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Oki guys b4 starting with the story I have some important things to say

Firstly

Ahem ahem

Guys 4 the first time in history this story is completely mine'.

N this is dedicated to the three s's of my life

Simi(simar456), sanu(sana_sajan), sush(sushups)..

Well they r the januablest kids I ever got around me nn mm loving them

Thank u guys

N now abt the story..

It's a short story nn is based on mn cum sajan ''

The first update might be confusing but I think it'll get better with the time hee hee hee

N now guys this story is greatly inspired from marked series.. actually nt the story but the writing style'.. hee hee hee

WHEN THE DORKS MET THERE MORONS'''''''..



SCENE 1(PRESENT''.CULLEN APARTMENTS)

(by gunjan)

>>>>>>>>

I always knew that god had some serious issues with me'.n well these issues were comedy ridden n hell like at the same moment'..

Sample this'.. yesterday I met the love of the past 20 years of my life n I have no idea whether to feel happy or crappy''

i met my love my angel... true very true...

But I met him because he banged his car into me n made me experience my first flying lesson ever in the middle of the night''..

Great , marvellous simply mindblowing''..

I winced '.. the injury on my foot was actually killing me'..

Not only the foot I had a bandage over my right tmple n a plaster over my left wrist'..

N again just my luck that my house was on the seventh floor of this building n the lift chose this night to get all messed up n stop working'..

Can life get any better????????

I winced yet again.. there was no way I was going to reach alive to my seventh floor house with this foot'

Oki gunji think positive n stop being a dork''.

See u r on third floor ,,,,, n that means mmm ya just 4 more floors left'..

"WELL CRAP"

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''..

SCENE 2

(YESTERDAY,,, SWAN STREET , MUMBAI)

(by samrat)

The night actually felt too intimidating.. it was as if it was reflecting my sadness n anger outside'

The stars weren't shinning today as they were completely obscured by the big black n ugly clouds''

I severed up my car sharply at the turn'

I was driving a bit rashly'... Actually a tad bit tooo rashly'

N that too for the first time' but hell what other option was available to me?????

This was stupid...trusting humans(esp directors of a music company) was plain stupid'..

As they were selfish n backstabbing'

N I was moronic n stupid'..

I checked my watch yet again..

5 minutes just 5 minutes were left nn I was no where close to the concert hall''

May be this was actually the end of my carreer ,,,

CONGRATUALATIONS DUDE' U ROCK!!!!!!

My cell buzzed then , somewhere in the many pockets of my green cargo'.

I was sure that this was mayank'..

Damm it can this guy giv me a break?????

Well I know the answer to this question atleast.. it was easy peasy nnn it was NO'.

Luckily my headphones were already in place .. so I just switched of the phone n talked to my twin moron'..

"what mayank I am driving?????"

"u said the same thing two minutes ago to twin"

"really??sorry .. may be I 4got to add this little detail that I am driving a car n not an aeroplane"

"this is not the time to be witty"

"thanks twin ...'but do u actually think that I didn't already know that??"

"I guess u do'..whatever,,, hurry up samrat .. these nutheads r really getting to hard to control"

His voice sounded panicked n symphthatic at the same time''

I knew I was soo damm lost'.

"twin r u there??"

"I am"

My voice sounded weak n it made clear that I was totally completely freaked out'

"don't worry dude'. I'll control them heren I won't let these crappy cartoons do anything against u"

"mayank listen to me' go on stage if i'.if 'I ..didn't turn up"

His voice suddenly sounded stern '

"u will n don't even dare to think that I will go there without u"

"twin its not the time 4 being emotional pls just'"

"ya pls just pls u first stop being moronic' and just get the hell outta here so that we can kick these nutheads around"

"gosh twin what happened to ur vocabulary???"

"it's the effect of being ur twin'... now shutup n cum here I really need to kick these cartoons"

"may be we will"

I tried forcing confidence in my voice b4 ending the call'.

I had to reach there at any cost ' if nt for me then for mayank 'he was a total moron n I knew 4 sure that he actually won't go to stage without me''.

The baby girl'... where did she came from???????????

what is she doing in the middle of the road??

"CRAP"

I swered my car on right trying to avoid a nasty collision with the baby..

I thought that my car my vintage VW would safely remove itself from the road to the dusty meadow on right'

Well I was wrong.,

Apparently I was too fastnn my car my vintage bug skidded across the lane at a dangerous speed..

At least the baby girl would be safe'

It will just kill me''

N then hell broke loose..

I saw my run skidding straight towards a girl who was frozen terrified on the side lane'

"damm it I wasn't going to die alone'."

