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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#201

thanks for pm loved it poor mayu

Kisko kare pyar hum koi bhi na sath deta hai hamara,

Jisko bhi chaha jan se bhi jyada vo hi dil tod gaya hamara.

Hamne to ki hai hamesha hi wafa usse lekin,

Na jane kyon vo sath na deta hai hamara.

Aarjoo thi uski zulfon me sone ki,

Hasrat thi usse aapna banana ki,

Fir kyon ghar jala kar gaya vo hamara.

Jab bhi chot lagi usko ham roye,

Na chahte hue bhi uski yado me ham khoye,

Fir kyon jinda taboot bana kar gaya vo hamara.

Uski ek muskurahat pe 100 khusi var di hamne,

Uski ek chahat pe kitno ko rula diya hamne,

Fir kyon har sukh chain le gaya vo hamara.

Ab aap pe hai ye dosto batana hame,

Uski tarah na aap bhi rulana hame,

Kisko kare pyar ham koi bhi sath na deta hai hamara.

Kisko kare pyar ham .

its written by my frnd

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
thanks for pm loved it poor mayu

Kisko kare pyar hum koi bhi na sath deta hai hamara,

Jisko bhi chaha jan se bhi jyada vo hi dil tod gaya hamara.

Hamne to ki hai hamesha hi wafa usse lekin,

Na jane kyon vo sath na deta hai hamara.

Aarjoo thi uski zulfon me sone ki,

Hasrat thi usse aapna banana ki,

Fir kyon ghar jala kar gaya vo hamara.

Jab bhi chot lagi usko ham roye,

Na chahte hue bhi uski yado me ham khoye,

Fir kyon jinda taboot bana kar gaya vo hamara.

Uski ek muskurahat pe 100 khusi var di hamne,

Uski ek chahat pe kitno ko rula diya hamne,

Fir kyon har sukh chain le gaya vo hamara.

Ab aap pe hai ye dosto batana hame,

Uski tarah na aap bhi rulana hame,

Kisko kare pyar ham koi bhi sath na deta hai hamara.

Kisko kare pyar ham .

its written by my frnd

aap ke dost bohat accha likhte hai...thanks to both of you that we got to witness such talent. Thanx for your comments hun...

-Neela

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#203

when are you updating???

update soon

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
when are you updating???

update soon

haila..Mahiii tujhse permission leke break liya tha na?? ab tu hi shakal bana rahi hai aisi 😛 fiker mat kar...sirf tere liye aaj kaushish karti hoon update karne ki. ab ek accha sa smiley bhej mujhe ...forannnnn...

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: neelresh

haila..Mahiii tujhse permission leke break liya tha na?? ab tu hi shakal bana rahi hai aisi 😛 fiker mat kar...sirf tere liye aaj kaushish karti hoon update karne ki. ab ek accha sa smiley bhej mujhe ...forannnnn...

maine sirf ek din ki break di thi

tunne toh do din ki le li

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

maine sirf ek din ki break di thi

tunne toh do din ki le li

kyaaa?? do din hogaye 😲 beech ka ek din kya hua? 😆 I think I was sleeping 😆 😆 thik hai...koi nahi. aaj..pakka...per smiley kahan hai? pehle woh to bhaij

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: neelresh

kyaaa?? do din hogaye 😲 beech ka ek din kya hua? 😆 I think I was sleeping 😆 😆 thik hai...koi nahi. aaj..pakka...per smiley kahan hai? pehle woh to bhaij

intni badi smile di hai....... aab toh aaj update milega na??

