Heartless |Mayur| Ch 1, Pg 1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Hey Shifali

I am absolute stunned hun!

Thank you so much for the dedication 🤗

I am really touched by this!

Thanks a ton for writing this FF on MN!

The start is just amazing and so are characters!

I love your writing style, very different

Looking forward to read this FF!

Continue soon and of course add me to PM list!

Thanks a once again 🤗🤗

Love loads

x x

Hey Zoah *hug*

No worries yaar. I love you for everything you have done for helping me gain some readers, and this was nothing compared to you and your comments on my MJHT fan-fics till date!😳

Love you,
Shifu

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

hey shifali!!!!!!!!

col concept yaar

loved the 1st chap

it was toooooooooo good

loved it very muchhhhh'

u have to add me in your pm list

love pebbzzii

Hey Pebzi!

Thanks yaar for complimenting the concept and sure! I have added you to the PM list😳

Originally posted by: bhavana92

awesome start Shifali! the CS's gr8 too! so Nupur the aspiring singer will slowly come 2 know abt the quite harsher realities of Mumbai.....but this Shubhankar Mehra will abuse her?😲
very strong concept....eagerly waiting 4 the next update....do add me 2 ur PM list....

Hey Bhavana!

Yeah, Shubhankar is Nupur's fiance, chosen by her Aunt, and so, when she wishes to become a singer, he would want something in return from her...and sure! I will surely add you to my PM list.😳

Love,
Shifu

Originally posted by: naina0123

hey!!

nice start...add me in..looking forward to it :)

Hey Naina!

Thanks for the compliment and sure! I will add you to the Pm list.

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Great start dear ....nice concept

Plz add me to ur PM list

Luv
Nidzy~

Hey Nidzy!

I will surely add you to the PM list.😳

Originally posted by: maria88

superb start...plz add me to ur pm list...😊

Hey Mariaa!

I will surely add you to the PM list and thanks for commenting!😳

Originally posted by: meepha

add me 2 ur list=)

Hey I will surely add you to the PM list.😳

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty

hey nice ff !!!
Loving the story !!!!
Freshness in the story is attracting me !!
Do add me on ur pm list !

Hey yaar!

Thanks for commenting and I will surely add you to the Pm list...and aww, I am glad I could present you with something new.😳

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice strt

Liked Ben n Nups relation

Ben is Dodo here

Will be fun

Devika is actually after evryone to get married😆😆

Im in ur pm list

Update soon😉

Yah, Benji is Dodo here...lol and yah, Devika wants Nupur to get married along with Benji...😆 Looks like someone wants to see grandkids soon and sure, have added you to the PM list.

gr8 plz cont soon i can not wait to read next part plz add me in ur pm list:)