Your name across my heart Raj Aamna FF Last Part - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
wow very nice part........................sujal is reading her diary but kakoon hasnt written the guy's name....................cont soon.....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
hey story is very nice..i am loving it ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next one !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very interesting part
Sujal is trying to find out who kakoon is married to, by reading her diary. But She has not metnioned the guys name and this irritating Sujal
Please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Awesome mind blowing sujal kisi ki diary nahi padtey great part thx for pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Your name across my heart Part 10


The last day in Kakoon's college.All the students are busy giving their autographs.Kakoon's mind is not in that.She wants to go the PG class to find out her lover.But she gets stuck up to her classmates.She gets tensed.When everything gets over she runs to the PG class rooms.She goes to each & every Pg classrooms.But she couldn't find out him.She walks slowly with sadness.She is relieved when she sees him on the ground.He had worn sunglasses.He is walking towards his car.Kakoon with high hopes walks forward.But unfortunately he starts the car.Kakoon runs fast.But he had left when she reached there.She cries.She searches for his address.But everyone avoids her.She is lost. Kakoon sits inside her room with lost hopes.
Kkusum:Now can you make sure that that guy loves u?
Kakoon cries and hugs her mom:Mumma,i can't forget him.But ...why destiny is so cruel to me?
Mom becomes sad:Each person's fate is decided by god.Your guy is made by god.Thats none other than Kshitij.
After some days Kakoon recovers from her depressed stage. kshtij comes to her house.
Kshi:Kakoon,get ready fast.we have to go to a place.
K:But Kshitij...
kshitij:Why ae you getting shy?I'm with you.
He gives a black frock.
He:Wear this and come.
K:But usually i don't wear this kind of modern dresses.
Her mom comes:Kakoon loves modern dresses.We middle class people did'nt get a chance for that. Kshi:Thats ok.When i'm here,Kakoon can wear it easily.
Kakoon feels awkward.
She gets inside the room and asks her mom:Mom,why did you lie that i like modern dresses.I have not worn it in my life before.
Mom:You don't like it,because you have not worn it before.When Kshitij brings something good with love,how can u reject it?
Kakoon wears that dress.She is shy.Slowly she goes near Kshitij.
Kshitij:Wow!u look cool yaar.
Kakoon smiles.He holds her hand and get inside the car.
Kshitij drives.
Kshi:Kakoon,i love you very much.I have seen you in many places.I liked you very much,i enquired about you.Thus i came to you with proposal.Kakoon,tell me what you felt when you saw me first?
Kakoon did'nt open her mouth.
Kshitij smiles:I know that you are shy.
He holds her hand.She feels awkward.They reach a place.
K:Which place is this?
Kshi:Disco club. We will enjoy.
K:But Kshitij,i'm not used to going to night clubs.
Kshitij smiles and takes her inside.Full of music.Youngsters are busy dancing. Kshitij holds her hand and starts dancing:Come on Kakoon..
They both dance.Kakoon feels weird.
Kshi:Though its your first experience,you dance well.
K:Thanks.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
I wish she would have written his name...now this will create misunderstandings between them
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
yaar tumko nahi lagta k post bohat small small hai well please do something with this part was nice yah Kashitij ka bacha kuch zayada he chepakne ki koshish kar raha hai aur kakoon ki maata shari toh mahan hai kakoon ko zaber daste bandna chate hai us stupid kash k saath well dear overall nice part i like it ..... humaira
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome part why dint she written his name ???????????????????
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Posted: 15 years ago
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suspense is getting more deeper.......................cont soon.................

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