Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73) - Page 46

Originally posted by: aahana86

Ashu 🤗 🤗🤗🤗Yay !!! 🥳 my wish fulfilled finally !!! sorry am jumping the line here 😆😆 but pinky finally !!😆 u know how much i had been dying to know abt her 😉😆😆 she's got me more excited about this story then even Samrat & Gunjan!!!! 🤣 wow and what a cute grand entry by the little miss 😛 loved it 😆😆 directly reaching Sammy boy's office aww and i loved it how u showed that Sam befriended her so instantly choo chweet and also that somehow u established a detail here 😉 her immediately holding onto Sam so tightly as if she wouldn't let go 😉 hmm.. it looks as if thats a clue mam here that she has a lot to do 😉

next i loved how u have sweetly established gunjan' friendship with MN 😆😆 having created a war zone for them as well here while at it hmmm... so mayank knows Samrat not well enough but knows him .. nice 😉 and it was really wonderful that gunji is feeling overwhelmed by her feelings for him so much that any mention of him makes her heart skip a beat

as always the professional front was handled with elan ashu and yep loved the way you portrayed Sam & Gunji' down to earth sweet nature😳 their addressing chinu and being humble - sam being so dear in the welcoming scene - really ashu that was too cute


but but but the most amazing scene [ after Pinky's entry that is 😉 🤣🤣] sorry excitement made me write that first 🤣🤣 was finally the entry of ... yes CHASHMISH 🥳 yay ! u know it ashu well enough of how special this word is to any and every SGian i dont need to explain why i am so glad it finally made it's appearance 😛 and of the scene where he called her beautiful ☺️ aww ...i loved it but ah gunji always had those issues 😒 why cant people appreciate a bespectacled girl really do specs take away the beauty of a person - inside or out ?? why damn it ah but thats what despite all his dhakkan ways in the show 🤣🤣 made us all love Sam for he saw her beyond those glasses found her beautiful; appreciated her as a woman ought be and wants 😳 and mostly loved her as and for what she is despite being so different from her !! he never asked or expected her to change 😳

dying to read more of this ashu in ur further update 😊 know it'd be rocking 😃 as always ... will await the next pm to come my way 😛

Awww!!! Thanks a lot, Aahana. When you commented on this chapter, i had plans of writing a long reply...but now this update's history, so i better keep it short...😆

Originally posted by: TheWandmaker

Wow ayesha!
I LoVeD d Update!!:D
It was Awesome:D
It's difficult to point out which scene was the best lol
I liked the MN scene with gunjan, it was cute and typical MN😳
Cheena scene was fab..i loved his entry! and also the beautiful part yaar...😍 Truly magical scene 😳
and pinky, she's gunjan's daughter thts for sure...but i loved it! I could imagine pinky like an angel u knw...glowing innocent, ohh well she must be an angel gunji's daughter afterall😊
Now if no1 ever called gunjan beautiful where did this kid come from...? ermm i guess a horrible past she has.
Lets c m waiting eagerly for the upcoming chaps...i luv ur style of writing!:)

U rock👍🏼
Do try n continue soon
Thanks for the PM

Lots of Luv
ZeeJay🤗

There's still some time left for Gunjan's past to reveal. Hope you sit through this FF till then

Originally posted by: marisol45

great update
loved it
pinky is so cute!
can't wait to read more
do continue soon😊

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan

wow awesome yaar.. whos the mother of that kid? omg... nyc update loved it continue sooonnn

Originally posted by: amy00487

really cute... Pinky 😊... shooo shweeet 😛
Thanks for the PM!!

Originally posted by: -Jyotika-

Beautiful update dear..
i soo loved reading the whole part..
whooppiiee.. finally samrat called gunjan CHASHMISH😳 🥳
and awww i really adored pinky-sam scene.. 😍 thats gunjan's daughter i think!! It was reallyy a cutee scene.. i could imagine sam and pinki together 😍 loved it.. pllzzz do cont soon

I'm sure there will be more of them throughout this FF...so, i hope you keep enjoying them