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#208

~~~~~~~ Part 9: ek mulaqat ~~~~~~~~~~

Nupur's father enters home with Nupur and lets his fury out…

P: main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha k meri hi khoon mujhe sharminda karne pe tuli hogi.
D: arre kya hua beta? aisa kya hogaya (she looks at Nupur who was crying) aur bitiya ro kyun rahi hai?
P: poochiye isse k kya kiya hai issne? khandan ki izzat ko dhool me milaker rakh diya hai
N: humnain aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya papa jisske wajah se aap ko sharminda ya beizzat hona pare
P: sarre aam ek gher larke ki baahon me…woh bhi itne raat ko kya ker rahi thee? beizzati agar isse nahi kehte to kise kehte hai?
D: (shocked) kya yeh sach hai beti?
N: dadi..yeh sach hai hum usse mohabbat karte hai per yakeen maane hamara…humnain apne sharam aur lehaaz ki dehleez kabhi paar nahi ki. iss khandan ki izzat abhi tak hamare paas mehfooz hai
P: khak mehfooz hai? apne bare buzurgon ke saamne apne mohabbat ka elaan karnewali badtameez larki khandan ki izzat ko kya samjhegi! humain tumse yeh umeed nahi thee Nupur!!!
N: hum sach keh rahe hai papa…humnain kabhi bhi aap ke bharose ka nahi tora aur na kabhi torengey. aap humain ghalat mat samjhiye..
P: khamosh! hum aur kuch nahi sunna chahte. maa…isse keh dijiye aaj se isska university jaana bandh. bohat ho chuki parhayi, ab ghar me rehke kaise apne baro ka izzat karna chahiye woh sikhayye

..and he rushes out of the room. Nupur holds her dadi and starts weeping.

D: yeh tu ne kya kiya bacchi! tujhe to pata hai na tere papa kaise hai. phir bhi…kuch to sochna chahiye tha
N: dadi humain nahi pata k yeh sab kab aur kaise hua. bas achanak se woh aaya zindagi me aur sab kuch badalke rakh diya. humain yeh sab sochne ka ya samajh ne ka mauka hi nahi mila. bas dil ka kaha suna aur uss raste per chal pare.
D: beti tujhe andaaza nahi hai k iss raaste me tujhe kitne mushkile aur musibaton ka saamna karna parega. aur teri papa ….sighs!
N: ab hum kya kare dadi..hum usske baghair nahi jee sakte..

she continues weeping holding her dadi.

Mayank is in university next day and is desperately looking for Nupur. He finds the gang at the corridor of the classrooms and asks them..
M: Diya tumne Nupur ko dekha hai kahi?
D: nahi to…in fact aaj to woh aayi hi nahi university.
M: kyun…usski tabiyet to thik hai na?
D: ermm… yeh to nahi pata. main aaj usse phone karke pooch loongi. don't worry, kal aajayegi :)

Mayank is still worried but he walks away with the hope that Nupur will come to uni next day.

Next day…
M: Diya... Nupur kahan hai?
D: I don't know Mayank. maine kal phone kiya to usski dadi ne kaha ke woh kuch din university nahi aayegi
M: usski tabiyet to thik hai na?
D: maine poocha tha to usski dadi ne kaha k tabiyet thik hai…hum log fiker na kare

Mayank started worrying now..'agar tabiyet ko kuch nahi hua to university kyun nahi aayi? kahi usski papa ne to…' it was making sense now. Nupur's papa must have been very upset that day and could have forbidden her to come to university. He had to know the truth…he was worried about Nupur. So he decided to make a stop at her house on his way back home. As he enters the main gate, he is stopped by the watchman

W: kaun chahiye? kisse milna hai?
M: woh mujhe Nupur se milna hai. main usski friend hoon
W: Nupur baby se koi nahi mil sakta. aap jayye..unse aap college me mil lijiyega
M: college nahi…university. magar woh to university bhi nahi aarahi
W: jab aayegi tab mil lena shaab, ab jayye!

Mayank feels helpless and at the same time restless. Now he is more desparate to meet Nupur. Something is definitely wrong. While he is walking away, he sees a slightly aged woman…he remembers something and goes back to the watchman

