Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 19

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awesome part.......
cont soon
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hi di!!
the updates were fab..kinda gave an insight to Vivaan's character..Nisha's behaviour is justified..but hope evrything is cleared soon..
waiting to read more..
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Nice part.
But plzz dont make nisha hate vivaan.
Plzz do continue soon.
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loved the parts continue soon
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thanks for pm
wow next part is going to be long if i am not wrong
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WOW!!
Both chapter were realllyyyyy good
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lovely update...
really it was awesome..
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Waiting..!😳

*edited*

Still waiting!!!!!!!😳
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Forlorn


Next day, he met everyone on the ground to practice for the match ... he was sweating too much ... he removed his shirt .... Sam was in a playful mood as the strategy planned was working perfectly and secondly, Vivaan was in a really good mood that day ...
After a huge practice session, Vivaan allowed everyone to enjoy; satisfied with himself and the team ...

He was walking backwards; drenched in his sweat when someone bumped into him ... she fell in his arms, her small hands touching his chest .... her warm touch removed all the tiredness he felt and her eyes which were staring into his ... he knew that she had recognised him ... with a heavy heart he parted from her but his heart just wanted her to stay like that forever in his arms ... before she would speak, he went away ... but his heart came over his rational mind and he turned to get one glimpse of her ... but to his irritation, the worst man ever possible; God's huge mistake; sugar-coated poison was talking to her .. he gave him a disgusted look but then saw Clare and Sara and felt relieved ... all this in a fraction of second and continued walking away ....

He was taking out his books from the locker, after taking out; he shut the locker ... his one book fell from his hand in front of his locker; as he bent down ... he saw a beautiful white lehenga with fragile work on it, he slowly motioned his head above and saw HER in a lehenga, her choli ending just under her chest .... her white net dupatta hanging on her shoulder ... a strand of hair was stuck on her face, not letting him see her angelic beauty ...she wore a simple silver chain in her neck .... her earrings decorating her face .... she wore a small silver bindi on her forehead .... and a silver maang tika on her head ... she looked like a perfect Indian beauty .... she was standing against the locker ..... he slowly moved near her, lost in her beauty ...softly removed the strand of hair ... his touch made her shiver ... and she shut her eyes .... he loved her expression .... he slowly slipped his hand on her neck while removing the hair which were lying on her shoulder and putting them behind ... he slowly bent towards her face ... her chocolate eyes staring into his ... he slowly bent near her trembling lips ..... his other hand moving on hers from her shoulder ... slowly till her bangles ... he was playing with them and then held her palm softly but firmly ..... he was about to kiss her ... when PUFF!! Vivaan saw everywhere .. but she was nowhere ...
Vivaan - CONTROL YOURSELF!! Just don't start hallucinating like a Bollywood hero!
He tried to convince himself .....

Finally, he went for his class and saw the lovely lass sitting on his seat ...
Vivaan (in his mind) - Control!!!
He didn't even look at her once and sat next to her ... but her beautiful voice and her charm failed his every attempt to ignore her .... he tried to be as cold as possible and by her changing facial expressions and the color of her face, he knew that somewhere he succeeded ... But with it came a pang of guilt as he knew he hurt her immensely but also knew that this was for her benefit .....

But as if God was testing his patience, her notes fell and in a reflex reaction both bend down, their eyes met and he touched her hand ... it was one of the best moments her eyes; her touch were making him go crazy ... he with an impulse; got up and tried to 'concentrate' on everything but not her .. he felt her staring at him, his heart was aching; he so wanted to touch her soft, creamy skin again but his rational mind barred all such thoughts .... As the class got over, he immediately went out ignoring her with a heavy heart ...

He moved to the place, which granted him some kind of peace - library ... in his loneliness, it was only the books that supported him in some way ..he yet again opened, A Walk To Remember and continued reading it despite the pain he felt about hurting Nisha ...

As her thought came in his mind, he saw the library shelf falling, he ran towards Nisha and saved her just on time ... he could see the fear on her face and to his surprise; she was looking gorgeous even in fear ... But he was raged as she always fell in some or the other trouble ... but before he could say anything' the librarian scolded them and ordered them to clean the mess ... But before continuing, his anger came out on her as he felt how he would save her every time and he didn't want her to be feared or to be in pain .... but his anger brought tears in her eyes ... he felt like an idiot by making her cry ... and apologized ....

She smiled and he felt a relief ... both started cleaning up the mess ... she was engrossed in her work with suck keen interest that he could not save himself from getting attracted towards her ... Yet again; like foolish, he did a mistake and she got scared and fell ... but he wrapped his arms around her and somehow his wish was granted ... his heart was willing to to take her in his arms but he came back to senses and immediately left from there .....

