~ff-when the dorks met morons(part17,pg95)du c:-)~ - Page 56

awesoomme updatttee!

sooo nice dear
n thnkx for the pm

Sad but n amazing update !!

update it quickly Dolly, i'm waiting.

doll..
lovely update dear..
loved the whole part..
plz plz cont soon i can't wait anymore for the next update..plz..

luv
~devyani~

Awesome part loved it completely do continue soon

hey dolly

long time yaar

loved it

awesome job

fantastic work



loved it like anything

the past was so touching

sam and chashmish..... awwww

hope to see mayur soon

luv

mahima

update this one too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

Part13>>

N= okay mayank stop , sam will wake up..

M=(hitting nupur across her face softly with the pillow again)he wont he sleeps like a baby..

N= okay he does , now stop it n u atleast behave as a grown up'

Mayank stopped 'and made a baby face and started looking at other side.

N= mayank..(tapping him on his shoulder)

Mayank shrugged his shoulders and didn't look back at nupur..

N(tapping his shoulder again this time more slowly)=ma'ya'nk'mayuu

M= hey listen don't call me mayu k??

N= aagaya uth line pe!!

M= what??

N= vo aisi hi uth vali koi kahawat thin a I don't remember..

M(sighing)= ab aaya uth pahad k neeche..

N= haan vahi vahi .. mayank shabdon pe mat jao bhavnao ko samjho..

N then they bth laughed' strange as it was .. but their laughter sounded care free''.. for a moment it looked as if all the worries in the world were forgotton.. it was just him and her and no one else'..

Both of them didn't notice it, but their laughter was making sumone else smile too..

He was samrat.. who had a big smile on his face listening to their laughter ' as he finally drifted to a restful sleep

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Scene 2>>

{hospital},{flashback,morning around seven}

Gunjan= but I want to go home..

Rv= u cant!!

Gunji= but I '

Rv= u cant , u r not moving from that bed for next few hours.. or else I will tie u up on it .. u get that??

Gunji= but that's unfair 'today is my birthday and practically u should do what I want ya to do n u r soo soo soo bad'

Rv= listen who is talking'

Gunjan= what??? I am not bad its u ,today is my birthday n u r not letting me go out n I am stuck up in this smelly place which people cal hospital!!! .. I reapeat u r soo soo unfair..

Rv{finally loosing his cool)== SHUTUP gunji.. I'll tell u what is unfair' getting ur self hurt that way over a stupid git and not telling me anything about it is unfair' talking to sumone on that phone like u haven't had a breadth from ages and finally got some air to breathe with that phone call and still not telling me anything is unfair'. Crying on my shoulder whole night and then smiling like insane when u finally drift to sleep and make me wonder if it is me who has lost his sanity is unfair' as a matter of fact there is soo much of unfair that I cant even spell it out for u completely.. so u better not test my patience any more and stay in that bed unless u get a clean chit from the damm doctors here' or I'll end up killing myself with frustration u get that??

****silence****

Ranvijay looked totally shaken, shuddering slightly he collapsed on the nearest sofa.. he knew his sudden out burst had hurt gunjan but he couldn't help it.. all this seemed way out of his control.. he hadn't asked for anything but he was suffering so much.. he had problems with his dad who was threatening to throw him out of his family.. he had a fake engagement to pretend.. his best friend was suffering from so many injuries' to top it all she loved sumone madly and was clearly in pain' and she wont tell him anything' last but certainly not the least on the list was his sucky job and tormentor boss..

He had too much bottled up inside.. add to that a whole sleepless night n u will be in his position..

G= I 'I ' am sorry..

Rv= it doesn't matter does it.. rest gunji sorry for all that'.i am just tensed over some business related issue..

G= u should go home and take some rest..

Rv= how abt u finally shutting up??

G= sorry

Rv=*sighs*

He got up and moved towards her, gunji was not particularly looking up, he knew he had seriously hurt her' but he couldn't help it.. she had it cuming.. sighing again n trying again to calm himself down he sat at the edge of gunji's bed'

Then he placed one of his hands on hers and said nothing' none of them said anything for a long time'

And then finally gunji broke the silence

G= u want to know abt the phone call last night??

Rv(finally smiling)= u finally did get the clue didn't u my slow birdie??

G(smiling a lil bit herself)= I guess I finally did..

Rv= so who's he???

G= how do u know he's a he??

Rv= u were not saying I love u samrat to a girl 'last night were u??i thought u were straight!!n what kind of girl has samrat for a name??

Gunjan laughed ,, she loved rv for this' he had always been way to close to her.. he was like family..

G= okay his name is samrat.. and u know him!

Rv=(looking stunned)=do I ??

G= u do he is your rockstar friend 'the samrat shergill'

RV=WHATTTTTT??

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Scene 3>

(shergill mansion)>

Nupur moved out of the room, bth the boys were finally asleep'mayank had fallen asleep just few minutes ago.. nupur finally got some time to herself'she needed to get her thoughts straight as they were pretty jumbled up..

Gunjan loved samrat.. samrat who was mayank's brother.. samrat loved gunjan who was her sister.

They bth had an accident yesterday.. samrat was pretty badly hurt n so was gunji.. all she knew was that gunji was fine now n out of danger' and where she was she had no idea' she had a fake engagement she no longer wanted as punishing rv's father no longer seemed an attraction'she may just may have started falling in lov with mayank who thought she was already committed.. none of her friends seem to take her cal' benji..dia and uday were totally useless as none of them were picking up their phone' she had to make sure that gunji sam r alright ' she had to make sure that samrat n mayank came to tonight's birthday party'.surprise birthday party of gunji'. She still had too make arrangements for that damm birthday party'..

God she needed a Tylenol'.

May be she would find sum in kitchen .. to hell with the meds 'a glass of water will give her some energy..that'll be enough' she needed to make a phone call..

This phone call was her last hope to straighten out this mess..

Then she would go and sleep with mayank' well she would lie on the same sofa as mayank'

Whatever she first needed to call RV'.

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Scene 4>

Rv= yes officer??

Inspector= You are??

Rv= I am gunjan bhushan's friend, none of her family lives In Bombay so I came to take care of her..

Inspector= I need to speak to her

Rv= sir she is sleeping she had a disturbed night and is finally getting sume sleep, it'll be better if this could wait..

Inspector= but it can't!!

Now pls get aside(pushing rv aside)thank u..

Rv= what the hell?? I told u she'

but rv was stopped short by his cell ring..nunpur bhushan's name flashed over his cell screen

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hey doll amazing update love u & ur FF love all the scenes were toooooooooooo good well written u jst rock dear