Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

loved the update........... 😃.......... now the long wait seem worthy...😃 😃........
loved how Rajveer-Naina falling in love with each other.........😳 😳 Captain having a tough time to control himself 😆 😆 😆...........

precap sounds intresting................ shall we all expect fireworks in next part as Rajveer will come to know his wife's real identity............ can't even imagine his reaction........
hope he doesn't blames......Naina..... & understands her why she actually had hidden her identity.....

continue soon asap..... & soon means real soon.........not a long wait......

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

OMG...I just realised that I hadn't commented even though I had read the update as soon as u had posted it.....!!!!
hey dhara... nice seeing you... 😃 its ok.. chalta hai... if you guys can put up with my delays in updating... 😆

Congratulation on thread 2...I wish I could say may we have many more threads of Dhoka...!!!!!😉
thanks a ton yaar... wouldnt have bee possible without all your support and encouragement.... Dhoka probably has another 14-15 chapters to go... so yeah.. long way still... poor you guys.. 😆

Chalo Neelu's plan paid of...and I see that it paid off very well.....she got what she wanted and much more than that...!!!😉😉😉
I am sure she has no complaints at all... 😉😳

The song suited completely to each and every pair...!!!! thank you.... 😃

Umm...the surprise Lawyer Naina still has for Rajveer, as you have already written wiill come up in the next update...*gulps hard*.....!!!!
dont worry too much... everything will be for the good finally... all is well... 😃

Now pls update soon.....!!!! I completely ignore your note...!!!!😛
tumari ignore karne se note nahi badalta.... 😆

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Sorry for replying so late...even though i had read the update when you had posted it.
hey.. thanks for the comments...

Update was very good

glad you liked it.. 😃

Alekh gets really angry and jealous to see Neelu dancing with Karan'.and has to control himself from creating a scene. Rest of the gang feels nervous when they see Alekh controlling his anger and are not happy with Neeelu's plan. Neelu had to do something'she could not let alekh ignore her all the time. Finally Alekh confesses his true feelings making Neelu very happy.

Neelu had tried approaching things directly but with Alekh none of it worked out... she knew deep down that Alekh had similar feelings for her but was not showing it out.. so she decided to do some arm-twisting with him.. 😉 the age-old formula of jealousy... 😆

Everybody is enjoying the dance. Huds is completely fida over Sameera.

next love story starting at KMA.. 😆

And Raj is going fida over his wife'.. Now that he has realised how much he loves her'. He keeps loosing his control in front of her.

ab bechara kya karega... all he wants is to take her in his arms and never let go.. 😳

Naina also keeps losing herself in the Raj's grey eyes'.how can she not read the deep love that Raj holds in his eyes.

bachi seekh jayegi kuchi dinon mein.. 😆

Raj is surprised but not angry at all to know that Naina is a criminal lawyer. He infact feels proud of her. Seeing Naina's nervousness he jokes around asking whether there are anymore qualities of his wife that he does not know. But this only makes naina more nervous because she has not told him yet that she is a RAW agent. And is worried about how he would react once he finds out the truth.

she is nervous to know of his reaction when he comes to know of her mission.. she has to report about the triggers and it is Raj who is in charge of the safety... so she thinks he may misunderstand her intentions or think she used him to make her mission successful....

The precap is very very intriguing. So please continue soon

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good one dear.
thanks yaar... glad you liked it... 😃

kya daala tha ki 16 yrs se jyada k logon k liye hai. Kuch bhi to nahi tha na aisa is update me.
mein bachon ka bohut khayal rakhti hoon... 😆 aur mummy ne kaha hai ki "better safe than sorry" 😆 😳

Anyways coming to the update.
Neelu did enough for Alekh's realization of love for her. It worked na, Alekh ne finally maan hi liya ki vo Neelu se pyaar karta hai, ye alag baat hai ki us ka tareeka thoda ajeeb rehta hai.
Neelu tried everything in the seedha raasta... but Alekh didnt give in... so she had to take the other way... 😉

