Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73)

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nature099

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Posted: 14 years ago

#521

Wow awesome part just loved it continue soon

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DiyaS

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Posted: 14 years ago

#522

FINALLY!!!!!!! Just read the whole part in one go ... loved the conversation between Sam and Gunjan ... all shades from teasing, to fun to sharing their pain and memories ... or just starting to share them ... 😍 ... can't wait to see how their relationship progresses and the secret of both their pasts ...

You deepened the mystery of Gunjan's past and Pinky here ... by saying that Gunjan had never had anyone look after her so tenderly ... so who and what was Pinky's father?

Lovely part, ashu ... worth the wait ... but left me wanting more ... so update soon!!!

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#523

I AM NO LESS

i will also reserve...not sure abt un-reserve timings though

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362035

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Posted: 14 years ago

#524

awesooome..

superb...

wonderful upd.

loved it...

thanx for the pm.

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aashi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#525

aasuuu 🤗🤗its just pleasant surprise sweetheart 🤗 OMG what a wonderful and awesome update it was !! seriously standing ovation 👏 u know this update was worth reading 👏 u described new bonding and new feelings of sajan superbly 👏

the way u describe sajan's deep and pure feelings their starting of new friendship with heart connection or something more than friendship 😳 this update was just superb from heart to heart talk of sajan the way gunajn opened up herself which she never did , samrat's vulnerable state which he always covered with his happy go lucky nature , gunjan's pain her life's loneliness , deep pain which she felt in past here we got some hints of her past that she had very painful memories with it , related to her personal life and pinky

samrat's vulnerable state his pain his loneliness which he always covered with his down to earth and humble nature , here u describe samrat's char oustandingly no doubt like gunjan me too fall for him 😳😆his humbleness ,his concern his care , to help ppl u described chinu and samrat's small little convo wonderfully describing samrat's wonderful down to earth nature

most amazing was sajan's changing feelings and bonding their comfort level their communication through eyes they need not to share words for their feelings but their eyes said it all , gunjan's blush her shyness , his naughtiness his care it was seriously superb , u know aasu in whole update u managed it so wonderfully u made us laugh , u made us smile , u made us to feel their pain and to feel new feelings for them i was engrossed while reading , now can't wait for next update hon , update soon and give such a superb and pleasant surprise 🤗and thanks for pm 🤗