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Posted: 15 years ago
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excellent work do write more.do pm me next time plsss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 OS..!!
kash aisa show mein bhi dikhate..!
do write more..!
plz PM me when you do..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys thanks for ur sweet comments. I am really overwhelmed by ur response even though its my first os. With that enthusiasm I am attempting another one again on mayur.

Sajanians I am sorry because I am die hard fan of mayur so please forgive me.

So here I go.....

cute kiss😳

Mayank and nupur are married and its already two months and mayank is assisting a professor after college hours. So he is not getting time to study after reaching home because he is getting tired as he is coming late, so he decided to wake up early in the morning and study and this was the routine from past 15 days and nupur wakes up at her regular timing and prepares breakfast and does all household work gets ready and after that mayank gets ready and they reach the college.

And as per routine mayank woke up early in the morning tapping the alarm clock beside him and gave a sweet peck to his wife on cheek who is sleeping peacefully with a smile playing on her lips. He too smiles seeing her like that. He gets up washes his face and sits with his books.

After some time nupur got up did all the work she has to do, done with preparing breakfast and now she went to bath. She locked the room from inside to which there is an attached bathroom. This was her routine even though daily her hubby scolds her for locking the door but she won't listen to him

Now here mayank is unable to understand something in notes and he decided to refer textbook and book was there in the room which nupur locked.

He went near the door and knocked several times but there is no response from other side.

M: nupur tum itni deir kya kar rahi ho''aur tum roj door kyu lock kar deti ho'.. mein tumhara pati hu koi ajnaabi nahi'''

N: aa rahi hoon mayank bas 5min'''. sabar karo''..

M: tum aise hi 5 min 5 min karke bolti ho magar ek ghanta lagathi ho bahar aane ke liye''.jaldi kholo nupur mera book andar hai aur mujhe late ho raha hai.

He was continuously knocking the door and trying to open it. Suddenly door opened and just then nupur also entered the room from wash room wearing a black and white innerwear (remember what she wore for seducing her hubby'.. tv incident'. I know u guys got it) with her hairs all wet and a towel around her neck trying to dry her hair.

Suddenly she was shocked to see mayank inside the room and also got tensed because she know that if mayank notices her in such attire then he wont let her go and makes her to stay in his tight embrace.

And what mayank spoke totally shocked her.😲

M: nupur itna deir kyun lagathi ho aur tum door kyun lock karthi ho kitni baar bola hai''..dekho ab mujhe late ho raha hai (he says in a very angry tone and he did not noticed nupur and moreover he went to his book shelf in search of his book)

N: mayank'''. tum andar kaise aa gaye''' (she spoke trying to deviate her thoughts thinking that as usual mayank is unromantic)

M: wo kya hai na tumhara pati thoda bohut strong hai so bas mein apna thoda energy waste karke open kardiya'''.tumhe koi problem hai kya'''

N: hhh'' nahi mujhe kaisi problem hogi

M: good'''.

Saying this he made his way to door and to her surprise he kept the books on the table which is just beside the door and locked the door and turned around with a naughty smile playing on his lips.

N: mayank''.. tumne door kyun lock kiya?'''..

M: kyun'. Tumhe nahi pata kya mein door kyun lock kiya''(he said taking steps towards her while she is moving back wards)

N: (while moving back and pointing her index finger towards him as if she is warning him) dekho mayank paas mat aana aur tum bahar jao mujhe change karna hai.

M: karona'.. tumhe change karne se kaun rokh raha hai'''tum change karo main yahi baittha hu''

N: ha ha ye joke tha kya?................par mujhe hasi nahi aayi aur mujhe chod dho aur ab bahar jao.

M: nupur shayad tumhe dikh nahi raha hai''..ab tak maine tumhe nahi pakda hai aur nahi kuch kiya hai''..magar abi pakadtha hu.

Saying this he came closer to her and grabbed her by her waist and pulled her closer to him and whispers in her ear

M: tumhe laga ki maine tumhe notice nahi kiya'''''. Hai na?........kissing her bear shoulder and droplets which were there on her neck line'.

N: ha'.☺️that's all she could say.

M: bhala itni beautiful, hot, sexy biwi ko apne aankho khe saamne rakh khar koi notice nahi karega kya?..........and he stares at her beautiful eyes and both were lost in each other eyes. And suddenly breaks the silence "sach me aaj tum bohut hi sundar lag rahi ho"

N: thank you my dear hubby''..

M: aise rukhe sukhe thank u se kaam nahi chalega''. Staring at her lips indicating what he wants indirectly '''''kuch mita ho jaye'..(ha ha I copied the dialougue)

N: tikhe'''''. She told shocking mayank. He thought that she will try to escape from his grip but she said ok and suddenly nupur kissed him on cheek breaking his thoughts.

M: ye kya tha?..............getting irritated

N: oh''' sorry mujhe laga ki tum kiss ki bath kar rahe ho isiliye'' tumhe sach me kuch mita chahiye kya''.. thode deir wait karo main kuch bana ke leke aathi hu ok?...

M: (in a romantic tone) not ok darling'' mein tho kiss ki hi bath kar raha tha magar ye wali nahi'''pati patni wali'''.you know'''.something like (whispering in her ear) French kiss'''what say?...

Now he is continuously staring at her lips and moving towards them

N: ma'.ya'nk''☺️dekho hume college ke liye late ho rahi he ab hum college ko chalthe ho aur ye bath shaam ko dekhenge tikhe'.

When he was about to kiss her there rang her phone which was in hall and she immediately came out of his tight embrace and ran towards hall to pick it. It was gunjan and she asked why she isn't in college yet and before nupur could answer anything she herself got the answer and reminded her sister that nupur and mayank's first class has been cancelled and she immediately cut the phone. Nupur turned around and mayank was nowhere and went again to her bedroom to find mayank sitting on the chair waiting for her.

N: tum yaha ho'. Mein tho tumhe bahar dundh rahi thi''college nahi jana hai kya?''now he moved closer to her and pulled her towards himself resting his hands around her waist.

M: mujhe kyun dundh rahi thi?.......(kissing her cheek) aisa wala mujhe kuch dena hai kya''. ''..after seeing her angry face again he spoke. Obviously nupur tum mujhe yaha chod kar gayi tho mein yahi rahunga na'.aur ha rahi bath college ki tho tumhari behen ne tumhe bataya hi hoga na ki aaj humara first hour cancel ho chukka hai''.kyun'bataya nahi kya'..moving her more closer and asking her for a kiss.

N: matlab tum apna rishwat lekar hi rahoge right?......

M: absolutely mrs. Sharma ab mujhe mera rishwath chahiye saying this he gave a small peck on her lips and saw her reaction😆☺️. She just laughed at her husband prank and hugged him tightly saying "I love u mayank" to which he replies sweetly "I love u too my sweet heart"

Ok guys it's very long I know but please do comment......atleast press like tab. Please.....



https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1358048/mayur-ff-love-at-first-sight-p18-pg47-updsep22nd this is my first ff. please do read those who havent read.

Edited by mayurg2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

main first aaa gayi......... yay.......

kya os tha......
i loved it.......
kash mjht mein bhi kucch aisa ho.......
do write more os......
thx for the pm.....
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
i loved ur oneshot and i am blushing like hell!

awesome!

loved it yaar!

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
it was a sweet and romantic 1...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Hi Dear
wow wow what an shot
it was amazing
beautiful
too good
very nice
Mayank was so naughty.
loved mayurs cute romance
Wonderful OS
plzzzzzzzzzzzz do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear absolutely loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hai mein mar jaanwa,.,,,

both the os were tooooooooooo goood..

1st one: loved it comppletely... mayank is so clever and naughty and romantic..

2nd one: awesome fantabulus...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
soooooooooooooooo romantic os
u made me blushing yaar
mayank was so naughty
loved it

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