M: kya main Ameena bi mil sakta hoon?
W: kyun shaab... kya woh bhi aapki dost hai? (he giggles)
M: mazak bandh karo aur Ameena bi ko bulao

He goes inside and says something to the woman who Mayank just saw wondering outside. She comes to the gate..

A: kaun ho tum? mujhse kyun milna chahte ho?
M: Ameena bi… main Nupur ki dost hoon, mera naam Mayank hai. kaisi hai Nupur?
A: tum mujhe kaise jaante ho?
M: Nupur ne mujhe aap ke baare me sab kuch bataya hai
A: kya bataya hai bhai?
M: yehi k aap aur aap ki khandan piriyon se iss ghar ka seva kar rahe hai. Nupur ke maa ki death ke baad aap hi ne usse paalke bara kiya aur Nupur aap ko apni maa ki tarha maanti hai
A: kya naam bataya tumne apna?
M: Mayank!
A: Mayank? ya Allah, kahi tum wohi larka to nahi jisske wajah se aaj meri bitiya ki yeh haal hai? tum yahan kyun aaye ho? agar usski papa ne tumhe dekh liya to ghazab hojayega….jao tum yahan se.
M: pehle mujhe yeh to bata dijiye ke woh kaisi hai? aur university kyun nahi aarahi aajkal?
A: arre beta toofan agaya hai ghar me. uss din ke baad se Nupur ka ghar se bahar nikalna bandh hai. bas kabhi kabar hi bahar nikal paati hai woh bhi apne dadi ya mere saath. bitiya ka to ro ro ke bura haal hai (she wipes tears from her eyes)
M: Ameena bi aap mera ek kaam kar sakti hai? ek minute…

He quickly writes something in his notebook, tears the page and gives it to Ameena bi.

M: yeh khat aap Nupur tak pauhncha sakti hai?
A: nahi nahi…agar sahab ko pata chal gaya to bitiya ki aur meri dono ki jaan le lenge
M: Ameena bi..agar yeh khat Nupur tak na pauhncha to bhi aap ki bitiya ki jaan pe bann aayegi…aur saath me meri

Ameena looks at Mayank's eyes…slightly humid but full of honesty and sincerity. She can see that passion..that certain trait in him that pushes a man to do anything for his love. She doesn't object anymore, takes the note and disappears very quickly from the scene.

Nupur is sitting at the terrace with a piece of paper in her hand. She reads it again…

"Agar tum iss khat ko abhi par rahe ho to isska matlab hai Ameena bi hamare saath hai. humain tumhari bohat fiker ho rahi hai…milna hai…kaise bhi…kahin bhi. Ameena bi ke haath jawab bhej de na. main intezar kar raha hoon - Tumhara.. Mayank "

Nupur writes a note and gives it to Ameena bi

A: bitiya..yeh sab thik nahi hai. teri papa ko pata chalega to khoon kharaba ho jayega.
N: bi iss waqt humain bas aap hi ka sahara hai. hamari madad kijiye. iss tarha se to hamara dam ghoont jayega. jis bitiya ko aap ne apne haathon se paala hai kya ab usse aise tarapte hue dekhna chahte hai? kya chahte hai aap log k hamari jaan nikal jaaye? tab khush honge aap sab? (she starts weeping)
A: nahi meri bacchi…de mujhe. main uss tak pauhancha doongi

..and she does. Mayank opens the note rapidly.

"Kal subhe hum dadi ke saath pir baba k mazar jaa rahe hai. bas wahin per milte hai ab. apna khayal rakhna- Tumhari… Nupur"

Mayank holds to letter close to his heart as he utters the words…

Muntazir hoon kab se ke itni shafa meri aankhon me aaye
Kuch dawa ho jayegi zindagi ki maut agar teri bahon me aaye

-Neela

p.s. this sher is not mine...its from my collection :)

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#209

Haaye Neela.. yeh kya ho gaya.. jiska darr tha wohi hua.. itihaas khud ko dauhara raha hain...kaafi sad sa update tha kyunki do dil mil naa sake.. ur collection of shayari is really good... but i like ur original ones more...

Apnon ke khilaaf jaakar mohabbat ki hain

Mohabbat hi ki hain bagaawat nahin

Kab samjenge yeh duniyawale ki

yeh dil hain koi khilona nahin

Do dilon ko alag karke koi bhi

insaan Khush nahin reh paaya

Pyar karne wale alag hone par bhi

rehte hain ek, jaise hum saaya

Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago