'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed - Page 23

Hey Neela..

U r right, sometimes some hurdles inly make us realise how much u love someone..
u always find a way ...
I guess n's dad's reaction is pretty normal in conservative societies.
I love their new mode of communication 😆 Hmmm so they would meet ...very interesting :)

wonderful awesome part......... kash woh log ek hogaen.... i can't see a sad ending ...... pls don't make it lyk ur earlier ff pleaseeeeee..........

nyways sad update ho ya happy i still loved it .... 😊

it was fantastic yaar...
loved it...
update it s0000n....

Originally posted by: neelresh

haila Mahii tu ne ghalat samjha! woh usski dadi nahi thee.. Ameena bi thee....her governess..someone who raised Nupur. waise update kuch khaas nahi tha...storyline ko aage barhane k liye zaroorat thi bas. kher tujhe pasand to aaya 😊

-Neela

i wont say much...as whatever i would say would be an understatement 4 sure...neither i m that much worth of appreacting u through proper words....but wanna say this much...!!!this ff is getting really close to my heart.i feel the charaters getting life through ur descriptions..u can emote them really well.u r a writer per xcellence!!hats off to u.slowly by steadily i m turning into an admirer of ur writing skill.wil have to admit it.plzz update soon.

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Haaye Neela.. yeh kya ho gaya.. jiska darr tha wohi hua.. itihaas khud ko dauhara raha hain...kaafi sad sa update tha kyunki do dil mil naa sake.. ur collection of shayari is really good... but i like ur original ones more...

Apnon ke khilaaf jaakar mohabbat ki hain

Mohabbat hi ki hain bagaawat nahin

Kab samjenge yeh duniyawale ki

yeh dil hain koi khilona nahin

Do dilon ko alag karke koi bhi

insaan Khush nahin reh paaya

Pyar karne wale alag hone par bhi

rehte hain ek, jaise hum saaya

Divya...tumhari comments ki to baat hi alag hai 😊 jis shayeraana andaaz se comment karti ho..dil khush hojata hai 👏 isi bahane dil ka haal bhi suna deti ho..bhai kya baat hai 😊

Thanx for ur lovely comments and I am shocked that u prefer my own lines than that of my collection!! Thats news for me...of course good news 😃

-Neela

Originally posted by: ShruAtIF

Hi neelresh, This part was simply marvellous!
Nupur's dad is quite protective of her, which is understandable, considering she is the only daughter and he the only parent for her. But I don't think that means keeping her trapped without allowing her dreams to flourish. The next few days will be very hard for MN, as they have to rove their love to Nupur's dad. I loved the way they communicated by passing letters and that Shayari in the end, it just shows their true love that will remain forever.
Eagerly waiting for the next update, Please continue soon.

Shruti...thanks for your comments sweety! I guess if you put yourself in N's dad's shoes you can understand why he is doing this. According to him, Nupur has lost her objective of life and rather than focussing on studies she is whiling away her life in mingling with boys. So he is only trying to nip it in the bud by imprisoning her. Can't say I agree with him but thats his way of handling the matter. Yeah..next few days are going to be hard on MaYur but I guess this will show how deeply and madly they are in love with each other. And that is the core theme of this story. So enjoy reading coz the next update is coming soon 😃 and please do comment as usual.

-Neela

p.s. you can call me Neela 😊

Originally posted by: kulsumd

nyc part.
Jo dar tha wahi hogaya.
Bechara mayank nupur k liye kitna pareshan tha..
Bi z g8.
To nex update mien mayur milenge..
Jaldi update karna

Kulsum...baccha kaisa hai? Sorry yaar..I am supposed to respond to your earlier comment as well per bhool gayi 😆 my bad...haan..Ameena Bi humain bhi bohat acche lag rahe hai. aanewale dino me unnse kaafi madad milega MaYur ko. aur next update aanewala hai...get ready 😊

-Neela