Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73) - Page 51

Originally posted by: ght_sajan

wowww ayesha that was a very pleasent surprise...this is one of those ff's i used to really look forward to & i am so glad you finally updated it...fantastic part...loved it...pls do unviel the mystery of gunjan's past soon...plsss update soon & don't keep us waiting for too long...

Originally posted by: mars14

hey thanks a ton for pm i had nt read yet however cs is great i wil read when will freee sooryyy but its great i knooww...i wil coment after reading thanks

Originally posted by: MohitSanayaDrug

Read ALL of the Parts !! 🤗 Pllzz Add me to pm list 😳

Awww! Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. Means a LOT

Originally posted by: ..-Jia-..

First of all, kaan pakhad ke! I am sorry! I always reserve but I never edit and YES IT IS A LONG ONE but only for like the first 4 chapters 🤣 So expect a long one for the next 4 chapters 🤣

*Gets a shock* 😲😲 *rubs eyes* *faintsss* *diesss* 😆😆

OMG...Is this YOUUU?? JIAAA?? Like really?

Thank you SOO SOO much for doing this. It has touched me beyind words 🤗

Ok baji second of all, I love this FF! Though you have only written 5 chapters, (OYEEE!! I've updated EIGHT chapters 😆😆) you have written it so beautifully. I felt like I could see whatever is happening in front of my eyes. You have brought dept into your writing that made me feel every emotions, and you know what, it is very rare that I get butterflies when watching something or reading something but your FF has done it baji.

Baji you are an amazing writer and you show this very well through your writings. Very few people bring out the emotions in the reader but you are one of the fews that do bring it out! I am so glad that you have started writing because you are so talented baji! And I can say that you are one of my favroite writers. <33

Baji, before I comment on your FF, I want to say that I feel as if you are writing, this is sort of a
personal experience as well. I don't know why, I just feel that way. The way you have Samrat's and Gunjan's characters to be friendly characters towards their students, reminded me of you.

Ok enough of the praises and let me move onto the real thing! Haha you probably thought I would be done. ;) Your choti behen is just getting started! <33

JIAAA, i seriously don't know what to say here. I'm really too short of words. SOOO many praises. believe me, i'm not at all a good writer. Its just that writing's my passion and i pen down whatever comes in my mind. You are being extra generous, my choti behen! 🤗 I don't think i deserve soo much appreciation.

Seriously baji, who told you write this good? God I read one sentence and I have a smirk on my face. It vanishes. Then I read another part, and another goofy smile comes on my face.

Ok so can I just say that I am loving the characters Samrat and Gunjan? I mean of course I would but you know your FF makes me love them even more. You have described Gunjan in the most beautiful way that I think it is impossible that a person like her even exist. I mean she is PEREFECTIONIST. I am loving her like Gunjan in MJHT. And Samrat. Awweh poor boy just like in MJHT is alone and that too in London. But thank God you brought him to India. But being grown up with out any love he has come a long way and I am glad that you have shown Samrat in this shade. Would love to see him like this in MJHT.

You started off with Samrat and Dr. Khan and right then I loved Samrat's character. He is so genuine, so sweet. In the first chapter, I loved how you had Samrat give his thoughts and Gunjan's. From the part, "I saw a girl wid specs," and onwards, you have described Gunjan in a way that would leave everyone mesmerized. Everyone would be speechless, everyone would love her. Then it comes to Gunjan's thoughts. Ok I love how she thought he was a student but the way she looks at him and his mesmerizing eyes forced her to look into them. That was so beautifully described. The way you wrote the way they both are drawn to each other and how she got goosebumps and butterflies gave me the save feelings. I felt what she was feeling. It is weird, it was like I was drawn to Samrat too. *blush* Haha weird na?

I loved their short conversation where she says that admission office is closed. Haha I chuckled while reading this. It was so cute. Then the way Sarmat is lost in her, made me lost into Samrat and Gunjan. How januable can they be even if they don't know each other. I mean I swear if they are this cute before knowing each other, I wonder how they will be when they are in love, (if they ever fall in love ;))

I love how whenever someone mentions Gunjan, Samrat gets lost in his thoughts. He wonders who this person is. Beautifully described and written :)

I think my favorite chapter is chapter 3/4 so far. I love the way that both of them look at each other and have this feeling which baji I had too. Weird but your writing made me feel that way. I love how his eyes searches for her. And then both have these feelings, like some magnetic force is drawing them close together.

Okay...the same problem again...I don't know what to say 😳😆😆 I never knew my RCQ would give such a looong comment and will bowl me out like this! Thank you SOOO much, Jia for reading, liking and commenting on this FF. Believe me, your comments took me straight to cloud 9. I'm extremely glad that you liked the chapters...and reading your comments have taken me on a journey of my FF. The difference is while reading about the chapters here..i was blushing also...Ahhh!! I'm too bad at handling appreciation 😳😆😆

Do continue your FF baji. And I just want to say sorry phir se for the late comment. First school and then phir se what I told you on MSN but now since you are going to edit by chapter I will comment faster. =)
Awww!!! Jia...at the expense of reapeating myself...i'm elated seeing you here. Thank you for giving me this memorable gift of your comments. And, plz...take your time in reading and commenting. But let me warn you...i WANT comments from you now...and that too, LONG ones 😆😆 And no worries...it seems, my updates are never gonna be regular 😳

Love you always and forever baji,
Your choti behen =)

Thanks again...and love you tooo 🤗

Originally posted by: ..-Jia-..

I didn't finish reading the whole chapter but i just wanted to comment on this bit:

Gunjan was already blushing and shying away because everyone was praising her, and on top of it, Samrat asking for a handshake, increased her perplexity and uneasiness. She looked at his hand for a second, then looked towards him, and with a bit of a hesitation, gave him her hand. It was a delicate touch. He felt the softness of her milky white hand and wrapped his fingers gently around her fingers, as if they might break if he applied even a little force. She remained steady and kept her hand straight. "Hello!" she managed after a few seconds. "Welcome to Excel". Was this really needed? she thought in her mind. Still, as she had said it, she gave him a feeble smile. They both didn't realize that they hadn't let go off the each other's hands all this while.

OMG I got butterflies and goosebumps and I think my cheeks are red like tomatoes. 😲 I don't know maybe it is being engaged that reading this small passage gave me butterflies. Uh oh main pagal ho gaye hai 🤣 I will continue with this when I am on my break 😳

Love you!<33

Originally posted by: ambikamuskaan

awesome...

update soon...

Originally posted by: nishi_sajan

res

Sorry for being late Ayesha di!

My commons are going on will edit it within a week!😳