Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 17

Happy Birthday dear

May ur all wishes cum true

Cuming to updates

Both part 15 n 16 were good

Vivaan's past is really scarry yaar

Liked the way everyone saw the change in Vivaan

I thk Nups took Vivaan n Sara's chat sum wrong way

I really want Vivaan to sneak in Nisha's roon n clarify all thgs

Grace n Sam kuch toh chal raha hai yaha bhi😆😆

gr8 part
story is very much unpredictable and interesting!

Zephyr

He tried to remove the horror of his past from his mind remembering the zephyr of happiness that had invaded his life - Nisha ...

He still remembered the little scared;little nervous, shy and a really beautiful girl entering the Oracle Campus .... her first sight was enough for him to feel the calmness his life missed ....

She was talking to Sara and Clare when he first heard her voice ... he was passing by the reception area when a melodious voice caught him ... captivated him ... he turned to see the person who had such a beautiful voice ... the origin was standing with Sara and Clare ... she was wearing a black knee length dress ... her hair; so long ... her eyes so magical but he noticed some kind of sadness and fear in those chocolate eyes ... his heart was somersaulting ... "She is so angelic", said his heart ... He immediately controlled his senses and moved ahead but somewhere in the corner of his heart that beauty had created a niche for herself .....

In every class he attended, he remembered the voice of that angel ... he couldn't concentrate on the lectures ... it was difficult for him to remove her from his thoughts ....
Vivaan (thinking) - Ye ladki, mere man se door kyun nahi jaati ... aisa kya hai usme ki wo is had tak mujh par haavi pad rahi hai ....

Sam shook Vivaan ....
Sam - What happened dude?
Vivaan - Nothing ....
Sam - When's the practice?
Vivaan - At 8:00 PM .... be there on time ....

At 8:00 PM the team was practising for the match which was right on the corner .... due to the invader; the victim was troubled ....
Ronald did what Vivaan hated the most ... didn't concentrate on his words ....
Vivaan (furious) - RONALD!!!! Didn't you hear what I said? Pass the BALL!!! The match is on head and YOU can't even understand WHAT to do!!!
Ronald was scared and mumbled an apology ....
Sam - Vivaan, relax .... I'll tell him ...
Vivaan - Please!! Tell him ....
And they continued with the practice ....
Sam - Guys, let's go for dinner ....
But to his surprise, Vivaan was not there ....
Sam - Where is Vivaan?
Ronald - Thank god! He is not here ... Sam come let's have dinner ... I am really hungry ...
Sam - Ronald! Okay, let's go .....

Vivaan tried to read a book to push her away from his thoughts but every time he tried to push her ... something would remind him of her ....
He randomly picked a book which was lying on the table ... A Walk To Remember by Nicolas Sparks but Landon and Jamie reminded him of her and he shut the book .... getting frustrated ... at that moment the wind charm blew ... it's tinkling sound reminded him of her melodious voice ....

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As I told before, 3 chapters are going to be very small ... because they in a nutshell show how actually Vivaan felt for Nisha when she entered his life ..... next part i'll post at night since these are baby chapters .... 😊
another thing ...if you want the updates please make sure that you are in my friend list cuz it's very difficult to pm and i don't want to hurt my readers by not pming them .... so please do this effort ... 😊

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Firstly belated happy birthday di..

Hope you had a nice day yesterday...

And yes, i loved this chapter. This clearly shows how nisha affected vivvan..

Loved it..

Will wait for the next part..

Love,
Akansha

Its a nice update.

WOW!! Awesome update... So, Vivaan feels so much... Great!!
Waiting to know what happens further...
Pls continue soon...

Hey Sonam, I love the way you take all you readers step by step. I thoroughly enjoy reading these baby chapters, Keep it up always!

lovely update
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

At first belated happy birth day dear
i m extremely sorry for late wishing
hope u enjoyed a lot


soanm i loved all the parts(15,16,17)
truly amazing
awesome update.
keep it up