Poor guy Karan, kitna dar raha tha na vo Alekh se ki kahin vo us ka murder hi na kar de gusse me.
his fear was legit... he had not even taken Nisha out on a date and Alekh was already throwing murderous glances at him... 😆

Beautiful song selection by u to express Alekh n rest of the gang's feelings.
aww.. thanks yaar... glad you liked the song... 😃

Alekh ne sach me passion and feelings k saath song gaaya hai Neelu k liye, thank god us ne sab k saamne kuch kaha nahi aur Neelu ko le gaya apne saath.
this is probably more dangerous for Neelu, according to the others.. 😳😆

Raj aur Naina k baare me kya kahoon mai, nothing left. They r truely magical. Kitne khushi ho rahi hai mujhe un ki closness dekh k mujhe hi pata hai.
I know... they killed everything in the show... anyway... this story is mainly letting out my frustrations... you guys sadly got tangled in it.. 😆

Raj ka ek shock mila ki us ki wife criminal lawyer hai aur aage k ud me sab se bada jhatka milega jab Naina apne sacchai k baare me sab ko batayegi.
he still has a lot to know about his wife..

They were so romantic n cute, aur jis tarah se tum ne Raj ka impact dikhaya hai Naina pe ki jab bhi vo us k pass aata hai to us par kya asar padta hai un ki closeness ka.
Naina feels the butterflies... she is not able to understand why... 😉

Raj sahi hai apni jagah sahi hai, achanak se Naina k close aa jaane se Naina comfortable nahi feel kar paayegi.
But mujhe next ud k liye abhi se Raj ki chinta ho rahi hai ki us ka kya hoga jab Naina k baare me sach pata chalega us ko.everything will be fine in the end.. 😃

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiiii Shilpa...

for the second thread

hey yogitha... thanks a lot for your wishes... everything due to all your support... thanks guys... 😃

sorry dear for the late comment....update is fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
thank you... glad you liked it... 😃

Finally neelus plan worked n alekh confessed...u have written that part so beautifully..the song is so nice
thanks.... Neelu decided that the seedha raasta wont work with her Alekh and she had to do something like this.. 😆

Raj n nainas scene is awesome..loved it so much....raj is so understanding ...he is not at all angry when naina told him that she is a criminal lawyer
he wouldnt be... its nothing wrong.. he perfectly understands that e still doesnt know a lot about Naina and that she hadnt told him just because she did not get the chance to...

totally the update is awesome
thank you..

precap is so interesting

plz update soon

Originally posted by: danish1

amazing part.

naina has surely kept many more surprises for raj.

hope he 's able to stand it without fainting.😆

update is wonderful .as always you rock!!!!!!!!!👍🏼

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Yeti😊

Hi Naina... welcome to Dhoka... 😃😃

Im new here n read ur whole fic in 12 hours pheewwww..........😆

what? it took only 12 hrs?? 😲 just kidding..... I know its been a marathon right... I feel the same... and thats why I dont go back and read my own updates... 😆😆😆

Anyways ur is awesome yaar n I know I cant able to describe whole in words😕😳

aww.. thanks a lot yaar..... glad you liked the story till now... 😃

All updates in thread 1 n 2 are superb n brilliantly written👏👍🏼

thank you once again...

In last update raj is so surprised to know that naina is criminal lawyer😲

N he told her no to worry about it n ask her that if she has any other such surprises for him 😉

he needs to know a lot more about his wife yet.... 😉

Finally alekh ne neelu keh diya ki he loves him😳😆

he finally had to give in before Neelu's stubborness and craziness... 😆

But tumne raj aur naina ka itna short part kyu 😔

the cadets were the main focus in that part... but I promise.. next few updates will have a lot of Raj and Naina.. 😉

But precap seem to be interesting plz raj aur naina ko separate mat karna plzzzzzz😃

naah.... the show already did that nasty thing... I wont separate them.... 😉

Do cont soon😊

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Luv

Naina🤗😊👏

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Yeti
Oh sorry 😆
forgot to told you😆

Keep rocking yaar



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Luv
Naina😊🤗