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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
OMG...awesomeeeeeee part...
Loved it to the core.....
its fabulous..!
thnx for the pm..!
n do cont.soon..!
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#92
mindblowinggggg updt..
luved it..
do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
hey dear!
awesome part!!!
the best had to be the nupur scene... the truth question
LOL..
very nice..
nd poor sheena.... =(
well.. do cont soon
cuz i will be waiting!!
=D
luv.
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

awesome ud loved it do continue soon n thanx 4 the pm

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awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ud
loved it cont sooooooooooooooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
hey nice update and looking forward for the next one pls update it soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
@mehek- thnx a lot dear..m glad u liked it soo much!!🤗
@jyotika- thnx dear..m glad u liked it😊
@afshanafreen- thnx dear....Yeah CUTE...hehehe its a joke actually....u knw the full form of CUTE? its Creating Useless Troubles Everywhere..and it suits really well...bcoz thts wat am doing...creating troubles in the story.😛u will see in the next chap.😉
@HinaL- aww am glad sheena is getting the sympathy needed:) life is hard. I would say nupur for me is a person who has the power to change the emotions around and channel them around in a positive way, which is why she's the one always passign witty comments...hope u all are liking her...:)
@cuteangel- thnx a lot dear..m glad u liked it!😃
@sweetsonal- thnx a lot dear:D...m glad u liked it:D
@lovebarbie- thnx a lot dear..means a lot:D
@aarthi- thnk u jaana:D
I know evry1 is eager to read the next chap! so am posting it now....
but am sorry coz i havent pmed a few readers about the update...and i wasnt ol this morning...i started writing a new story
nyways so to sort this out Guys i have decided i will update evryday morning....will be like afternoon for those in india.
Also just wanted to ask..though its a later thing. i checked the forum rules and it states clearly that the story must be for the age-group 8 to 80 and also that no foul words...so i have edited stuff...from my ff. But i just wanted to know..u guys will feel uncomfortable on reading intimate scenes??not much...just a lil romance....?
do tell me..i will edit my story on tht basis.😊
and finally thnx for all the love showered in the form of comments
Means a lot guys!
m truly overwhelmed.
Lots of Luv
ZeeJay!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 6-THE GRAND DAY II

The song changes at the background

Aaye Paapi... from kismat konnection

CJ- hey ma fav!

Uday- comeon then lets dance

Benji turns to sheena "wanna dance?"

sh-"sure"

Uday- dids tum bhi chalo na

Dia- tum jao i'll join u guys later

M- ok this is it! yahi waqt hai nupur ko propose karne ka! "xcuse me"

Mayank heads to the dj

After a while mayank comes back and offers his hand to Nupur.

Nupur smiled listening to the music suddenly flowing over the speakers and then gasped in happiness realizing what song it was.It was their song!

Resham si yeh hawae sanam......

Nupur accepts it n they both head to the dance floor

Dia- so Gunjan howz life?

Gunjan- life is gud wat abt urs?

Dia- same dear wahi shooting rampwalks ads...very tiring!

Gunjan- ya u two do gr8 work together i hv seen a few rampwalks

Dia- really thts so sweet of u thnx jaana

to tum kya karti ho aajkal?

Gunjan- maine abhi abhi apni padai complete ki hai ab professor ki tarah college main apply kiya hai

Dia- "thts gud par tum film industry main kyun nahin aaye, u sing really gud aur yaad hai woh jo song tumne compose kiya tha college play ke liye?? woh kitna achha tha"

Gunjan- "thnx dia par mujhe as a professor kaam karna theek laga, u knw film industry is just not for me"

RV- "so nupur n mayank r together?"

G- ya just like u n diya!

RV- and u n samrat?

Gunjan's face fell she looked at samrat wid a pained look

Why did she had to answer all this?

Dia- hey is evrything fine?

Gunjan- no

Dia- dont tell me u two broke up?

Samrat approaches them, Gunjan looks away.

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Meanwhile the song was playing at the back, It was almost gonna end

Mayank- Nupur?

Nupur- hmmm

Mayank- aaj ka din tumhari life ka sabse special din hoga

Nupur- special to hai hi

Mayank mentally cursed himself for sayin somethin this stupid ...mayank concentrate!

Mayank- aur main ise aur special banane wala hoon

Nupur looks at mayank in amusement, he spins her

N- woh kaise?

The sound of glass breaking diverts their attention they hear dia's loud voice over the commotion

"Sammy how could u?" she was saying.

Many of the people around their table were staring too

Samrat was standin with his head held down in a sombre expression. Diya n RV were standing too looking at samrat questioningly.Gunjan was crying.

Nupur- Gunjan?

Nupur leaves mayanks hand n walks towards the table

Mayank follows her

Mayank- sab gadbad ho gaya

Gunjan turns n leaves towards the washroom.

Nupur calls out "Gunjan!?" she pretends not to hv heard her over the loud music

Nupur- Samrat! gunjan ko kya hua?

Dia- gunjan ko kya hua! tumhe nahin pata?

All the friends had gathered around the table

Nupur- kya nahin pata?

Dia- tht sammy n gunjan broke up 2 1/2 yrs bck!

Nupur- wat!?

"nupur tum mere saath chalo main tumhe batata hoon" mayank says before the situation gets out of hands.

Nupur stared at mayank in shock-" batata hoon? iska matlab tumhe pata tha aur tumne mujhey batana zaroori nahin samjha!?"

Uday- "guys lets leave, we will solve evything at home

Sheena- "ya u r ryt evry1 is staring i'll check on gunjan "

Mayank- "nupur pls relax, chalo mere saath"

All of them head towards the exit of the club

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At home

Benji, Gunjan, Mayank n nupur reach first.

Nupur speeds towards the gate

Mayank- "Nupur!"

"wat!?" nupur asks angrily.

Mayank- nupur pls naraz mat ho!

Benji- i'll take gunjan to her room

"no i'll b wid her" nupur turns

Mayank holds her hand "no you will be with me, you need to know the truth first"

"Benji its ok m fine" with tht gunjan heads upstairs to her room.

Mayank- Benji u wait here for others, Nupur come with me

Mayank holds her hand n leads her to his room and tells her about everything.

Nupur calms down a bit

Nupur- But mayank, samrat shouldn't have called it a small thing.

Mayank- Nupur samrat didn't mean that the whole thing wasn't an issue, Gunjan should have trusted him, asked him, atleast talked to him about the whole thing…and that was just an incident, you have to agree nupur, its common among players, such incidents happen, and samrat did push that girl away…he tried to make gunjan understand that he didn't even know that girl.

Nupur- so all this was a big misunderstanding?

Mayank- Quite much

Nupur- m going to gunjan

Mayank- no, Sheena and Benji must be there for her

Nupur- matlab?main uski behen hoon mujhey hona chahiye uske saath

Mayank- nahin samrat ko is waqt zyaada support ki zaroorat hai

Nupur-mayank! tumhe aisa lagta hai!?

Mayank-haan

Nupur- mayank mana ki samrat ki is sab main koi ghalti nahin par gunjan ko bhi chot pohuchey hai

Mayank- mujhey pata hai,main to bas yeh keh raha hoon ki yeh misunderstanding bhi isi wajah se create hui hai.Agar gunjan samrat ki baat sun leti to.."

"hann ghalti to saaro meri behen ki hai" Nupur shouts in anger

Mayank- aisa to nahin kaha maine, nupur tum ghalat samajh rahi ho

Nupur leaves in anger

Mayank heads down to the living room in frustration.

Mayank enters to find Dia, RV and CJ seated on the couch, Benji and Uday on the bean bags and Sheena leaning on the wall staring at sam who had his face turned away from everyone.

"sab meri ghalti hai" Samrat was saying.

Mayank turns to sheena "Gunjan?"

Samrat closes his eyes at her name

Sheena- shes sleeping

Mayank places his hand on samrat's shoulder "Samrat relax hum sab jaante hain ki isme kisi ki ghalti nahin hai"

Dia- ya samrat its not ur fault, it was a misunderstanding

Benji- tum pareshan mat ho we all will find a solution to this together..we all are with you!

Samrat- but am with gunjan

Sheena- matlab?

Samrat-"I deserve wat m getting"

Uday- dont say tht dude

Dia nods at Uday n Mayank

"Sheena mera aur RV ka kamra dikhana main bohut thak gaye hoon, is sab ke baare main baad main baat karengey"

Sheena takes the hint "sure u must be tired it was a 12 hour journey after all"

Dia-"Right babes"

Dia, RV and Sheena leave

Mayank- samrat first sit down please, we need to solve this.

Samrat gets seated

CJ-Dekh dude jo ho gaya so ho gaya ab tu mujhe bata ki tu use abhi bhi chahta hai ya nahin?

Samrat nods

Benji- then no need to worry dude, usse mana lena

Samrat- par kya woh mujhey maaf karegey?

Mayank-karegey!

Samrat-tujhe kaise pata?

Mayank- woh ro rahi thi she still loves you

Samrat bents his head, stands up and before anyone could stop him punched the wall hard with his fist

CJ-samrat!

It caused immense pain which felt good! I deserve it

He looked at his fist, it was bleeding. He lifted his fist to aim another one at the wall just when Uday stopped him

Uday stared at samrat in the eye "This is not the solution sam"

Samrat- "but it makes me feel better"

Samrat leaves

"Nupur?" Benji asks mayank

Mayank- she went to her room, to gunjan

CJ-How did she react?

Mayank- shes angry

Benji-all went so wrong! u were gonna propose to her today all messed up man!

CJ-wat! propose?

"ya neva mind tht now! Mayank sighed

Uday- we hv to make this right!

Benji- yes but how?

CJ looks at Uday n grins

"sounds like a job for us"

Uday grins too "Yes!"

FLASHBACK

Gunjan was sitting at the basketball court reading, samrat approaches her

"Hey Gunjan"

she looks up "Hey Samrat"

Samrat-"kya padh rahi ho?"

Gunjan hides the book with her dupatta "kuch nahin"

Samrat looks at gunjan "kuch to hai"

He takes the dupatta off the book n snatches it before gunjan could hide it away

Samrat-"New Moon by Stephanie Meyer? yeh to fiction book hai na?"

"hann" gunjan replies looking away embaressed

"Tumhe fiction bhi pasand hai mujhe pata nahin tha" Samrat says

"Nahin woh actually hamare portion main woh Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte book hai na, woh maine padi thi aur is wali story ke main leads ko woh book bohut pasand thi, so i thought of giving it a try, aur waise" Gunjan takes the book back from samrat "yeh fiction to hai par isme jo main characters ke emotions, problems aur feelings hain woh kafi real hain"

"Hmm kya iski feelings hamari feelings se milti hain?"samrat asks

"Nahin, aur kabhi honi bhi nahin chahiye" Gunjan says seriously.

Samrat- matlab?

"Matlab kuch nahin ab main poori book ke baare main to nahin bata sakti na?"

Samrat- hmmm

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Nupur comes n sits next to them flaming in anger

Gunjan- Di kya hua?

Nupur- Woh Mayank! main usse aaj ke baad kabhi baat nahin karoogey!

Samrat smiles "Is baar pakka?"

Nupur narrows her eyes on samrat "pakka" she looks away when her eyes sting.

Samrat with a hint of humour, to make nupur laugh points his finger at no one in particular and says "mere bhai ki yeh himmat ki usne meri behen ko....ah ek minute gadbad hai ...haan mere bhai ki yeh himmat ki usne meri dost se ladai ki...phir se!"

He turns to nupur to find her wiping her tears.

"Hey tum ro rahi ho is it something serious?"

Nupur-"main kyun roongey? roengey mere dushman!"

Gunjan- Di mujhey batao, kya hua?

Nupur- woh main mayank ke saath project kar rahi thi library main. Mujhe samajh nahin aa raha tha to mujhpe gussa karne laga aur kaha ki mere bachche jaise dimaag ko yeh 'intellectual' baatein kabhi nahin samajh aaengey"

Gunjan- Di aap to jaanti ho mayank gusse main kuch bhi keh deta hai

Nupur- hann lekin yeh pehley baar nahin hua hai. Kitni baar gussa kar chuka hai bas har baar sorry keh deta hai,lekin is baar nahin! main usse koi baat nahin karna chahti!"

with tht she leaves

Samrat-kya karen?

Gunjan-CJ n Uday bhaiya!!

Samrat- yup thts right, lets go!

They tell CJ n Uday abt wat happened

Cj- Sachchi bolo to hum is group ke matchmaker hain

Uday- hann par dekho na main apne aur tumhare dil ke wires fix nahin kar pata aisa kyun?

