Heartless |Mayur| Ch 1, Pg 1 - Page 2

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey shifali!!!!!!!!

col concept yaar

loved the 1st chap

it was toooooooooo good

loved it very muchhhhh'

u have to add me in your pm list

love pebbzzii

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Bhavana Bhaskar

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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome start Shifali! the CS's gr8 too! so Nupur the aspiring singer will slowly come 2 know abt the quite harsher realities of Mumbai.....but this Shubhankar Mehra will abuse her?😲
very strong concept....eagerly waiting 4 the next update....do add me 2 ur PM list....

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naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!!

nice start...add me in..looking forward to it :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Great start dear ....nice concept

Plz add me to ur PM list

Luv
Nidzy~

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Mariyam Ghaffar

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Posted: 15 years ago

superb start...plz add me to ur pm list...😊

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Natasha

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey nice ff !!!
Loving the story !!!!
Freshness in the story is attracting me !!
Do add me on ur pm list !

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

Nice strt

Liked Ben n Nups relation

Ben is Dodo here

Will be fun

Devika is actually after evryone to get married😆😆

Im in ur pm list

Update soon😉

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Supriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

gr8 start.. shifali...👏...
wonderful concept....
count me in ur pm list...
luvd d convos betwn Benji & Nupur....
pls update soon🤗..
-supriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey shefali

niceeeee concept

add in the pm list plzz

love part one very nice

cn't coon

-sanam-

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

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Posted: 15 years ago

great start!!
waiting to read more
continue soon

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