Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73) - Page 48

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Drishti-

AMAZINGGG update Ayesha!! loved itt!! soo happy that u finally introduced Pinky...loved her scene with Sam...it was too cutee!! and now i can't wait to know abt Gunjans pastt!! :P ahhh...Chashmishh...finally!! yayy!! :D:D continue soon!!

P.S.- sorry for the late and small comment...skools been busyy!! :(

Thank you, Drish for such a lovely feedback.
Glad that you liked Pinky's intro. She definitely is an adorable kid.
And yes...Chashmish's her finally!
Thanks again 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

awesomeee ff loved it

its superb
jst read the whole ff its mindblowing
plzzz contineu soon
n add me to ur pm list
lov
-madiha-

Thank you, Madiha. Glad that you liked it
And...added you in the PM list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aditi--

cute n sweet updt😊

Thanks, Aditi Smile
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rupal.sri24

hey...nice ff...loved all the parts

update soon and include me in your pm list.

Thanks a lot for reading my FF...and liking all the parts.
Have added you in my PM list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aysha1010

Awesome update!! 😃

Do I really have to say that I LOVED Samrat in this chapter??!! From the start to the end, every single thing said about, or said by, or done by Samrat made me smile!!!

I loved how Gunjan was so lost in Samrat's thoughts and how she felt so happy when Mayank praised Samrat!! 😳

And I absolutely loved Samrat with Chinu!! And Gunjan with Chinu too, of course!! 😳

"Chinu, sirf batein hi kertey raho ge, galey nahin milo ge kya?" Samrat and his usual style.

That was just so sweet!!

And then SaJan'

Realy cute how they're getting more comfortable with each other. First the "sir" and now the "aap"!! 😳

And then Samrat calling her beautiful in specs. That's something I had always adored in SG!! How her specs never made her any less beautiful for him. 😳

And he called her Chashmish!!! 😃 Yay!! I think for the first time, but I'm not sure!! 😆

It was the first time anyone had struck this cord within her. She was beautiful, extremely beautiful, not only from outside, but her heart also was so beautiful, yet no one ever complimented her. She was the simple, shy, introvert girl, who was always ready to help anyone and everyone. No one saw her beauty, it was just her work, that became the face which everyone used to see. Did Samrat see that beauty of her's or was he also referring to her professionalism and work that was the face for everyone else also? Her heart, her mind had no answer. Maybe because, she didn't want an answer. He called her beautiful, and it seemed, her world came to a standstill.

Aww!! This was just so Gunjan. And I loved every single bit of it!!

Coming to the cutest, and my favorite part of the chapter!!

PINKY!!! I love her already!!! And you didn't have to do much to get me smiling there because just thinking of Samrat and Pinky brought the biggest smile to my face!!

Every single gesture, interaction or whatever happened between Samrat and Pinky was the cutest and most adorable thing ever!!! From the little fingershake to the last goodbye was just so cute!!

So, Pinky is Gunjan's daughter?! I wonder how Samrat will react when he finds out!! And now I can't wait to see Gunjan and Pinky together!!! 😊

Thank you, Aysha.
I seriously don't know what to say after sooo much of appreciation. I'm extremely touched and am glad that you liked the update.
And...miss you at mETc Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hiii

sorry for very late comment

loved the part
and samrat and pinky sceens were to cute
i loved them
plese continue soon
waiting for the update

Thank you, Tanzeel for your sweet comments! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SajanRox

Nice.. I read it in one go..

I did not know about this fab ff..

Pinky is Gunjan's daughter..

Finally here entrance..

Loved Mayur Nok-Jhoks..

Samrat's affection towards all..

Pinky is soo cute..

Aww.. She loves Sammy..

Is Maan another name for Gunjan?

No words to describe the story..

I loved the story-line..

Uday still in college!!!

BenIa finally a couple..

Love it to the core

Add me to your PM List..

Update Soon'

Thanks a lot for liking my FF. I'm glad that you liked all the characters here.
Yes, Pinky is Gunjan's daughter. And sorry..i didn't get you! Maan is NOT another name for Gunjan..In fact, I don't have this name MAAN in my FF. 😳
Thanks again..and have added you in my PM list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Meens: Thanks a lot for being the first one again! Mean a LOT to me 🤗
I remember, how much I bugged you for it...and how u managed it...so, an even bigger thank youuu for always bearing me 😳 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DiyaS

Are you finally going to update? In that case, 'res' 😆

*edit* ... thank god you updated ... and you got me even more curious about Gunjan's past and Pinky ... am really waiting to know about that! In the meantime, loved the growing closeness of samrat and gunjan and how they both get lost in each others' eyes always ... and the professional committed SG are of course my dream come true ... I really like the details you put in about their work lives 😃

Thanks a lot, Diya for always being so generous. Praises coming from a great writer like you, make me elated, yet all the more nervous. I think i need writing lessons from you. Instead of improving, i'm taking a downward path when penning down things 😳
Your curiosity about Gunjan's past...sorry, but it's still under wraps for some time. Isn't it a good technique to retain the readers here? 😉😆 No...but seriously, i'm trying to bring it up now. But with my speed and frequency with which I update...it can take a year or so 😳😆😆
Thanks again...i was extremely happy to see your comment..esp., in "those" offliner" times 😉
God bless!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhh u were being a good gal n replying to everyone
good good
but update soon...we r waiting

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