CJ- kyunki tumhare dimaag ki wiring main defect hai!

Samrat- Guys yeh serious problem hai pls concentrate!

CJ- dont worry i hv a plan! tum donon canteen main wait karo ok!

Samrat- ok

Gunjan n Samrat leave

CJ- Uday tum mayank ko canteen lekar aao aur usse kehna..... she whispers the rest in his ears

Uday- kya? ohh achha tum nups se bhi yahi kahogey ryt? plan no.6!!

CJ- yup hamare plans bohut kaam aate hain!

Uday leaves,CJ approaches nupur

In the classroom

CJ-Nupur chalo

Nupur-kahan

CJ-class bunk karni padegey

Nupur- kya par kyun?

CJ-Mayank ne canteen main bulaya hai

Nupur- main kyun jao? us sadoo ki shakal bhi nahin dekhni mujhey!

CJ- dont worry nahin dikhegey

Nupur looks at CJ curiously

"Kyun?"

CJ- Woh usne kaha ki..

N- ki?

CJ- tht he's gonna break up with u

Nupur looks at CJ with hurt eyes

N- kya?

CJ- ya

N-CJ tum mazak to nahin kar rahi na?

CJ- nahin bilkul nahin par shayad mayank

N- hann woh sorry bolne ke bahane bula raha hoga

CJ- pata nahi bohut gusse main tha, achha jaldi chalo

Nupur n CJ enter the canteen to find Uday n mayank seated together

Maynk had worry etched on his face

N- mayank cant b serious! i love him woh aisa nahin kar sakta!

CJ- achha abhi to tum keh rahi thi ki uski shakal bhi nahin dekhna chahti?

N- woh to..

CJ- i know go tell him u love her

Nupur nods "ok"

Uday leaves when he finds nupur approaching them

Uday n CJ join Gunjan n Samrat who were seated 2 benches away from mayank n nupur. All of them strained their ears to listen to their conversation.

"Nupur" mayank attempts in a firm voice

N- I cant let this happen "Mayank jo library main hua uske baad"

Mayank interrupts "woh koi chhoti si baat nahin thi"

Nupur- lekin mayank

Mayank- nupur let me complete

Nupur- mayu pls let me first

Mayank- nahin

Nupur- mayank!

Mayank- fine!

Nupur- dekho mana ki woh chhoti si baat nahin thi isliye maine...

mayank completes it for her and gets up in anger "chhod dene ka faisla kar liya hai!"

Nupur- mayu please

Mayank- nupur itni chhoti si baat ki wajah se

Nupur- haan yahi to main keh rahi hoon

"Kya?" Nupur stood up too confused

They both say together suddenly

M- UDAY!

N-CJ!

& then laugh

CJ, Samrat, Uday n Gunjan join them too

Gunjan- thnk god

Samrat- haan

CJ& Uday to their special handshake "Mission Accomplished!"

Mayank smiles n says sorry to nupur

Nupur- its ok par ek pal ke liye to meri jaan hi nikal gaye by god!

Mayank then realises with a sudden shock.

"Meri class!?"

Nupur gets shocked too"late ho gaye!!"

They both hold hands n head to their classrooms

tum log jao!! m bunking!!CJ shouts

Nupur turns"theek hai!!n thanks"

They both leave leaving Uday,CJ, Gunjan & Samrat rolling in laughter

FLASHBACK ENDS

Mayank hung his head low n sat down shutting his eyes

CJ- Hey mayank calm down

Mayank groans "Kaise CJ! I was gonna propose to her 2day n look how it ended up,now shes angry!"

Uday-chill humne tumhari problem ka solution nikal liya

Mayank- itni jaldi?

Uday grins

Mayank- wats the plan?

Uday- CJ plan no.9?

CJ- Yes Uday the 10 golden plans! tumhe yaad hain?

Uday- ofcoz humne hi to banaye the

CJ smiles

"Mayank chill & go to ur room"

Mayank sighs "tum donon ka plan hai to sure work karega but i better check on samrat

Benji- yeah i'll c u guys 2mrw m gonna sleep!

Uday- its better if i stay here then

CJ- why?

Uday- ohh actually sam n i share one room

CJ- ohh ok tum yahan wait karo i'll b bck then

Uday- ok

Benji bids goodbye to evry1 & heads upstairs to his room.

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