Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
i am so amazed by his feeling

so he was effected by her since day 1
awesome

thanks for the pm

pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for pm
loved the baby chapters very much
so cute
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Posted: 15 years ago

lovely update dear

thanks 4 pme
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Posted: 15 years ago
Weakening


By the time he moved out of the library, to have his dinner it was 10:00 PM ....
Vivaan - Crap, dinner bhi miss ho gaya ....
He was walking towards his room in dark when suddenly a girl came into his arms ... he was shocked to hear the silent sobs and immediately got worried; questioned her ....

Nisha (mumbled) - Mujhe andhere se darr lagta hai ....

Hearing that beautiful voice in hindi was a huge surprise but later he realised that she was crying .... but when she told him about not being able to find the room, he couldn't help but chuckle .... later he sensed her arguing and smiled at her childishness .... she told him her room number which was coincidentally the room opposite to his .... he dropped her to her room but knew that her softness and warm breath were going over his mind, therefore before she could say anything, he rushed away from there ... he entered his room; threw away his shirt which was wet with her tears ..... to bring his mind under control, he decided to have a cold bath .....

But his heart took over his mind just within a few minutes and he could not control himself from sketching out that beauty who took over him like no other had ever done .....

Sketching the beautiful perfect structure of the face, made him feel like Learnardo da Vinci .... those sad chocolate eyes which in reality held magic were becoming impossible to bring on the sheet .... the dark cloud of her hair which held the night captivated .... the beautiful smile which was mesmerising him but he knew that something was missing ... but what, he didn't know .....

But he knew one thing that this immaculate beauty was what he always had yearned for but deep in his heart he felt that he could never get her ..... After sketching her, he kept staring at the sketch ... for the first time in his life he felt like this ... till now he had never done anything apart from crime and never felt anything apart from the pain; the agony and the fire which never left his body and his soul in peace .....
But just one glance of her gave him the immense peace but with it came the never ending suffering ... because he didn't want to spoil her life by falling in love with her ....

At that minute there was a knock on the door, he immediately came out of his thoughts ... he shut his sketchbook and went to open the door ... it was Sam, he was calling him to strategies the match perfectly ..
Somehow, Vivaan controlled his mind and heart and came up with a perfect strategy to win the match ....
Vivaan had two targets - Win the match and come up with some kind of strategy to make Nisha hate him or just stay away from him ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
res

*edited*

Oh so thats why Vivaan was what he was..Mysterious..

Lovely update di..

Is this the last of the baby chapters?

Waiting to read more..

Love,
Akansha
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyy sonam
Belated happy b'day
Loved the updates
Vivan side story is amazing
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.


love
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Posted: 15 years ago
Both part 17 n 18 were good
Vivaan was atually observing Nisha frm strt yaar
Its jus feels great to knw that Vivaan actually falled for Love at First sight😉 according to me
Hop their probs slove soon
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update Sonam!
belated wishes on ur b'day!
these chapters did explain a lot abt Vivaan's mysterious behaviour....maybe thatz y Nisha saw him talking 2 Sara often...coz he wanted her 2 hate him!
anyways, waiting eagerly waiting 4 u r next update....
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Posted: 15 years ago

great update thanks dear 4pme

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