'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#241

nice updt
thanks for the pm

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#242

ah this is so lovely.. :)

The part they met was so lovely, they were so lost in each other ... having met after a forced separation. then the letter and the shayari :) beautiful...

A thought just struck me, sometimes when parents try to stop their wards from meeting their BF/GF they actually strenghten the relationship unknowingly without meaning to...the separation puts a new meaning and gives strength to their relationship !! :)

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#243

Very nice part.....
Loved it....
Pls continue soon...
Thanks for the pm....

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#244

Nice part

It was senti toh

Thank God they met atleast

Hop they are not seprated

Loved the emotions that were expressed in letters

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#245

hey neeela
bara mast uupdate tha yr
teri shayri pe to me fida hogye
words u use touched my heart
esp the letter by nupur
cont soooooooon
plzzzzzzzzz
and howz ur health hope u fyn now

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#246

amazing part i loved it how they met hope they not sepr thanks 4 pme dear lov samira

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#247

Waah kya baat hain neela...

Mayur ku zindagi mein tufaan aa gaya hain...

ab kya hoga??

Hamari to samajh mein kuch nahi aa raha hain....

Aapki shaayari laajawaab thi....

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#248

kal bukhar tha...... so sad

aab tabiyaat kaise hai??

update hamesha ki tarah perfect tha

mazza aaa gaya padkar

mayur meet was so cute

finally maine dadi aur ameena bi ka difference puri tarah samajh liya

i love the language of your update

nupur's letter yo mayank was so well written

mayank's letter back to nupur was great

loved the shayri

aab abri hai teri rishwat ki

yeh toh bas shurvat hai

a flower for a flower

a crown for writing the best shayri ever i have read

finally my big smile

update soon

love

mahima

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#249

Heyyyy neela
Read last three updates
So sad for mayur
But just loved their love so much
Loved the shayari
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

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jasmeet

@jasmeet khaneja

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#250

Wow..neela..
I'm so in love with ur FF.....it really "hatke"!!
I just read all the ten parts today!!!
But still feel like reading more...

BTW ur shayari makes this FF really special.

I fell like saying "wah wah" after reading every new shari in the updates.

Ohh before you continue can I say >>>>ishaad!!!

(before I forgat pls add me to ur pm list)