Later at night .... he woke up with a beautiful dream .... She was standing in a white satin gown .. her back all bare and her one shoulder covered with her dark hair ... she looked like a princess ... his hands crept around her waist, he was wearing a black suite ... he bent towards her bare neck .. he breathed in her enchanting smell ... she shyly and coyly hid her face in her hair ... he slowly placed his lips on her exposed neck and kissed her soft, luscious skin ....

Vivaan - Crap!! Ye sab main kya soch raha hun .. kya kar raha hun ... khud par kaabu kar Vivaan ... samajh nahi aa raha kya karun?

Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago
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Splintering Barriers


Vivaan's love for Nisha was just increasing; on the football match day ... as God's angel for Vivaan, Sam had pulled Nisha with him to the ground .... Vivaan smiled inside but didn't show anything on his face for the obvious reasons ....

During the match he could sense her eyes on him exclusively ... he knew he had to win at any cost now ... while the final goal he hurt himself yet made Oracle win the match ... while everyone cheered; he could hear the faint sound of someone calling out for him and his heart told him that it was Nisha ....

When during the class, she queried about his wounds; though he felt good and smiled inside but sensed that it was more than just query and had to give her one hard message to make her hate him to the core or even scare her enough that she would stay away from me ....

His heart drowned in the guilt of hurting someone who cared for him so much ... he never wished to hurt her but didn't want to give her pain of a lifetime ... by making her fall in love with him ...

Days passed and arrived the Freshers' Party ... Vivaan; who never was keen of such useless things was very worried and was deep in thought of what to wear ... with help of Clare and Sara, Vivaan got dressed ....

During the party, his eyes were continuously searching his angel ... when finally he saw his princess entering the hall in a black gown ... she looked ethereal, immaculate and looked luminous, heavenly beauty ... he could not control his heart who was jumping out of his waistcoat ....

As his dream was granted, both were asked to dance and start the party ... coming close to her for the first time he let his emotions take over and brought out the passion that was hiding in his heart ...

Every time he pulled her near, his heart would somersault touching her passed currents through his body ... and finally the passion and desire was on top when he kissed her neck ... he in no way, wanted to hurt her today as he wanted her to enjoy and wanted to have some precious memories of her to stay with him for a lifetime because he new that after this he would never fall in love with someone who is not Nisha .... He felt sad when the music stopped because he would again have to pull the act of 'Stay Away From Me' .... Later in the party, something unexpected happened ... Sam was holding Nisha and Grace wasn't there .... moreover Nisha looked weird ... he had to see what was Sam up to ....

When Sam told about he real situation, he could not believe his ears but it truly answered her 'weird' behavior but still she looked so innocent and so cute ... Sam threw her on Vivaan and went away ... her every word after that was so filled with innocence ... her naughtiness, childishness - all were making him week on the knees ......

But when she started crying ... he felt the pang of guilt ...
Nisha - Mujhse koi yahaan pyaar nahi karta ....
He at that point had wanted to take her in his arms and tell her that he loves her so much that she wouldn't have ever dream t of being loved by someone to that extent ... but he only could say "Aisa kuch nahi hai" ... and walked out of the room with tears of loneliness and guilt brimming at the corner of his eyes ....
Vivaan - Nisha please!! Please itni udaas mat raho ... main tumhe is tarah mahi dekh sakta ... please ....

Slowly after that incident, the days passed and with it the distances grew between them ... but one night a horrifying accident took place ... the library was on fire ... Vivaan was helping to save everyone when he saw Nisha caught in the fire ... he was on a final round to see if everyone was out ... he saw her getting unconscious and immediately caught her ... they had to escape from the window when she shouted "Uday!!", Vivaan was shocked to hear that .... thousand and one questions came in his mind .... Nisha was admitted to the hospital ... Vivaan was hell worried and without thinking twice brought her white roses ... he didn't know was it right or wrong but he knew he had to do it ... but he gave the flowers to Mrs. Danielle and went away ... he knew that she would know he had brought the flowers for her ....

Two weeks were a difficult time to pass ... he could not see his angel or stalker anywhere ... he felt lonely, miserable and blue without her ....

When finally she returned, he was the happiest person in the world ... but then he remembered Uday and was desperate to know who was he and why did Nisha take his name ... he finally got the opportunity when she was with Grace and Sam ... the way she quickly obeyed him ... Vivaan couldn't help but love her move .... to talk to her normally was like a dream come true ... when she told him about her friends dieing .... he felt pity her ... more than that he could feel her pain ... her eyes and nose were leaking ... he had to give her support there was no other option ... her trembling lips ... her smooth skin ... he was about to kiss her but remembered his goal and instead to kill the desires that were brewing, jumped in the lake ... the way she was looking at him made him feel shy and he so wanted to hide from her gaze ... and thus, for the first time, for himself ... started the drama again ....

When now Vivaan thought about all the moments passed ... a strong feeling of love touched his soul .. he knew he had named his life to her and his soul was hers .. but now he knew that she loved him and reciprocated the same passion and that HE was her happiness and therefore decided to tell her everything ......
Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago

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