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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
hmm...Mayank's prob 1-that he hasnt shared the gunjan-sam break thingy wid nupz...n mayb he's fearing her reaction...teeeheeehee...😛

prob 2-He's upset that such a big thing happen in his saali's life n he couldn't do anything to save the relation btwn his best frnd n his saali..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
Great Update
SaJan were cute
n no i dont hate Samrat how could i hate him?? lol
i wonder wat the problem is wit Mayank???
Plzz continue soon
THANKS!!!! for the PM!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
@gunur_sayank- Thnx a ton!:D glad u liked it:D

@afshanafreen- ohh dont worry!! u will b glad to knw the reason:D

@sweetgal- ermm ..Nope 😳 Its not serious..its very cute!!! ☺️

@MoNaya Rox- phew, i didnt want anyone to u knw hate sam or nythin...will justify his actions soon:)
will post the next now:D
have fun:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Author's note:- I dont own the songs:P and yeah! read the lyrics....dont skip them!!:D

Chapter 5
Ready Set! Lets GO!
Afternoon 3:00 pm
Nupur's pov

Nupur enters the room to find Gunjan sitting in her bed with eyes closed.
N- "Gunjan tu aaj kya pehnegey?"
Gunjan opens her eyes "ek churidar suit hai rakha wahi pehen loongey" she replied with no inerest
G-"aur aap?
N-"I got a magneta dress stitched for myself..wanna see?" I asked
G-"haan sure"
I held out the dress to gunjan from my suitcase.
"Kaisa hai?" i enquired
"Bohut achha hai di aur yeh colour aap ko bohut suit bhi karega" she replied.
hmm theres something wrong mujhe hi uska mood theek karna padega..
"Achha gunjan apna dress dikhana"
G- "di! jab pehnongey tab dekh lena"
N-"Arrey itni laziness bhi achhi nahin"
Someone knocks on the door
N-"kaun?"
It was sheena "I hope m not disturbing u guys"
N- "arrey nahin bilkul nahin andar aao na"
sheena enters with a shopping bag
"Actually main apna dress decide nahin kar pa rahi batao na in donon main se kaunsa achha hai?"
she pulls out 2 dresses from her shopping bag.
One dress was a combination of blue n black with spaghetti straps, at the front it showed the collarbone, the neck was V-shaped.
The other dress was strapless n black in color it had square shaped defined patterns all over which were glittering silver in the light. It ended a few inches above the knee.
"so?" sheena asked.
"I guess this black shiny one! its stylish n trendy just like u n it will suit u too as u hv a perfect figure"
"thanks nupur" sheena replied with a smile "Gunjan tumhe kya lagta hai?"
"Tumpe donon hi achhe lagengey" she replied with a smile.
"hmm achha tum donon kya pehnogey?"
"main to yeh waala dress pehnoongey" I passed my dress to her
"wow its so pretty!i like the design in it" sheena gushed as she run her hand over the design.
"thnx" I replied.
Sh- "Aur gunjan tum?"
N-"wahi to main poch rahi thi par yeh keh rahi hai ki jab pehnoongey tab dekh lena"
Sh- Hey gunjan thts not done, chalo jaldi se tayyar ho jaate hain
G- "abhi?"
Sh- "haan kyun?"
G-"abhi to sirf 3 baj rahe hain"
"Gunjan tu bhi na time nahin lagega tayyar hone main?" I said
Sh- "Right! par time hume lagega gunjan to aise hi itni pyaari hai ki ise apne aap ko sawaarne ki zaroorat hi nahin padti"
"hann yeh baat to sahi hai meri gunjan hai hi itni pyaari par aaj tumhe bachne nahin doongey chalo jaldi utho!" I said with full authority.
All three of us headed to the washrooms to change.
In The meanwhile
All the guys were chatting and having fun in the living room.
Samrat- yaar yeh sheena nupur aur gunjan kahan hai?
B- arrey woh sab to tayyar ho rahi hain
U- abhi se? abhi to sirf 3 baj rahe hain
Samrat turns to mayank to talk abt gunjan but instead finds him lost in his own world.
"Mayank" no reply
