Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

gr8 updt....

finally aalekh admitted his feelings amazing dialogues der....

loved d all d cadets njoying d party .....

den rn and d cuteness of d scene was amazing....totally loved it...👏

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

FIRST I WANT 2 CONGRATULATE U FOR OPENING A NEW THREAD.😊 😊 😊

KEEP ON ROCKING DEAR WITH THIS SUPERB FIC. 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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himalayanyeti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Note:
I have unreserved my posts in the previous thread for my replies to your comments.. If I missed anybody, PM me..
I have an exam coming up (terrible especially when you think you are done with studying and enjoying working 😕) so I need to take 2 weeks break from IF.
I might not be around to read your comments but I will get back to everything in June.. And for putting up with me, I promise a jhakas episode next.. 😉😉

~yeti

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Purnima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

loved the update........... 😃.......... now the long wait seem worthy...😃 😃........
loved how Rajveer-Naina falling in love with each other.........😳 😳 Captain having a tough time to control himself 😆 😆 😆...........

precap sounds intresting................ shall we all expect fireworks in next part as Rajveer will come to know his wife's real identity............ can't even imagine his reaction........
hope he doesn't blames......Naina..... & understands her why she actually had hidden her identity.....

continue soon asap..... & soon means real soon.........not a long wait......

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

OMG...I just realised that I hadn't commented even though I had read the update as soon as u had posted it.....!!!!

Congratulation on thread 2...I wish I could say may we have many more threads of Dhoka...!!!!!😉

Chalo Neelu's plan paid of...and I see that it paid off very well.....she got what she wanted and much more than that...!!!😉😉😉

The song suited completely to each and every pair...!!!!

Umm...the surprise Lawyer Naina still has for Rajveer, as you have already written wiill come up in the next update...*gulps hard*.....!!!!

Now pls update soon.....!!!! I completely ignore your note...!!!!😛

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Sorry for replying so late...even though i had read the update when you had posted it.

Update was very good

Alekh gets really angry and jealous to see Neelu dancing with Karan….and has to control himself from creating a scene. Rest of the gang feels nervous when they see Alekh controlling his anger and are not happy with Neeelu's plan. Neelu had to do something…she could not let alekh ignore her all the time. Finally Alekh confesses his true feelings making Neelu very happy.

Everybody is enjoying the dance. Huds is completely fida over Sameera.

And Raj is going fida over his wife….. Now that he has realised how much he loves her…. He keeps loosing his control in front of her.

Naina also keeps losing herself in the Raj's grey eyes….how can she not read the deep love that Raj holds in his eyes.

Raj is surprised but not angry at all to know that Naina is a criminal lawyer. He infact feels proud of her. Seeing Naina's nervousness he jokes around asking whether there are anymore qualities of his wife that he does not know. But this only makes naina more nervous because she has not told him yet that she is a RAW agent. And is worried about how he would react once he finds out the truth.

The precap is very very intriguing. So please continue soon

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Good one dear.
kya daala tha ki 16 yrs se jyada k logon k liye hai. Kuch bhi to nahi tha na aisa is update me.
Anyways coming to the update.
Neelu did enough for Alekh's realization of love for her. It worked na, Alekh ne finally maan hi liya ki vo Neelu se pyaar karta hai, ye alag baat hai ki us ka tareeka thoda ajeeb rehta hai.
Poor guy Karan, kitna dar raha tha na vo Alekh se ki kahin vo us ka murder hi na kar de gusse me.
Beautiful song selection by u to express Alekh n rest of the gang's feelings.
Alekh ne sach me passion and feelings k saath song gaaya hai Neelu k liye, thank god us ne sab k saamne kuch kaha nahi aur Neelu ko le gaya apne saath.
Raj aur Naina k baare me kya kahoon mai, nothing left. They r truely magical. Kitne khushi ho rahi hai mujhe un ki closness dekh k mujhe hi pata hai.
Raj ka ek shock mila ki us ki wife criminal lawyer hai aur aage k ud me sab se bada jhatka milega jab Naina apne sacchai k baare me sab ko batayegi.
They were so romantic n cute, aur jis tarah se tum ne Raj ka impact dikhaya hai Naina pe ki jab bhi vo us k pass aata hai to us par kya asar padta hai un ki closeness ka.
Raj sahi hai apni jagah sahi hai, achanak se Naina k close aa jaane se Naina comfortable nahi feel kar paayegi.
But mujhe next ud k liye abhi se Raj ki chinta ho rahi hai ki us ka kya hoga jab Naina k baare me sach pata chalega us ko.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Hiiii Shilpa...

for the second thread

sorry dear for the late comment....update is fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Finally neelus plan worked n alekh confessed...u have written that part so beautifully..the song is so nice

Raj n nainas scene is awesome..loved it so much....raj is so understanding ...he is not at all angry when naina told him that she is a criminal lawyer

totally the update is awesome

precap is so interesting

plz update soon

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

amazing part.

naina has surely kept many more surprises for raj.

hope he 's able to stand it without fainting.😆

update is wonderful .as always you rock!!!!!!!!!👍🏼

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himalayanyeti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

guess who is back? 😆😆😆😆

back from my 'break', I have already started working on the next update.. will try to post it tonight or tomorrow... **fingers crossed 😆😆** and looks like my replies to your comments to Part 23 will probably have to wait until after I post Part 24.. **kaan pakaring and making big eyes 😆😆**

but hey! I still see quite a bit of "reserved"-s which havent been unreserved... so gals, buck up and post your comments soon... warna yeti kya karegi yeh mereyko malum nahi... 😆😆😆

@esha, thanks a ton sweetheart for compiling 22 parts into 2 huuuuuuuuuuugggggggggeeeeeee pages in the first thread... 🤗 here is a cookie for you for your efforts... **hands out cookies** haan lekin iss part ka "reserved" bhi jaldi unreserve karo behena... 😆😆😆😆

~yeti

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