew what he wanted!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

they can read each other without any words... 😛

Raj is right that Naina truly ruled his heart and his home!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Raj never cared too much about his house previously... but ever since Naina stepped in to his life, she had not only taken over his heart but also made his house into a home.. 😳

Naina is confused about her feelings for Raj!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

She loves him and feels herself melt with his touch!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

she is still crossing the bridge that Raj had already crossed... 😆

Raj is trying to come close to Naina and Naina can't resist him as she loves that feeling!!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

she wants to be near him but is confused about all the jittery feelings inside her... 😉

Raj wants to express his love to Naina but he is waiting to see whether she loves him or not!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj does not want to rush Naina... the realization of love is the sweetest when it is felt without any force or pressure... who better than Raj to understand this well? 😉

Naina understands Raj so much that he need not put his thoughts into words for her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

So why doesn't she get it that he loves her when she could get that he wanted a cup of coffee??😒 😒 😒 😒

a cup of coffee is simpler than the feelings between them... 😆 jokes apart, neither of them is very expressive or demonstrative... although they have not been able to hide their feelings from their eyes at times, they have not really confided about it to the other.. because they dont know how to... both of them are very reserved, due to their lonely past.. although they are very comfortable with each other, they are still yet to reach the stage where they can talk about anything and everything with the other.... next update will have more of that journey... 😃😃

Raj has become a love-sick puppy and wants to touch Naina to make sure she was real and she was his!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

ab bechara cant control his feelings around his beautiful wife... 😉😉

Now that Raj knows that Naina is a criminal lawyer he is happy to discuss the clues that he has found about Nair with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is brilliant and the way she linked all the points about Nair's past record was indeed impressive and shows her intelligence!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Navin ki beti aur Rajveer ki biwi..... she had to be smart... 😉

Its great to see that Naina no longer panics when that plan is mentioned and is on the road to recovery with Raj's love and Shalini's constant support!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

she can now talk about that incident normally... and she knows its all due to Raj and Shalini's care and support....

Raj is surely having a hard time controlling himself around Naina and it was described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

thank you

Shalini was shocked to know about the conspiracy but understands about the triggers and does not ask Raj anything more about them!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Shalini understands the need for Raj to keep the secret... although she had a hunch she did not ask for confirmation from Raj... what she need not know, she did not have to know... and she knows its probably safer that way... the less people who know, the better the secret

One can always rely on Shalini to lighten the tensed situation!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

that is why she is there.. 😃

She remarked about kaise 8 saal se yeh Mucchad cadets ko takleef de raha hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

So the tradition of naming faculty members was started by Shalini herself!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

She is such a big nautanki that nobody other than her could have done it!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

true.... nobody except Shalini could have started something like that... 😆

Naina has told Shalini about her true identity and Shalini did not tell her that Raj had already confided in her with the truth!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

at that time Shalini was not sure how would Naina take such a sensitive matter such as her father.. she decided to wait until Naina herself opened up to her

Shalini had a crush on Captain Navin and used to call him Captain Rambo!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

not just Shal... many other females at that time had a crush on the good looking and boyish yet strong army guy... 😉😳😳

I loved Raj saying aakhir mere mentor hai with reference to Navin's popularity and Naina saying pehle uske papa phir Raj ke mentor!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

fighting over who has first right on Navin 😆

Naina teases Raj about his nickname "Captain Handsome" given by the students!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

when everyone had a nickname, how can Rajveer not have one... 😉

Naina and Raj are finally able to remember Navin without any painful memories!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

they are on the road to recover from their painful past 😃

It is good to see Huda being serious about his work and assisting Naina in the mission!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

a few weeks of working under Naina had taught him to respect her as well as understand the importance of their mission.... and Huda is not inherently an immature guy... he is just arrogant and proud but when it comes to work he is pretty dedicated about it...

Naina decided to take the necessaru steps before it was too late and sent Huda to Delhi to get an arrest warrant for Nair!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina knew time was running out and before Nair took some step, she had to get him arrested

Nair is not able to understand the animosity between BC and Raj as neither could stand the other being bad-mouthed!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

when he saw the cold war between Raj and BC he had thought talking bad about the other could earn him some brownie points.... but what would he know about the deep bond between BC and Raj... although they never see eye to eye, BC had always considered Raj like a son and Raj respects BC highly too. its just that their principles did not match and resulted in a ego clash.... but everything will end in good time... 😃😃

Nair is eager for the Mentorship Camp as he is planning to steal the triggers when Raj leaves on the camp with the cadets!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Nair has started to panic... he had to move fast!

Naina's entry as a RAW officer was awesome!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

thank you... a bit difficult to imagine how a girl can resemble her father... but if you could imagine, 👏 to you too.... 😆

Naina is totally a shadow of her father and her resemblance to her father shocks all three men!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda's excuse for getting permission to leave KMA is too funny and Naina had to hold back her laughter at this!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

ab Huda hai... what can we expect out of him.... 😆

Everyone is shocked to hear that Naina is a RAW officer!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

they had not seen that coming... 😛

I loved Naina's style and attitude when she arrested Nair!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏She has proved herself a worthy daughter!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

and she took the first step in proving her father innocent.... somehow everything that happens in Dhoka is connected to what happened to Navin and the prologue.... but all mystery will be revealed gradually.... 😛😛

The fake Nair did the mistake of blurting out the truth and started saying how he had killed Captain Navin and paid dearly for it!!!!!!

he should have realized where he was before opening his big mouth.... 😉

Raj gave him a solid punch when he heard Navin's name as it made him see red and the fake Nair deserved it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj still has a lot of pent up fury inside him due to his frustration.... Naina has some work up her sleeve in helping Raj out of his violent rage.... it could destroy him otherwise...

I loved the scene in Raj and Naina's room!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is pacing and Naina is worried and hoping that she hadn't hurt him too badly!!!!!

Raj gripped Naina by her arms and asked her only one question that has she ever used him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

When Naina said no, Raj did not want to know anything else!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

he trusted her one word... and that is all he needed to know...

I am sure this will make their relationship more strong!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

trust is very important in a relationship..... communication is important too.... so next chapter we will see Raj and Naina crossing that step in their relationship too.... 😃

I loved Raj's trust on Naina and it was a relief to see that he did not misunderstand her!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj was relieved and hugged Naina tightly!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

aur bhi hoga... in next update though 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina_1234

gr8....toooooooo gud....waitin for ur next updt..!!


thank you... glad you liked it..
will update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome, mindblowing update.........completely bowled over it. plzz continue soon, don't be too late.........will be waiting eagerly for the next part. wow! what a part



thank you.... glad you liked the part... 😃
will update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nisha1984

awesome part...........

So finally Naina's whole truth is out to Raj & BC.......
Major Bhargav is coming.....................
So does Captain Abhimanyu and Nandini......................
continue soon.............



thank you.... glad you liked the part.... 😃
the main truth about Naina is out.... more on Naina's past in next update..... but audience will be only Raj... 😆
now what contribution do Bhargav and Abhimanyu do? will be seen in next update.... 😃
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wonderful story.....but pls update soon........

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