Dhoka 2 -A Raj-Naina story; Part 28 - Page 35

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

FOR THE SECOND THREAD...!!!

Reserved for my comments...!!! Will be commenting soon...

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Suhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Congratulations for the second thread....👏👏

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Suhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hi Shilpa

How r u??

Update was really gud...

Alekh was really disturbed to see Neelu dancing with Karan..He had no control over his emotions..

Rest of the gang was not so happy with Neelu's plan but she has to do something..

She can't let Alekh ignore her anymore..Huda is total fida over Sameera..

That song was really cool..Just perfect for the situation..😃

Raj is loosing his control infront of his wife very often now..afterall he has fallen deeply in love with her..Naina is so stupid..can't she love in Raj's eyes..

Everytime she is lost in dose grey pools but she just cant read them..

Raj was not at all angry when she told him abt being a criminal lawyer..He really understands her so well.How will he react when he'll come to know his wife is a member of RAW..But I want to read some more RN...

Alekh finally confessed bt his true ffelings..Neelu was so happy but she really pushed him hard..that kiss was too electrifying..😉😃

Continue soon

Bye

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Prerna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

hey the update was good
but itna thoda RN not fair
congo on 2nd thread
plz continue soon

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sania_58

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

wow

awsome update

too good

loved it

interesting

great going

plz continue soon

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

awesome, lovely update.
naina sirf raj ko nehi hume bhi jhatka de rehi hain.
but loved it.
raj and naina just made for each other.
loved the cute scene between raj and naina.
continue soon.

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vvdn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

wow !!!!!

Amazing update....waiting for next...

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..Naina..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

wow. you are just an awesome writer :)
i loved this because naina is so different, she has such an important role in the military!
anyways that was an awesome update and please add me to your pm list.
thanks!

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Hey Yeti !!

I am sooooo sorryyy yaar...I am superlate in commenting...

See, how fast I am taking up your habbits ! 😆 😆 😆 U delay your UDs and I am even more delayed to comment...😆 😆

Ohkkk ... Jokes apart...

CONGRATULATIONS for the second thread......!!! 👏 👏

and the Update was awesome blosssommmm !!!!

Raj and Naina's convo was tooo good !!

Arey yaar, she knows it in heart that Raj loves her , then why her mind is creating problems????

Yeti...stop messing with her brain yaar.....😛

Now she is supertensed at Raj's last statement....even I am...

Now plzzzzz UD fast and clear us off it !!

And Now Aalekh and Neelu....

what to say...this part was brialliantly done....👏 👏 👏

And finally Aalekh confessed and Neelu's plan worked ! 👍🏼

Ab tumhare iss Precap ne mujhe dara diya hai...

you are asking why??? Ofcourse for Raj and Naina !

Now plzzzzzzzzz UD soon !!! ( which you wont !!! I know...)

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

damm my full inbox

didnt even know new topic has been started

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hey yeti
well, seems like u, getting late is turning into a hbit...lol...trust me, i will break it now.
yeah...the ud was truly fantastic...honestly, ignoring my lateness
now i have to admire neelu's nerve for doing something like that...of course karan had no idea what he was getting into when he agreed for this...nevertheless, it worked!!!
i love this song as it has great beats,lyrics AND Hrithik *goes into dreamy mode...comes back after getting scolded from Mum*
So Naina managed to raise her regard a few notches higher in Raj's eyes...good that he didnt take it too badly..but what abt the final news?
I pity Nair(or whoever he is)..cant think of escaping when Mr. and Mrs. Rajveer Shekhawat are on his tail, can he?
the romantic scenes between Raj and Naina were very well written...usually when I read romantic scenes, I get a feeling they are cheap...but yours are beautifully described with all the right words...Naina really doesnt stand a chance against Rajveer...surely not after he has decided to get her!
now finally Alekh has screamed out his feelings for Neelu...Even though what she did wasnt fair...still, for somebody like Aalekh, go girl!!!
precap looks too good...btw, if u write these scenes so soon, why delay the ud?
anyways great ud again
nd m sorry for being late
Sur

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago