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Posted: 15 years ago
@mehek- thnx jaana:d m glad u liked it🤗

@sonal- yup! m glad u all liked the char CJ here:D

@vital- yup:D:D will post the next chap now😉

@saduf- erm sorry, didnt get u....?

@MoNayaRox-thnx n Chillax, i knw skool is a headache, glad m free now!!!:D:D
As for the story...well dont worry much, its just lil bit of pain...thts all😕 but u guys trust me..theres lots of fun ahead...:D

@HinaL-thnx!! && Bang on ryt! Thats wat i have ben trying, to show Uday more mature ...i agree in the show his char is very silly...but i luv him tht way! he is cute:D (not more than sammy:P)
One thing i forgot to mention Consider the entire gang of the same age😊
& again u r ryt..CJ has got that thing in her, and this very thing is gonna make wonders happen:D:D
ryt on..posting it now:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Read the lyrics of the song, dont skip them:D
Chapter 7
Sleepless Night

Samrat couldnt sleep that night he kept on turning from one side to another trying to sleep, he checked the time it was 4:00 he puts on his ipod & listens to the music, the song starts
It's 3 AM and I finally say
I'm sorry for acting that way
I didn't really mean to make you cry
Oh baby, sometimes I wonder why
Does it always have to come down to you leaving.
Before I'll say, "I love you."
And why do I always use the words that cut the deepest,
when I know how much it hurts you.
Oh baby why do I do that to you?
I know I'd never let you walk away
So why do I push you 'til you break?
Why are you always on the verge of goodbye.
Before I'll show you how I really feel tonight

He gets aggravated n turns it off
"Great now my ipod also knows my heart!"
He finally gives up his attempts and heads downstairs to get a glass of water.
It was still dark outside.He felt the smell of coffee in the air, he entered the kitchen and poured himself a glass of water, He entered the dining area to find gunjan facing the sea sipping a cup of coffee
She had not noticed him yet he pulled a chair n got seated. On hearing the noise gunjan turned.
They both stared at each other neither sure as wat to say. Gunjan finally decides to break the silence."Itni raat ko yahaan?"
Samrat- "neend nahin aa rahi tum?"
Gunjan ignores the question
Gunjan- we need to talk abt wat happened yesterday
Samrat- yes we do
Gunjan sits opposite to samrat facing him, she notices the band-aid in his hand
Samrat- gunjan m sor..
Gunjan interrupts "I have a suggestion"
Samrat sighs"wat is it?"
Gunjan- lets just ignore wat happened in the past yrs n spent this month as" she pauses".. friends"
Samrat smiles "ok"
Gunjan- chot kaise lagey?she asks looking away
"You care?"he asks hopefully
Gunjan gets up n heads to the stairs to leave
Samrat- chashmish" he holds her hand to stop her she doesnt turn though "u hvnt forgiven me yet"
Gunjan- it doesnt matter
Samrat- it matters to me we r frnds from now on
Gunjan- no
Samrat- but u just said tht..? he asks confused
gunjan faces him, samrat leaves her hand
"that we are gonna spent 'this month' as friends"
Samrat- Sirf is mahin kyun phir? just hate me the way u do
Gunjan- "Kyunki main tumhari tarah nahin hoon" Gunjan raises her voice a little"main sirf apne baare main nahin sochti samrat hum sab yahan milkar kuch khushi batne aaye hain aur main nahin chahti ki hamare beech jo hua uski wajah se yeh special mahina kharab ho!"
Samrat sighs
"Chashmish itni nafrat?"
Gunjan-"u deserve it"
Samrat- "Gunjan sorry i.."
Gunjan- save it
Samrat- but u cant do this
Gunjan- and wat u did was right?
Samrat- u never gave me a chance to explain!
Gunjan- coz i dont need an explanation
Samrat pulls gunjan closer
"u will hv to listen"
Gunjan- thts ur nature
Samrat looked at her confused
Gunjan- Tumhe chahiye, tum sorry feel kar rahe ho, tumhe moka nahin diya Samrat! the world doesnt revolve around u! and it is not necessary u get everything u want!"
Samrat looks at gunjan with hurt eyes.
Samrat- "you think i care only about myself? that it has always been about me?" he asks her grievously n steps back.
Gunjan didnt know wat to say she hadnt meant a word! It just spilled out in her anger. Sure samrat was like that before but then he had changed…changed for her & now he was hurt.
Samrat turns to the window he could see the sun rising.
G- "Samrat I.."
S-"Its ok, i guess u r ryt"
with that samrat turns towards the main door
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Posted: 15 years ago
song continues in the background
Does it always have to come down
To you leaving
Before i'll say 'i love you'
Why do i always use the words
That cut the deepest
When i know how much it hurts you
Oh baby why, do i do that to you


G-"Samrat"
Samrat stops & looks at her with the same hurt in his eyes
Samrat-& dont worry we wil b friends …for this month"
Samrat leaves
Gunjan stood there looking at the door from which samrat had just gone
"what did i do?"Gunjan said softly in agony as Silent tears flowed freely from her eyes.

Why do i always use the words that cut the deepest
When i know how much it hurts you.
Oh baby why do I do that to you?
I know I'd never let you walk away
So why do I push you 'til you break?
Why are you always on the verge of goodbye.
Before I'll show you how I really feel tonight


Samrat's pov

I was not sure where i was heading to, i just ran as far away i could get, away from all this, my heart felt like a hollow place, it hurt! i could hear every word she had said!
Tumhe chahiye, tum sorry feel kar rahe ho, tumhe moka nahin diya Samrat! the world doesnt revolve around u!
her pained face 2 1/2 yrs back at the Basket ball court crossed my mind! I started running now i had to get away, atleast for some time.
In no time i realised i had reached the beach, Everything was still n the sun was rising above, Gunjan's voice returned with tht the same hollow pain.
DONT U DARE EVEN TOUCH ME!!!
I DONT CARE!...
...we end it right here
Do u really mean it. u want to end this all?
..yes i really mean it

I groaned n shut my eyes, i fell on my knees.
why did this all had to be so difficult, why did i hv to b so stupid! fool enough to lose someone so special
unlucky enough to b hated by the one whom i loved! and then yes I Samrat cried, i cried my heart out, my grief.
I had been misunderstood by the one i love, surely the most unluckiest man in the world.
Pov ENDS

CHAPTER ENDS!!!
Pls REVIEW!!!:D
how was it..? reached upto ur expectations??
I dont mind criticisms, only they should be meant in a positive way:)
Precap- was thinking i wont give one but for u guys here it is

CJ- ok aur tu bata nupur ko ab next kab propose karega?
M- pata nahin, not in the next few days
CJ- kyun?
M- sab kuch normal hona chahiye pehley.
CJ- but evrythin is normal
Mayank raises his eyebrows at her
CJ- hmm ok

Also guys theres one MAJOR point i wanted to highlight though i dont think any of my readers are with tht type of thinking, but Running away and trying to close evrything doesnt mean that the person is a Coward m hell bent against it.
And it simply gets me angry, In this chap sam is not a coward, he just feels suffocated and weak which is why he's running and trying to work out the tension.
He is so not Gonna be called a Coward for that.
reminds me of sumthing..😆😆😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwww loved it . sorry for the late reply was tied up with some work
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeee..superbb..fab.
loved it to the core..<3
mindblastinggggg upd.
do upd.soon
n thnx for the pm.!
-Mehek-
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeee updt...
mindblowingggg...
luved it to d core..
ws a really sad one... 😭
pllzzzzzzzz do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry 4 d late reply...but as i said skool has strtd...so das y couldnt read..now av read it....hmm....i loooooved it
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Posted: 15 years ago

AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEE

MINDBLOWINGGGGGGGGGG
SUPERBBBBBBBBBBB
FANTASTICCCCCCCCCC
AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG UD
JUST LOVED IT TO THE CORE
I REALLY LOVE SAJAN
TOTALLY COOL
PLEASE CONT SOOOOOOOOOOOOON
N THNX 4 THE PM
LOVE U 4 THIS UD
MUAHHHHHHHHHH
SONAL
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ght_sajan- thnx dear..not a prob at all dear:) take your time..:)

@mehek- thnx dear:D m glad u liked it soo much!will update tomorrow morning for sure:D

@jyotika- yeah sad...but then i thought its important to get an in-depth view, a peep into their hearts...:) thnx a ton dear:)

@sweetgal- hey jaana! no probs chill....skool started there as well?:D i had this feeling today...it was like 'skool has started but am not there'..gawd i miss ma skoool!!! thnx jaana!!

@Lovebarbie- thnx dear:D

@sonal- u r really very sweet:D this chap is my personal fav...m glad u liked it soo much:D thnx a ton dear!

guys m overwhelmed by the response my story is getting
luv u all!!!
lots n lots of luv
ZeeJay!
Keep Rockinggg!!!:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
ur chapter no where depicts dat Samrat's a coward.

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