Samrat waves his hand infront of mayank n says louder "Earth to Mayank!"
M- huh!?
Everyone starts laughing
S-"kiske khayalon main khoye hue the?"
U-"obviously nupur ke"
they slap hands together
M- "nahin aisi baat nahin hai"
S-"chhupa kyun raha hai dude hum sab jaante hain tu use bohut chahta hai"
Mayank smiles but slowly it fades away
S-"kya hua dude any problem?"
M-"yaar kuch samajh nahin aa raha!"
Benji "Problem bata mai hoon.." he looks at others "hum hain na!"
M-"woh main..main "
U-"yeh bakri ke tarah main main band kar aur aagey bhi bol!"
M-"maine nupur ke liye ek surprise plan kiya hai"
S- "nice! kya karne wala hai?"
Mayank blurted" propose"
Benji & Uday- "kYA!?
M- "umm hann, abhi nahin karna chahiye kya?"
B- "nahin hamara matlab th ki abhi tak propose nahin kiya?"
M- "nahin ..maine socha ki isse achha time aur koi ho hi nahin sakta, sab doston ke beech, theek usi jagah jahan se hamari zindagi ki asal shuruaat hui thi"
U-"nice idea dude i say go for it!"
M- "thnx uday i just hope evrything works out as planned!"
S-"chill mayank hum sab hain na tumhari help ke liye, waise plan kya hai?"
M-"bohut hi simple hai"
Mayank tells about his plans to uday, benji n samrat.
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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In Nupur n Gunjan's room
Sheena stood infront of the mirror examining herself.
She pouted "Nupur!"
N-"hann?"
Sh- "is dress ke saath kaunsi sandals achhi lag rahi hain?"
Nupur laughs
"Hey why are you laughing?"sheena asks innocently.
N-"mujhe believe nahin ho raha by god! main tumhe advice de rai hoon the famous star of today sheena ko"
Sheena turns to look at nupur n pouts even more
"Mujhe laga ki main tumhare liye famous actress sheena nahin balki best friend sheena hoon!"
N-"arrey main to aise hi keh rahi thi tum bhi na!"
Sh- "achha ab jaldi se batao kaunsi achhi lagegey?"
N- "hmm the high-heeled black ones, they look classy with the round metal in the middle, just gives the touch of excellence to ur wardrobe " sheena puts them on n looks at the mirror
Sh- "ya these look gud thnx nupur!"
N- "mention not"
Sh- "nupur why don't u try.." sheena bents down and picks her shopping bag, she shuffles through and takes out golden high heels."these on?" sheena asked.
N- "high heels?" nupur said meekly
Sh- "aww cmon! You aways wear flats!!"
N- "oke let me try them on"
Nupur stood in front of the mirror "I look.." nupur searched for words.
"tall!!" sheena said grinning ear to ear standing behind nupur and staring at her in the mirror."and Beauutifull!!" she ended smugly.
"thanks sheena, you too look great"
Sh- "thnx .. actually main to tumhare kuch dress borrow karne ka soch rahi hoon"
Nupur smiles "sure nytime"
In the reflection of the mirror Sheena sees gunjan sitting at her bedside with her eyes closed n earplugs on
Sh- "aur gunjan ko dekho tayyar hi nahin ho rahi"
N-"ek minute"
Nupur approaches gunjan n pulls her earplugs. Gunjan opens her eyes "Di!?"
N- "nahin main kuch nahin sunoongey jaldi tayyar ho jao!"
G- "par di main tayyar hoon"
Sheena looks at gunjan, she was looking really sweet plain n simple, beauty was in her simplicity!
How sad Samrat and Gunjan are not together anymore. Hey i have got an idea!
"yeh!" nupur asks surprised "itna plaine dress pehnogey?"
G- "haan achha nahin lag raha kya?"
N- "achha hai par bohut simple aur plain hai"
Sh- "exactly Gunjan if u dont mind kya main tumhare liye dress select kar sakti hoon?"
Nupur answers instead "yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai sheena"
Nupur opens Gunjan's wardrobe as expected it was arranged in a very organized manner.
"see it urself"
G-"par di!, sheena!"
Sh- "Gunajn please!"
G- "ok"
Gunajn sits n puts on her earplugs again.The song had ended and the next one came on, this time it was "Break My Heart" by Hilary Duff.

Someone always gets their hearts stomped to the ground
This is what I see every time I look around
I never thought that this would happen to me
I never thought I'd end up this way

And now that you're through with me
Don't know what to do with me
I guess I'm my own again
Like I'm some kind of enemy
Never a friend to me
Remember when you used to say
Things will always be this way

[Chorus
Why don't you, break my heart
Watch me fall apart you see
I'm falling apart, look what you're doing to me

Now I'm trying to get my heart up off the ground
My confidence is gone
Happiness can not be found
So look what you did to me
You got the best of me
And now I'm stuck with all the rest
It will never be the same

Why don't you, break my heart
Watch me fall apart you see
I'm falling apart, look what you're doing to me

Break my heart
Watch me fall apart you see
I'm falling apart, look what you're doing to me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
All I ever wanted
Has left me standing here alone
It started with you and ended with me
.......
I fast forwarded the song it brought the old memories back n it still hurt
I felt unwanted tears spring to my eyes, as I remembered those days and I fought them back before nupur or sheena could see. "Still Under The Weather" by Shania Twain filled my ears and I closed my eyes n listened to the drums n beats of the song trying to calm myself.

My first lesson losing a love was you
Learning to live with your memory was lesson number two
And I can't lie, baby
I still cry sometimes
But I've come a long way
Towards gettin' you out of my mind
I'm still under the weather
But I'm over the storm
I still miss the shelter
Of your loving arms
But what I thought would kill me
Has just made me strong
I'm still under the weather
But I'm over the storm

Sometimes your memory still gets the best of me
But that lonely ache in my heart
Ain't as bad as it used to be
And sometimes the way that I'm feelin'
Inside doesn't show
But I know
I'll get over you, I've just got a long way to go

I'm still under the weather
But I'm over the storm
I still miss the shelter
Of your loving arms
But what I thought would kill me
Has just made me strong
I'm still under the weather
But I'm over the storm

I'm still under the weather
But I'm over the storm
Sh- "how abt this blue one?"
N- "nah it should be sumthing special"
Sh- "this purple one is gud n it has a beautiful neckline too"
N- "ya but i dont think the color will suit her its too dark!"
Sheena shuffles thru other dresses n finally sees the one in which gunjan would look the best.
"& this one?" she holds it out
N- "wow! this one is just perfect!"
She turns to gunjan & finds her yet again listening to music with eyes closed
"By God music sunne ka itna shok kabse ho gaya ise?"nupur wonders.
Sheena takes one of the earplugs n bents to listen to the song
...
Of your loving arms
But what I thought would kill me
Has just made me strong
I'm still under the weather
But I'm over the storm....

Sheena smiled sadly at gunjan "thts my fav too"
N- "lo tum bhi hi suru hogayi..sheena gunjan ko tayyar karna hai!"
Sh- "oops sorry nupur, chalo gunjan yeh dress pehen ke aao"
Gunjan leaves to change.

In the living room
B- Hey guys 6 baj gaye chalo tayyar ho jaate hain
S- hann chal
they all leave towards their own rooms
After a while
Sheena and nupur were waiting for gunjan
Gunjan enters
N- "haye kitni pyari lag rahi ho"
Sh- "wow gunjan this dress looks perfect on u"
G- thnks
Sheena pulls a bag "ok gunjan now get ready!"
G- "hey i am ready"
sh- abhi kahan makeup karna baki hai accessories aur sandals select karna baki hai
G- no no its fine really
N- No u r gonna do as we say
G- par di
After a lot of no's from gunjan and yes's from sheena n nupur, gunjan finally gives in.
Chapter 5 ends
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
thts all!! so review and review!!:D:D
and trust u all will love mayu by god! 😉 i knw some of u luv him loads already..ryt nikki n afshaafreen ?:D
Precap- SAJAN N JIA MOMENT
Benji, Samrat n Uday tried to avert their eyes from the lovely couple,not to appear to be eavesdropping which they were in there special moment.
Gunjan n sheena came downstairs together.
Samrat looked at gunjan
"she looks beautiful"
B-"I know"
MAYUR
Samrat-"Nupur & guess wats the question"
U- "wat?
"her first kiss" Samrat grins
Uday grins too"who asked the question?"
Samrat -"Sheena"
Uday turns to sheena "thnx"
Sh- "so nupur answer."
Nupur turned scarlet "woh" she gulps.

Its 12:30 and m too sleepy to pm all of u 😛
Actually guys can u all put 'the pact' as watch topics?
ya ya m very lazy!!wat to do 😛
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Heyy!!
what a partt!!!
actually 2 parts =P
both of them were amzing!
but the best was when benji said he'll always be there for sheena..
really cutee 😳
nd i love how sheena is a character with depth.. =P
im starting to love her 😆
anyways..
i was wondering wat mayank's prob is.. but now i guess its not a prob..
lol..
he's too cute =P
cant wait to read the nxt part
thx a ton for the pm
cant wait to read more =D
<3
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee dear, i read it before u pmed me, lol😆
but i was waiting 4 ur pm
anways mindblowinggggggg ud
cont soooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm
love
sonal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: basket_101

Heyy!!
what a partt!!!
actually 2 parts =P
both of them were amzing!
but the best was when benji said he'll always be there for sheena..
really cutee 😳
nd i love how sheena is a character with depth.. =P
im starting to love her 😆
anyways..
i was wondering wat mayank's prob is.. but now i guess its not a prob..
lol..
he's too cute =P
cant wait to read the nxt part
thx a ton for the pm
cant wait to read more =D
<3
HiNaL



Thanx a ton!! 🤗
Yes i love writing Jia scenes!!:D
Yes one thing i made sure was to portray each character in depth and get out their feelings...even uday!:D
yup i didnt spare any of them....but most lovely and touching will be SAJAN!(i maybe biased😛 i guess coz i simply luuuv sajan:D lolzz
U guys will be the best ones to tell me that actually
i will update wen others are able to catch up..maybe tomorrow evening:D
Toodles Sweet Dreams!:)

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