Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35 - Page 7

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

brillaint update

fantastic

superb

awesome

amazing

great

excellent

i still have no words to describe....

cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn

tc

ammu

Originally posted by: guglu088

FOR THE SECOND THREAD...!!!

Reserved for my comments...!!! Will be commenting soon...

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

awsome update

too good

loved it

interesting

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, lovely update.
naina sirf raj ko nehi hume bhi jhatka de rehi hain.
but loved it.
raj and naina just made for each other.
loved the cute scene between raj and naina.
continue soon.

Originally posted by: naina.patel

wow. you are just an awesome writer :)
i loved this because naina is so different, she has such an important role in the military!
anyways that was an awesome update and please add me to your pm list.
thanks!

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hey Yeti !!

I am sooooo sorryyy yaar...I am superlate in commenting...
hey... hows you... I understand.. you are late in commenting.. I am even worse in replying... 😆

See, how fast I am taking up your habbits ! 😆 😆 😆 U delay your UDs and I am even more delayed to comment...😆 😆
I knew it.... mera sangat kuch teek nahi hai.. hai na? 😆

Ohkkk ... Jokes apart...

CONGRATULATIONS for the second thread......!!! 👏 👏

and the Update was awesome blosssommmm !!!!
aww... thanks a lot yaar.... and I am glad you liked the update... 😃

Raj and Naina's convo was tooo good !!

Arey yaar, she knows it in heart that Raj loves her , then why her mind is creating problems????

Yeti...stop messing with her brain yaar.....😛
what to do.. she is so shmart and intelligent that yeh chote si baat samaj mein nahi aati usko.. 😆

Now she is supertensed at Raj's last statement....even I am...

Now plzzzzz UD fast and clear us off it !!
its done... 😆😆 me and my tardiness... 😆😆

And Now Aalekh and Neelu....

what to say...this part was brialliantly done....👏 👏 👏

And finally Aalekh confessed and Neelu's plan worked ! 👍🏼
Neelu's final plan... jealousy... 😆 she knew she did not get anthing by confronting Alekh directly... so she had to mess with his head.. 😆

Ab tumhare iss Precap ne mujhe dara diya hai...

you are asking why??? Ofcourse for Raj and Naina !

Now plzzzzzzzzz UD soon !!! ( which you wont !!! I know...) how do you know me so well gal.... 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

damm my full inbox

didnt even know new topic has been started

reserved

edited
hey yeti
well, seems like u, getting late is turning into a hbit...lol...trust me, i will break it now.
hey sur... long time... nice seeing you here in the second thread.. 😃
no worries about the delay.... I am worse... 😆

yeah...the ud was truly fantastic...honestly, ignoring my lateness
aww.. thanks a lot... glad you liked it.. 😃

now i have to admire neelu's nerve for doing something like that...of course karan had no idea what he was getting into when he agreed for this...nevertheless, it worked!!!
bechara karan... didnt know the entire plan.. Neelu was very shrewd in letting him know only part of the truth... 😆

i love this song as it has great beats,lyrics AND Hrithik *goes into dreamy mode...comes back after getting scolded from Mum*
uff... me too yaar... Hrithik and Ash just set the screen on fire in this song.... just one problem for me... too much crowd in the song... 😆

So Naina managed to raise her regard a few notches higher in Raj's eyes...good that he didnt take it too badly..but what abt the final news?
why would he take this bad? he never asked her what she was doing after Navin's death and she never got the chance to tell him... he would be very proud to see that she has done well for herself in spite of the pain of losing Navin in that way...

I pity Nair(or whoever he is)..cant think of escaping when Mr. and Mrs. Rajveer Shekhawat are on his tail, can he?
woh tho gaya ab.. 😆

the romantic scenes between Raj and Naina were very well written...usually when I read romantic scenes, I get a feeling they are cheap...but yours are beautifully described with all the right words...Naina really doesnt stand a chance against Rajveer...surely not after he has decided to get her!
oh.. thanks a lot yaar... 😳 I try my best to write some romance... and hopefully it doesnt come off as vulgar.... 😳

now finally Alekh has screamed out his feelings for Neelu...Even though what she did wasnt fair...still, for somebody like Aalekh, go girl!!!
Neelu knows him so well... and Alekh behaved exactly the way Neelu thought he would... 😉

precap looks too good...btw, if u write these scenes so soon, why delay the ud?
dear... precaps are just 3-4 sentences.... updates are usually 10-12 pages long.... do the math... 😆😆
jokes apart.. I usually have a plan for the next 3-4 updates... just words jotted down here and there... so when I update I just put them together... but writing the entire update is mentally exhausting and takes up almost half the day for me... 😳

anyways great ud again
nd m sorry for being late
Sur

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

gr8 updt....

finally aalekh admitted his feelings amazing dialogues der....

loved d all d cadets njoying d party .....

den rn and d cuteness of d scene was amazing....totally loved it...👏

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

FIRST I WANT 2 CONGRATULATE U FOR OPENING A NEW THREAD.😊 😊 😊

KEEP ON ROCKING DEAR WITH THIS SUPERB FIC. 👏 👏 👏