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

SCENE 3

(PRESENT ' room ' 716..cullen apartments)

(by nupur)

"pls just pls can't u guys shut up for just a second????"

"look who is talking ' morena express"

"dia pls tum log kuch der to chup raho plss dekho gunji agar aa gayi to saara plan khrab ho jayega"

"sorry babes u r wrong again '. Aaj ka plan fail ho jaye .. how Is that even possible"

"haan deeds' nupur gunjan k liye humne jo surprise plan kiya hai na tu dekhna'."

"of ho kya khak surprise reh jayega ..agar gunjan ne apartment mein enter karne se pehle humari awazein sunly???"

"I think dia nupur theek keh rahi hai.. we should actually shutup"

"benji stop being a dork too.. nupur is enough"

"u guys actually r freaking me out"

Everyone shut up at that.. as our surprise for gunjan said out aloud that we were freaking him out'.

Hell he actually looked pale.. I can tell that he was going all white..

By god which boy on earth got all pain n freaked out over voices???

"I am sorry guys I was just'. Just ..just"

"its ok sir .. u have done us a great favour by coming here for gunjan"

"benji if u called me sir one mor time I am going to take my sir n jump into ur chimney.."

"oops sorry sir.. I mean samrat"

Samrat slash sir finally smiled'.i was damm sure something was wrong with this boy.. whatever as far as his twin brother was cmg too I had no problem with him being a total weird '.

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
this is it guys n well i have to say sth more to u

I am a big lazybones n yet still there r currentlt 5 stories of me running simultaneously..

Guess its some kind of record..

Well I am stopping the three of them completely 4 the next 3 months till june..

They r sayank drunk

Mission mayor

Samy n mayu the two bros'

I am sorry guys but thses days I am badly into the other three stories

N I promise I am going to update the other 3 including this one very regularly'

well coment on this one n tell wheter to continur or not

index>>>
part2 page10(chractersketch n explanation inclued too)
part 3 (pg17)
part4 (pg21)
part 5 (pg26)
part 6 (page30)
part 7 (page39)
part 8 (page 46)
part 9 (page 50)
new banner and part 10 (page56)
part11, {part a and part b} (page 60)
part12 {page73}
part13 {page77}
part14 {page81}
part15 {page86}
part16 {page90}
part17 {page95}
loads of lov dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy dolly first to comment 🥳😆🤣
*EDITED*
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG dolly meri jaan u dedicated this to me simar and sush how sweet just want to run and want to give u a BIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG tight hug muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 🤗
seriously doly mera ankhain bhar ayi hai starting padh kar u dedicated it to me sana awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww no one did like this for me till now love u so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dolly for this i really want to just knee down in front of u and say i love u and u r my best friend in ever in this whole world 😭😭😭
ok ma bahut emotional moron ho gayi ho ok i want to say one thing i dont know the meaning of MORON sorry but apne aap ko bol rahi hoon 😳🤣
will edit soon about the update thoda nahi nahi bahut emotional ho gayi hoon.😊
*EDITED*about the update
WHEN THE DORKS MET THERE MORONS'''''''
ok title is superb loved it to the core
but as u said the update is really confusing hmm is sayank r twin bros and they r goen perform on a show right on going where sammy is late and the accident took place phew im right nah😆
ok so as usal hats of too u u had just proved that again that u can write samrat feelings or anyone feeling really very gr8ly
gunji sammy mayank or nupur everyones feelings u have described gr8ly
ur update was mindblasting awesome fantastic fabulas fantabulas loved it to the core👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
hmm just try to continue it soon kuch aur bolna ki himath nahi hai mujhe mai ab im too emotinal right now
love yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa dolly muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh really love u
*hugs and kisses jaan*🤗
ur love
sana.😃
and one more thing jaan ur siggie is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee as usal 😉 ahem ahem aur kuch bolna ki zarurat hai kya madam bas plz try to continue it soon 🤗😳and one more thing thanx for the pm 😆ok ok danthna math as i know in friend no sorry no thanx but kuch batain zahir karna bahut zaruri hota hai right jaan 😊
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its awesomeeeeeeee dollyyyyy.. as usual..!! 😉
mindblowingggg..
u rockk yaar... u hv writing skills...
luved it to d core...
nw pllzzzzzz do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nyc!!! I really like it dolls! Plz do continue soon!! Can't wait to read more!!! (P.s, I could have told u all this without even reading it cause ur writing always blows me away)!
With lots of love,
Your friend,
Babydoll
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

Very nyc!!! I really like it dolls! Plz do continue soon!! Can't wait to read more!!! (P.s, I could have told u all this without even reading it cause ur writing always blows me away)!

With lots of love,
Your friend,
Babydoll

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww doll thanku soooo much lov u for this seriousle seriously lov u for this
thanks 4 being such a sweetheart doll
lov u doll
urs
doll😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolly18

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww doll thanku soooo much lov u for this seriousle seriously lov u for this

thanks 4 being such a sweetheart doll
lov u doll
urs
doll😳

Well, i was only saying what I sincerely felt doll! And I honestly cannot wait to read more!! Wow! Ur writing is just lyk MJHT! Totally addictive! U could very well become one of the CV's in MJHT! then MJHT would become even more fun!
Urs,
Babydoll😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ud dolly
loved it
cont soon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

Well, i was only saying what I sincerely felt doll! And I honestly cannot wait to read more!! Wow! Ur writing is just lyk MJHT! Totally addictive! U could very well become one of the CV's in MJHT! then MJHT would become even more fun!
Urs,
Babydoll😛

oki u r the 48the person to tell me that i'll be a good cv..
seriously doll if i became one it'll take me just few days to blast each n every chracter hee hee hee
thanku doll 4 being so generous nn mmm really really glad that u liked this one
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey bhagwaan !!! itne saare stories koi saath mein carry karta hai kya record holder??? aisa koi weirdo hi kar sakta hai !!!😆😆 sorry sorry just kidding.

jab bhi time mile tab hi baaki updates karna. koi jald baazi nahi hai. main wait kar lungi.

coming to the update.

how can u kill me by ur work everytime, literally??? iEk baar kaafi nahi hai kya???? it was totally mindblowing, haan its different ki as u said it is confusing but i m sure u will chumantarify tht confusion soon. I loved the 2 twin moron's convo. haay !!! hamare sayank kinne sone munde hai. hai na???? humein ek din zaroorar pagal banake hi chodenge.

u know, this story is a bit unique in itself. i cant explain how, but i feel its like this.

ab jaldi update kar dena. i m dieing to read the nxt part.

loads of love
vinu


n siggie is mindblowing. 😊
Edited by mjht_admirer - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana_sajan

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yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy dolly first to comment 🥳😆🤣
*EDITED*
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG dolly meri jaan u dedicated this to me simar and sush how sweet just want to run and want to give u a BIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG tight hug muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 🤗
seriously doly mera ankhain bhar ayi hai starting padh kar u dedicated it to me sana awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww no one did like this for me till now love u so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dolly for this i really want to just knee down in front of u and say i love u and u r my best friend in ever on this whole world 😭😭😭
ok ma bahut emotional moron ho gayi ho ok i want to say one thing i dont know the meaning of MORON sorry but apne aap ko bol rahi hoon 😳🤣
will edit soon about the update thoda nahi nahi bahut emotional ho gayi hoon.😊
*EDITED*about the update
WHEN THE DORKS MET THERE MORONS'''''''
ok title is superb loved it to the core
but as u said the update is really confusing hmm is sayank r twin bros and they r goen perform on a show right on going where sammy is late and the accident took place phew im right nah😆
ok so as usal hats of too u u had just proved that again that u can write samrat feelings or anyone feeling really very gr8ly
gunji sammy mayank or nupur everyones feelings to have described gr8ly
ur update was mindblasting awesome fantastic fabulas fantabulas loved it to the core👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
hmm just try to continue it soon kuch aur bolna ki himath nahi hai mujhe mai ab im too emotinal right now
love yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa dolly muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh really love u
*hugs and kisses jaan*🤗
ur love
sana.😃
and one more thing jaan ur siggie is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee as usal 😉 ahem ahem aur kuch bolna ki zarurat hai kya madam bas plz try to continue it soon 🤗😳and one more thing thanx for the pm 😆ok ok danthna math as i know in friend no sorry no thanx but kuch batain zahir karna bahut zaruri hota hai right jaan 😊

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sanu this is ur biggest reply ever yaar
thanks so much nn tu itni emotoinal kyun ho gayi
well yeh to hona hi tha u r my three special s's.. n u sanu r very special n cute n jauable n u know na that i lov u only......................................................................................
n well moron mean stupid n a cartoon in my dictionaryn n dorks mean boring n those abt whom everyone mak fun
n well i knew this one would be terribly confusing so so sorry abt that
whatever u guessed is right till now
n the last part the nupur one is that she n gunjan's friends r planning to give her a surprised birthday party nn somehow samrat is also ther hee hee hee
lov u sanu n well i think i'll update this one soon enough lols
loads n loads n loads nloads nloads of lov
actually a never ending lov ru
olly

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